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>“Ooo! It can be Sweetheart Hug Tiem now?"
Ya know what? I'm gonna assume Pinkie actually said it this way
And yes the Bachelorette party was awesome.
Shy's dancing.....
Joy of joys! An update!
Also, and I can't believe I'm typing this, FIRST!
Ready the shotguns, best men. Wes about to put us on a wedding.
Italics in the dream sequence crap out halfway through.
A bachelorette party with the mane 6, the Twi Hermates, and the three princesses...... MY BODY COULD NEVER BE READY!!!!!
...and it wasn't. Between Fluttershy practically doing a mating display and Celestia having to use her magic to stop Twi's Harem from siring another foal, and Cadance starting up never have I ever (I'm just gonna assume Trixie and Cheerilee didn't have alcohol) this was a fun and crazy party.
As for the more serious stuff we have Golden Bit hopefully coming to accept that his plan has failed and will never succeed, and a surprisingly nice conversation between Shining and Plain Sight, I actually liked the way they played off each other and how their love for Twilight differs and is reflected in how they handle protecting her.
Now lets get to the part that's probably most important, this continuing vague darker element we continuously get hints of. First we see that Luna and Fluttershy aren't really "together" (thank goodness), but still as much as I don't like LunaShy I still don't see why Luna can't be with her. She keeps hinting that's there's this thing that's gonna happen someday and it's not gonna be pretty, so it's more than just the typical problems that come from a royal immortal marrying a regular pony. Then there's that saying Celestia says that Luna and Cadance just repeat, like it's some secret alicorn code and makes me think of the ending of Evangelion. Finally, we have Twi's nightmare where we seem to finally see how her past self (and a bunch of children) died..... by being barbequed by a horde of dragons. Well now we see why Celestia nuked that one place.
With the herding ceremony finally upon us we re left with questions: What will Golden Bit do? What is Blueblood and all those other nobles and Cadance gonna do to royal cockblock him? Is Celestia secretly SEELE? Will Shining Armor shed some liquid pride at the ceremony? Possibly some, or maybe none but a bunch of different questions will be answered next time so tune in folks, it's gonna be a ride. (...... patiently awaiting the birth of those babies, I think I might be looking more forward to Cheerilee and Trixie's babies than the royal baby)
Somewhat glad it didn't turn into an orgy. Nothing against it on principle, it's just not something I wanted to see considering who all was involved. Bachelorette party was fairly believable, though I'm admittedly surprised they didn't hire a stripper (I suppose Fluttershy's dancing counts).
Its all I could think of with that line.
I thinking "not a speck of hay was" the intention.
Sweetheart Hug Time?
Linkage Failure
Italics Continuity Failure
Just a few small things I noticed, they didn't really distract from the story but I know how I feel when stuff like this slips by me.
And it looks like fun times were had by all. Although I foresee a large number of hangovers during the ceremony, which I am sure will help lead to the inevitably foreshadowed FIRESTORM which will be erupting soon.
And I am so looking forward to her losing control. May she do something very...interesting... to Golden Bit when he shows up.
And is it just me, or are you actually quoting Transformers movie? Fond memories if so!
Can hardly wait for more.
Someone needs to animate Fluttershy dancing to that song. Awesome party. And now onto the main event!
this, just, this, i aplaud you sir,
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If we are right, I think this one is a bit more appropriate.
Just my opinion though.
Edit: forgot to mention the reference is at 1:35, just in case people don't want to view the whole thing.
There's an extra bracket here that breaks the url.
Man after re-reading this I have to really feel bad for poor Fluttershy. The girl is practically a sex goddess that turned this bachelorette party into a pool party..... and she's stuck with Luna who won't even be with her because of mysterious alicorn princess problems. Maybe Dash and Pinkie could let her in on their fun.
When she hears about the things she did the previous night "i'm so embarassed"
When she finds out the video of it you posted on youtube went viral "HOW DARE YOU"
I'm going to assume that pony biology prevents any issues due to overindulgence in alcohol while pregnant.
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She did! She totally did!
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Missed it by that much.
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No shotguns needed. You can bet that nopony here will be getting cold hooves.
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Thanks. I'll fix that now.
