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sweet light i love this series! i've read it 12 times and it never gets old!
insubordinate subordinates...
Wow. Lots of stuff happened in this one. And that end was very feelsy.
So it seems like half the cast of the entire show is planning to counter-troll Golden Bit..... never get between LyraBon, it is the most faithful ship in the fandom, you can't stop true love. I liked the scene with Octavia and Twilight, and I hope they do become friends more. Then of course there's the incredibly vague dream involving Nyx, Plain Sight having a case of the FEELS, and Spike and Twi having a mom/sis/brother/son moment...... yeah that was cute.
I swear this is like a drug, the more I read, the more I want to read, what are you doing to me!
On a side note, well done and nice sudden revealing of lyra as a princess, did not see that coming.
hehehe I've seen a lot of literary characters turned into ponies, but you sir I believe are the first who has done it to one of David Webers.
Good call going with Sister/Mom instead of Mom/Sister.... Mom/Sister could get shortened to 'Mister'.
You know, instead of Sistom.
Yeah, and I bet you go to ATM machines and enter in your PIN number.
thumbs up for the Harrington ref. did a double take when i reached that part lol.
Briar. Briar patch. Br'er Rabbit is a corruption of "Brother Rabbit." A briar patch is the thicket of thorns.
Wrabbit, why must you be so 'disturbingly vague' with Twilight's background still?
Curious to see what the kiddos are cooking up, Golden Bit is kinda a, well, fuck him. Don't need adjectives, just some nice explicitives to deal with his sorry ass. Glad to see Cadance moving against it as well.
Actual reactions:
... You didn't.
You did! Awesome!
That was great god I can't wait to see what the nobles are going to do to Golden Bit And why did you run away Plain Sight you could have finally got rid of all your pent up sexual frustration. Though I like the part of Spike walking that was so funny and realistic I WANT MOAR NOW! if it is alright with you
I never liked the idea that desire is in any way a failing. That phrase skirts a little too closely to saying there is something wrong with sex and sexuality.
Poor Spike, that's waaaaay awkward. Could've gone much worse though. He has actually been very reasonable so far.
Oh Golden Bit, your in a big sack of horseapples. No doubt he has got counters ready, and it will probably be way frustrating for a time, but he can't hold out forever. Hell, his own son won't back him, and in fact, publicly rejected GB's law.
Secretly hoping someone goes ballistic in the end. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
Not so secretly hoping Spitfire punches Golden in the dick. Until he rescinds the law. How would that be for an emergency house of lords meeting. He is trying to get repealed, while a wonderbolt keeps hitting him right in the sensitives the whole time. She trades off with the rest of the herd when she gets tired, each one gets their turn, then it passes to the elements, then the Princesses, then Lyra and Bons, and so forth.
I don't like Golden Bit very much.
and they shall be known as, The Fellowship of the Nobles. They shall fight the evil Golden Bit's rain of tyranny, and they shall come out of the fray victorious.
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Well, I did a search for stories that fit that, but came up empty for the most part. There was one R63 Blueblood story I saw, and it also had regular Blueblood as well. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
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Wow, that many times? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
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Think about it... //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png
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I guess this was a pretty full chapter, huh? Sure didn't feel like it when I was writing it.
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Well, Lauren Faust has said that her OTP was OctaScratch, if I recall correctly. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_shock.png //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_O_O.png
Also, you probably missed my reply to Leo Archon concerning nobility in this post: 2560460
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Mare fucking, eh? Well, plenty of that going on in my story, so I suppose it's appropos. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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Oooo... I sure hope so. I'd like to claim credit for something like that.
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Sistom. Why am I suddenly thinking of these guys?
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I think you meant to say this.
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I was hoping someone would get that.
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Can you tell it's been a while since I last read that story? Thanks. I'll fix that,
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He knows. He just hasn't figured out exactly what he meant.
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If I revealed it all at once, where would the mystery be? Here, see? Pinkie is just as upset as you are, and she's a world class detective! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Pinkie_Pie.png
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Plain Sight is a very, very messed up mare. Messed up and confused.
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Sexuality is a failing when a person is placed up on certain pedestals. Mothers often fall into that category, because almost no one wants to acknowledge that their mothers are sexual beings. It's not that people necessarily think that sex is wrong, but there are certain people whom we don't want to think of sexually.
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One can hope...
2628453 remind someone that their parents obviously like to fuck periodically and see how that works out for you ;)
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what can i say, it's just that good!
You are EPIC for your Honor Harrington ponification
I've recommended that series to everyone who i think is even remotely into reading awesome novels and i'm looking forward to the next books that David Weber is writing.
YOU ROCK
Crossover with David Weber's Honor Harrington series?
