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*finish reading three new chapters after a long absence of updates*
*this updates*
This day is turning out to be a fine day.
Nice... Not much else to say it was nice but it could have done with a bit more build up and tension and not having the problem with AJ solved in one chapter.
Is it weird that Golden Bit seems to be in a near-coma and I still don't trust him.
'They' probably refers to Twilight and her herd.
Just sayin'
Edit: ...and this chapter puts the final nail in the coffin for Luna and Flutters *sadface*
Hm, didn't see that coming. Seems a little too sudden if you ask me, something else is at work here. Something dark.
I think this was my favourite part of the chapter XD
Watch out Rainbow Dash, your marefriends are plotting!
(Though I totally agree with Shy of course)
3095731 I don't think so, mostly because I felt the same. I actually thought, what if that is just a trick and he attacks BB now?
Good
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Well, true, we don't know what EXACTLY happened, but even with something like treason, the authorities would be willing to cut a bargain if it nabs them a bigger fish.
Anyway, NEXT CHAPTER AHOY! Fuck Golden Bit
Soooooo is Rainbow Dash gonna be the one to carry the foal, I always figured Pinkie or Fluttershy would actually look forward to that more.
Also Wrabbit please tell me that a Pinkie baby and Flutter baby are in the works..... the Children of the TwiHarem need some competition, taking over Equestria with their OPness is no fun without worthy adversaries and who better than the offspring of the other two Upper-tier Mane 6 in terms is being OP (Fluttershy and Pinkie)
I wonder how Blueblood will feel when/if he finds out the "stress" GB has been under was due to the horrible atrocities he committed. Guessing he saw Backtalk fall to his dooooom, considering the timing.
Also, muttering "they" will get me. Can't tell if nuts or read the stories comments.
Seems kind of odd, Flutters and Pinkie say "Twilight didn't mean it like that" to RD saying Twilight said that RD's parents didn't conceive her, despite Twilight not saying that at all. RD being upset, and taking what Twi said makes sense, but you would think PP or FS would have pointed out that Twilight did not say her parents did not conceive her, just that there was a bit of a supernatural addition.
Right. I love this trilogy. Probably one of the greats in terms of an interesting arc and consistent plot progression
(You should feel a 'but' coming)
but, Princess Twilight just took on a very Mary Sue feel. Now one bad apple doesn't spoil the bunch, but it makes the anticipation of the others dwindle. .maybe it's the whole 'Oh, only she can save the world' thing. I would be fine with it if you hadn't introduced other immortals, but you did. Then you explained them away with an 'iunno'.
Keep it up man, keep it up. Can't wait to see where this ends up.
Ah, the Duke. Kind of disappointing how he just sorta fell apart on his own like that, I expected someone to wind up assassinating or arresting his pompous ass. But, in the words of Alucard from Hellsing Abridged:
"Pussed out like a BITCH!"
Yeah, Sptfire is home, well and save!
Does anyone else think Golden Bit has been given a drug of some sorts? Would explain why's he's breaking down this rapidly
That was Great chapter I'm kind of glad he went crazy on his own or did he? I think it has something to do with the promise Twilight made with the dragon Or Luna went into his dreams I could see her do that just because she does like Twilight and her friends especially she did hint that she did love Fluttershy to a point. Can't wait to see what research Twilight does with Spitfire I'm looking forward to seeing your take on how Equestria was made to become such a superpower in the world I also want to see Pinkie, Fluttershy, and Rainbow Dash have kids I think Twilight's kids will need some playmates I WANT MOAR SOON If that is alright with you
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Welcome back.
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The problems of two background character don't amount to a hill of beans in this crazy story. In other words; I didn't want to spend a lot of time on something that won't end up having much impact on the story overall.
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That's a common reaction. You're perfectly fine.
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Actually, that particular nail had been hammered home some time ago.
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It probably seems sudden because we're entering the final stretch of the story, and I don't like leaving loose ends... overmuch.
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You can be sure that any foal of theirs would be adored and have a lot to live up to.
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It'd be pretty hard to fool a professional into thinking you're actually "toys in the attic".
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Thank you kindly.
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It's a safe bet that upon Fluttershy laying eyes on Sunny, she started thinking along those lines herself.
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Yes.
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Hmm... Perhaps I didn't make the reasoning for her fighting alone clear. At the time, Celestia was at least as powerful, if not more so than Princess Twilight, but was left out of the fight because since she controls the sun, life-bringer to the world, she was too important to lose. Luna was too young to be of much help, and of the other immortals, they were either noncombatants, or not interested in fighting. What it came down to, was that she was the right being, at the right time, in the right place. I'll try to go into more detail about that later on.
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How does "trapped in his own nightmare world of his own making", grab you?
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It wasn't as rapid as you might be thinking. He actually began falling apart sometime near the beginning of this story.
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Oh, there will be more foals. ::leans forward menacingly:: There will be...
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I edited that in, then I was gonna edit it back out and I forgot
3098856 I know that it'd be pretty hard. But there was still that suspicion. I doubt I could ever trust Golden Bit, no matter what you did.
“Wait, what?” is one of my favorite sayings, its practically my battle cry in D&D games.
Well I did guess it but I'm wrong all at once as well. THAT MEANS YOU WIN. YEEEAAAHHH. But on a more serious note, thanks for keeping me on my toes.
3098856 I can understand where your coming from but I still feel like you missed a chance to build up some tension.
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Hrm....I suppose I can deal with that. I suppose the issue I have with it is that he showed no sign of going particularly insane, he just showed signs of becoming very....focused, and vengeful. It just seems like such an odd event for him to just fall to pieces so suddenly with the vaguest of build-up to it.
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If by 'weird' you mean wise... then yes, extremely 'weird'.
The expert Is twilight. I'm calling this all in. *pushes poker chips forward*
Well it's nice to see all of that Princess Twilight nonsense finally explained. That is essentially exactly what I was thinking was the case, but I was too much of a wuss to put down my prediction in a comment. AJ kind of flipped dick a bit there. I get that it would be a lot to take in, but that was overreacting in my opinion.
That was funny. At least Dash's reason for leaving the conversation was more... a misunderstanding and easily resolved. But AJ... she flips out the most and calms down the quickest with the least persuasion. That doesn't quite sound right. I think that one thing I would have liked to see when Spitfire got off the train was one of the others' reactions to her appearance. What kind of scaring did she have, if any, and the stitches in her face? Bruising? Visual aids to paint the picture in the mind of the reader.
~SolidFire
Commence read.
Glad that those conversations didn't turn as hectic as they could have been.
3894194 Inquiry:
LOL
I don't know if I've mentioned this before, but I've used a couple of your ideas for Blueblood in one of my own fics.
First was the fact that I decided to redeem him. He still tends to be a ponce, but a fair amount of that is show. The second was that I 'borrowed' your Twilight's nickname for him, as well as the fact that they were foalhood friends.
I did give you credit for that in an Author's Note, but I'm not sure if you've read the stories or not, so here's a further heads-up of sorts.
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Neat! I think I'll check it out!
Er, which one was it?
I like this Blueblood.
And points to Bartender! Good job.
Now, to see how all these bits and peices slowly fit together within these next few chapters.