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Did you watch the video that goes with Fluttershy's mating dance? I totally didn't rip it off!
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Yeah, an orgy with those characters in this story is pretty much not gonna happen.
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Well, to be fair, it is meant to invoke that feeling, so mission accomplished!
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Thanks for catching those. They're all fixed now. And yes, I am quoting Transformers. Like Monty Python, the original animated movie was just too good and full of win to not quote now and then.
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Someone needs to take that original video and replace the women in it with ponies!
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It is.
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Tankyew.
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Fixed. Thank you kindly.
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::whistles innocently: :
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Hee hee. Good thing none of them had a video camera. Recording crystals, on the other hoof...
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They only had a mug of hard cider between them. The rest of the night, they drank only juice. They're not that irresponsible.
wait, were Cheeri and Trixie drinking? That's not good
2659349 That song was better when it was "Ground Zero."
Bush worked hard to make that song bad.
IN FACT, let's just toss that in here for shits and giggles.
2659606 I could see it happening between the mane six and Twilight's herd. It was more the inclusion of Celestia, Luna, and Cadence that threw me off.
2659606 I very much agree with you good sir / madam.
we appreciate the lengths you go too to make our reading enjoyable!
2659606 You know that me and my other friend who love your stories are now expecting to see some PinkieDash/Flutterstripper fun times in the future now right
2659606 dammit!!! that first song i heard from that party i couldn't get it out of my head so i had to get it off iTunes
aahhh Twilight, don't ever change
I... uh... bwah? pppppffffffttttt <-- this was my brain, failing to accept the information for a full ten seconds. Congrats
I will not accept a heel face turn from Golden Bit! He deserves to go down in flames!
Shining Armor and Plain Sight really don't like each other huh? Wonder what Shining would think if he heard what Plain Sight told Cadence all those chapters back? Probably feel like a total ass.
There are never enough people who ship Fluttershy and Luna (though Twi Luna is better IMO; doesn't beat this herd though)
"Till all are one" huh? Well I know what that means for them
And now I have a fairly good idea on how Twi (sorry, I mean "Magic" [kinda disturbing if you think about it]) died in the past; perhaps that was enough of a reason for Celestia's actions against the dragons? Maybe not. We will see (man, I think I'm gonna have to go back and reread the previous acts and chapters to refresh my mind)
I am sorry, i just couldn't resist.
Anyway, another great chapter.
Since everyone is mentioning the party, I shall take it upon myself to mention the dream. What can only be guessed as the death / memory of the mysterious pony that Twilight has been hinted at being the reincarnation / rebirth of.
Mucho sadface for still having NO fucking clue what is going on with that stuff. You've dropped puzzle pieces, except each piece are parts of different puzzles, those puzzles are 5,000 piece ones, and we only have about a half dozen pieces.
I can have miss understood the rules of the game but shouldn't Cadance also have taken a drink here;
'
Applejack raised her mug and said, “Ah never done it with a stallion afore.”
Unsurprisingly, Celestia and Luna took a drink, but Dash Surprised everypony there by also taking one. She looked at her staring friends and said, “What? It was years ago.”
'
...or had she never had sex with Shining Armor? but again I may have misunderstood the rules. Good chapter again and as usually I'm looking forward to see what happens and what Golden Bit is going to do as I don't think, despite the little heart he showed, that he is just going to watch all his planes just slip through his hooves.
That... Was... HILARIOUS!
Man, I can't wait for more.
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That's... not an inaccurate analogy to the puzzle bits. It's also kinda funny, but that may be the slight insanity (and early-morningness) talking.
Lunashy, make it happen! If that's okay with you, that is.
One more piece of the puzzle, falling into place. Something that Twilight isn't going to like, and that will happen after her death. Now we have a chant of "Till all are one', and the reason why Luna can't be with Fluttershy. Not only that, but -
My previous guess was 'Twilight becoming an alicorn', and I'm thinking I'm still right. But this seems less to be normal Twilicorn, but rather to make an alicorn, you need to combine ponies (Specifically those that bear the elements). There's a story that's doing that as well, and was how Celestia/Cadance/Luna came to be, but for the life of me I can't remember the name.
YOU TEASE! Y U NO TELL US WAT HAPPEN?