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Poor Spike! Yeah, I think that would be super awkward for him to deal with all that is going on.
Keep the good story coming!
with this chapter I can proclaim that one of my suspicions is correct (though I could have done it with a less "brick to the face" approach with that dream) until otherwise stated in story to be wrong.
still wondering how Celestia did it, but if this was Clue my current suspicion would be "Celestia, EoH (I love when these things gain lethal status), over the dragon city" (disregarding all other statements I made in previous chapters this being 4 in the morning)
on to Golden Bit and his train wreck: I await the villainious breakdown scene he deserves.
for our dear griffion: you stand on the edge of a knife, stray but a little and you will know only heart ache pinning for the mare you love
You got a little something caught in your words there.
Sliiiiide to the left~
Totally called Twi being a reincarnation of an old princess even though it was so blatantly obvious. So obvious. Totally worth it though!
I still want to know what else is going on with this law. Obviously, something was missed (and it if hurts the herd, you get to die. My proposal will be rescinded). As far as Spike goes, he should know better anyways. Don't slow down your sexy fun times for him, Twi! He's a useless shit anyways!
Also, you better get Plain and Twi some time alone together, damnit! Limnear can join too, but only if Plain is harem-ified.
(P.S. This is Peppy)
I feel sorry for Spike, having to walk around the house and find his Sister/Mom bucking every mare under the roof. And yet, at the same time, I consider him to be the luckiest SOB in Equestria!
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I am honestly surprised that there are that many Honor fans on this site. I may have to draw her ponification now... //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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With as few people that have commented on it, I may have been too subtle with the dream. Also, your advice to Limnear sounds familiar. I feel I should know that as a (mis)quote from somewhere. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png
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Peppy? Izzat you? I guess it is. No one else I know talks about Spike like that. I'll take care of those mistakes in a bit. And your guess is actually very, very very close. You just need to make the final leap. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
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It's a bit like being the son of a lesbian porn star, but with fewer STD's. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_ooh.png
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well... maybe these will jog your memory
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seriously though this is the scene,
(skip to 2:49) enjoy
Poor Spike, I feel bad for him... Living in the same house with four mares always in heat is not the same as walking in on your brother once.
was this a family guy reference
i just noticed something.
the law of golden bit makes it impossible for nobles to MARRY any none nobles
there is a law which forbids from marring more then one pony, that’s the reason Twilight & Co form a herd.
why does the law affect Twilight & Co then? shouldn't the fact that they forming a herd alone be enough to outmaneuver the law?
Commence read.
Spike is getting some acknowledgement from the, almost, herd.
Well damn, I never thought I'd see the day when Honor would emigrate. Here's hoping that Equestria treats her better than the Star Kingdom did. And she would also probably help Twilight out with the herd if needed since she has a small one herself! Ah, fun times and another fun chapter.
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Ah yes. That was it. Good ol' Galadriel. Love and despair, indeed.
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Well, they're not always in heat. I'm sure there's one or two days out of the month where they're okay.
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Not really. More like just a house music kinda riff.
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If you go back to the scene in chapter 9 where Twilight talks to Celestia, you'll see that herding is included in the bill.
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That's actually where I drew a lot of inspiration. A!MG is one of my top three manga/anime, ever.
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Well, I have to acknowledge the little guy's existence, if nothing else.
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I love that there are people in this fandom that know who she is.
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Yeah, I was surprised myself by how many others commented on the reference. Nice to see that people still know some good quality work, present company included of course. Also, if you need to come up with some more friendly nobles I think Miles Vorkosigan would gladly help out, although you'll be on your own in trying to ponify his name. I'm not very good at that.
Now I am off to read the new chapter that I noticed!
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okay, sorry, but that means Golden Bit is much smarter then i thought
to add something which hasn't been done for so long... damn that's something i have to respect
Ah, I remember the first mention of this other Heartstrings and just knew that shit was going to hit the fan with Lyra. Nice to see I can be right every now and again! Oh my gosh... you just made me REALLY want to read a story about Dash, Octy, and Vinyl. Whether it be like this herd idea or even like your first story in the TSW series. Poor Spike, walking in on that. Can't wait to see what goes on next.
~SolidFire
Somepony put something in the cocao i think
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Ya know, I'd actually like to see a ship involving Dashie, Tavi, and Scratchy, either as a group or one-on-one. Far too many of those involve Twilight, and the other Mane 6 members get left out too many times. And any ship that involves Dashie is fine by me; next to Twi and Lulu, she's my favorite pony.
Yeah Twilgiht's right, I mean why did you walk in on a mare on the toilet.
If it helps, all of the Leviathan Counsel would've gladly assisted.