As per every update: Fuck Golden Bit. This time with a halberd.
Twilight totally almost got it on in front of her second mommy. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png
The mortification is strong with this one. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
So Luna and Flutters, is it just the new law, or something else?
What did Rainbow do a couple days ago?//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
I wonder how long it will take Golden Ball to consider the fact that a Herd, by it's very nature, is open ended, unlike a conventional Marriage. There should be no reason why another member could not be brought in, and with four mares and no stallion's in this herd it would be in his nature to assume they would sooner or later want a Stallion, no matter what sort of kinky stuff Twilight is getting up to.
Have to confess that if done right I'd not mind seeing a sequel built around the idea of a stallion being added to their herd.
Also a fan of transformation/transgender stories, so would not at all mind if a magical accident turned one of the mares into a stallion, and it was not easily reversible. Again, it would have to have a sequel built around the concept to do it justice.
That was a great chapter Till all are one that scares me, I want Luna and Fluttershy to hook up for reals. I can't wait to see Golden Bits when he is proved that it is legal on what Twi and the rest are doing. I WANT MOAR NOW! If that is alright with you
As if from rote, Luna and Cadance echoed her. “'Till all are one.”
And then, at the very moment, optimas prime crashed threw the front door of fluttershy's cottage. scaring all of the occupants inside the small dwelling. he slowly put on his sunglasses and screamed
"YEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH"
before jumping on princess celestias back and flying away into the dawm.
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You just reminded me of Linkara's review of the Doom comic. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Pinkie_Pie_lolface.png And no, they only had one mug of hard cider between them. The rest of the night was just juice. I really need to put that in the story...
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Well, we all have our off days... records... whatever.
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With what I have planned for the alicorns and the mane6, yeah. That's not gonna work. This isn't that kind of story. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
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Indubitably, Sir/Madam.
...
::whispers:: I'm a sir, by the way. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy.png
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I appreciate your appreciation. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_Scratch.png
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Flutterstripper. I think that's right up there with Futashy for sheer awesomness. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_dayum.png
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You're welcome!
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I'm glad Twilight's line amused someone enough to comment upon it. Also, don't worry about Golden Bit. Just because he doesn't hate or disown his son, he won't be giving up. He's multifaceted like that. Also, also, everyone keeps forgetting that Celestia didn't go all out on the dragon nation (at least, not over this matter), but against Nyx's place. I think people keep getting my story confused with another about a badflank Celestia versus the dragon nation.
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Seeing as Weird Al is awesome, you are forgiven. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Derpy_dealwithit.png
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He was just making sure that nopony slipped under the net.
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Don't worry. There's some BIG puzzle pieces coming. Also:
i38.photobucket.com/albums/e132/whiterabbit75/1175697820874-1_zps62117b16.jpg
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My mistake. Cadance should have partaken then as well. I'll fix that.
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Thank you kindly.
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Nope. Not happening. It would make things later on down the road far too complicated.
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Oh, you're good. Not quite there, but almost. Also, if you do find the name of that fic, let me know, please? It sounds like something I'd like to read. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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Regarding Luna and Fluttershy, I can tell you that it has absolutely nothing to do with the law. Regarding Rainbow Dash, Did you forget about what she and Pinkie-Pie were talking about back in chapter 8? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Pinkie_Pie_lolface.png //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png
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Once he finds out that they are herding instead of marrying, it will occur to him rather quickly. And I hate to disappoint you, but there will be no stallion in this herd. That's one definite that's written in stone for me. As for the transformation thing, it's a cool idea, but will have to wait for another story.
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Sadly, Lunashy isn't going to happen, and never was. It's just not in the cards this time around.
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That... would be awesome. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cloudchaser_dealwithit.png
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yeah, two things about that though:
1. that line was quickly overshadowed by the other line (as funny as they were, Luna's takes precedence in other people's minds; so sad)
2. The fact that Celestia has destroyed a city of dragons gets the "free upgrade in badassary" because, well, I don't know really. She just does My only problem is that this verse is starting to fragment in my head because I'm reading 8 or 9 stories at the same time, something is bound to get jumbled by now
...I can deal with his multifaceted nature. Just saying though
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Come now, it can't be more complicated than Twilight's love life.
Thinking about it now, though, that line seems omnious. The only way for "all to be one" is if creation goes back to the Creator, which only happens when the Scions fail to complete the creation's perfection, cause when they don't fail, all who ever were (and wish to do so) shall instead return to live in the completed world forever, and the concept of time and death shall fade in eternal bliss and hapiness that no mortal could truly understand until the moment is there. And Celestia and Luna, they shall know love at last.
Aaaaand that's not the world-building you're going for at all, is it? Sorry, sorry, personal headcanon moment. Don't mind me. I'll just quietly take my leave now.
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yeah, can I get that story's name please? Sounds depressingly awesome
2661413 I have no idea what happened here but I laughed
Commence read.
Ha.
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I had to do a bit of searching (100 pages of favorited stories, damn 'Bad Gateways') but I found it.
The Mystic and The Mundane by Equus Pallidus 187 Upvotes, 12 Downvotes
Sad, Adventure
In the aftermath of the Changeling invasion, Twilight Sparkle realized the great (and, in retrospect, obvious) flaw of the Elements of Harmony - They may well be Equestria's greatest weapon against evil in the right hooves, but the artifacts themselves are vulnerable.
But what if the power of the Elements could be summoned without the jeweled necklaces, without the tiara? Working off little more then cryptic hints from her mentor, Twilight embarked on a mission, plumbing the depths of the royal archives to rediscover an ancient ritual, one which could concentrate the Elements within their living vessels...a ritual she has finally found.
What's the worst that can happen?
Great story, one I do recommend.
Ready for liftoff, Twilight? *Nods in assent*
Oopsie, missing that space.
Pastel is not a color
I won't even forgive this for Pinkie
How rude! You didn't even tell us what he shocked!
Wat
Little did you know, but Dash is Rainbow's middle name.
Eh, was not a fan of the drinking game, but whatever. Rest was good.
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I can certainly sympathize with you about the multiple stories thing. I've read so many, that all of Aegis Shield's stories kinda blended together on me, when I tried to describe one, and I ended up wandering into a different one entirely!
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Trust me> It's one complication that neither of them will want.
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Well, that's a positive reaction, I suppose.
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Hey, I know it would make me worried...
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Thank you for that. It's now in my Read Later pile, and will likely be the next one I pick up.
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I knew I could count on you to tear my story apart, Peppy. Are you a tenth degree Grammar Nazi? I've only reached 8th, myself (actually looking up words in the dictionary to make sure they're spelled right when I make posts on forums, and comment on stories).
That being said, I'm gonna have to stand firm on Pinkie's use of tiem. I could totally see it happening. I'm also leaving pastel as is, since it can also indicate having a soft, subdued shade. If you can come up with something better, I'm open to suggestions. As for the rest, all fixed. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
2664170 Pastel is meant to be used in conjunction with other colors, which you did not do. 'Soft, subdued shade' is the vaguest bullshit I've ever read
....
Fix it.
And one cannot say 'tiem' without sounding like a moron. Tiem is not a word. Team is, but tiem is not. You might as well spell it tai-em just to further irk me. I'm fine with comedy and Pinkie being Pinkie, but this is retarded.
2664170 Same here. If you can sense capitalization...there be trouble...
how is it possible for this story to be getting better and better with each chapter? OH I KNOW...an AWESOME author
'Til all are one.'? This series isn't gonna end like NGE, with everyone turning into orange goop, is it? Fuck no.
I'm sure you're being bombarded with so many different types of Transformer youtube vids. But how can you forget the best one!!!?
TILL ALL ARE ONE!
Anyway, this was the funniest chapter yet, that bachelorette party, I will never unsee any of it, and I don't want to! Ha HA!
Anyway damn you and your constant foreshadowing/events of the past/possible alternate worlds glimpses! This better not be the total end, or if it is, it better be an EPIC end!
- Sincerely Michael Ravencroft
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Really? 'Cause I copied that definition from the dictionary. But, just to clear up any misunderstandings for my readers, I adjusted the wording some. However, tiem is here to stay. Get used to it. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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Aw, thanks.
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Gah! I hope someone shoots me before I ever get that pretentious. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_hmph.png
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That's a great song, but I like the visuals this one provides: