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So many things that can go wrong now... But also, so may things that can go right.
Go right!
I wonder if the OCs shouldn't have their own 'behind the scenes' style story, covering the background work of running a protective detail on Twilight's herd, and keep main story appearances for when their activities are actually noticeable to the main cast?
As a rabid PinkieDasher this chapter pleases me
Man, the stuff with Nyx, the arcaneficarum and Twi is throwing me.
I mean it kind of sounds like maybe Nyx and Past Twi were a "thing", but I was so sure that Past Twi and Celestia were a thing...
Has Twi just always had a harem in all her lives?
Is this some kind of special talent infused with her soul? Being irresistable?
Well I'm expecting Twi's first baby to be an alicorn... just not one with extra equipment. Still interested to see where this goes next, we still have the whole "Golden Bit" plot, Spike is about to leave to be with his mom for a while, Pinkie and Dash gotta find their four-way, and Celestia, Luna, and all the other OP OCs continue to be extremely vague about Twi's mysterious past.
wtf what dose this mean
So one thing I've been wondering is are we going by human or horses pregnancy cycles? Because for humans it's 9 months, but for horses it's like 11 months.
This is the only fic I've read that updates weekly, thank you for that by the way. I'm not sure I could take waiting a month+ for an update each time for this fic, well done.
I wanna let Spitfire have one night with Rainbow Dash but I also don't want SPitfire to betray Twilight's trust, dood.
WHERE IS THE HAPPY MEDIUM, DOOD? Celestia has some interesting dreams, by the by.
Vultures? Just what is running through that brilliant mind of yours? It sounds to me like the bearers are part of some sort of ritual once they die. A ritual that will do tremendous good for the world, at some terrible cost to the bearers.
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Medication need not be taken orally.
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Happens to the best of us.
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Indeed.
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It's Twilight. It' happens (not that she notices).
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Sorry I didn't answer this earlier, but I hope you take comfort in the fact that you helped inspire me for part of this chapter.
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I hope this answers the question.
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Dusk Shine is bit too... male for a filly. Not sure if Lilith falls into the pony naming convention (since it's a human name), or is even appropriate for a daughter of Twilight's.
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Well, nobody wants the wrong thing to happen.
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A nice idea, but not sure my muse could handle having her attention split like that. I may end up not writing either if she gets into that habit.
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This comment pleases me. So much confusion...
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Do they really feel OP to you? I've tried to downplay their abilities and showcase what Twilight can do.
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I'll need some sort of reference point to answer that. There's too much going on to answer something so vague. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
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Horsies. I think it lasts like 10 months or something. I have to check. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_chair.png
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There is none. Dash will just have to settle for having the kinkiest marefirend this side of a $2 garden hose.
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::whistles innocently:: //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Discord.png
Maybe you should name your muse something ridiculous, like "white-guy-who-fills-in-black/american-on-SATs"
Then you could stand up and yell, "CURSE YOU, WHITE-GUY-WHO-FILLS-IN-BLACK/AFRICANAMERICAN-ON-SATs!!!!!"
2488715 Well I just call them OP, because it's shorter than "Fellow Immortals", fact is they're old, and they're powerful, and are implied to be almost as powerful as Celestia and Luna are (I say almost since apparently Celestia still razed Nyx and Onyx's city to the ground and sort of banished them it seems), but yeah I like you're OCs just fine, despite what my nickname suggests
This....this......WTF did I just read....? I was enjoying this because of harem storyline, drama, action, and clop, but now this, what kind of ancient, prophetic, crap have you set in motion Wrabbit!?
Hmmm... Lets play a game of WILD THEORY!!
That last part,
Something is going to occur after Twilight dies. Something both of them want to happen, but Twilight could be upset to learn about.
Twilight's accession in the show has been depicted before as Twilight dying, and being resurrected in an ascended form. Twilight would then live on after her lovers had passed on.
So, are they expecting Twilight to ascend after her death, and they're not telling her to avoid her fretting about it. To just have a normal, happy life?
That's my wild theory!
I'm really hoping some clarity makes its way into the light sometime soon over this whole 'past 'Magic'' versus Twilight. You added in even more, what with the arcanf-something, and its reaction to Twilight, thinking her to be its creator, at least being my guess. Plus, the exchange between Tia and Luna. And the bit about 'waiting for Twilight to die'. I thought you were inferring that Twilight wouldn't die, as she was a reincarnation of a past alicorn/immortal? Or would Twilight, as she is now, be drastically changed by whatever may be coming up in the future?
Misdirection is all fine and dandy, but please don't drag it on for too long, at least for the reader's side. Too much longer and it's going to become an annoyance, rather than an aid to the story/plot.
All I really gotta say on that, still a pretty good story, and you've got a knack for writing.
now what are those two up to? and why are they waiting for twilight to die!?
Well now. That last little tidbit was a big ol' heap of mystery wrapped in a blanket of questions and sprinkled with curiosity. I love how this story keeps me guessing.
Haha, oh geez, that dream sequence. I was just about to competely lose it over baby Futalestia when Luna interrupted. Nightmare indeed, I wasn't prepared for that.
Wait, What's wrong with Celestia? I'm confused.
This...is getting interesting
um iminterestedhurryupandmakethenextchapterplease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wat.
WAT.
WAAAAAAAAT?
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STAHP TEASIN MEH BRAH!
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Joking aside, I kind of agree with Varanus. All things considered, having Twi and Plain Sight hook up now just wouldn't feel right.
LimSight OTP -3-
Oh. One moooooore thing~
Dash. You dirty DIRTY girl! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire.png
My facial expressions when Cheerlies kid was being born:
There are the hints from Nyx that Twilight is the Element of Magic (and not just its bearer) and some other odd stuff.
Celestia's and Luna's dialog imply that whatever Twilight is will not bring her happiness (why else do they want to let her experience motherhood, happiness and joy instead of telling her right now).
Hmmmm...
Stormclouds on the horizon. An ill wind blows and St. Elmo's fire is dancing atop the masts...
That was a great chapter But really Celestia having the Criminals protect Twi and party are they sure that is wise All I have to say is I still think that there is bad war on the horizon and I think it will be leaning toward a civil war Now I would like to here more of Twilight's past lives now it seems she is irresistible in all of them what a curse or blessing. I WANT MOAR If that is alright by you
(P.S. Give Plain Sight a night with Twilight she needs it!!!!)
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I'm afraid that if I did that, she'd never speak to me again.
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Well, that's a relief; especially considering that this update was mostly background stuff.
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You like? I've been building up to it since the first book.
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It's a good theory. Needs some tweaking, though. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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I hope you'll forgive me if I drag this out for a bit longer.
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Have to wait and see.
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Enjoy it while it lasts. The ride will eventually end.
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Heh. Futalestia. I like it.
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What confused you? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia.png
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Thank you kindly.
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Did you miss the final chapter of the last book? It was pretty plain there. And yes, Dash is a very dirty girl.
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How did spellcheck miss that second one? While a tor isn't entirely accurate, it is evocative of the shape. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Also, Onyx is probably of the third or fourth smallest breed of dragons. Finally, I hope I can live up to your expectations with Blueblood.
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Yes! Another facehoof for my collection! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Derpy_dealwithit.png
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Sometimes seeing the storm coming doesn't let you prepare for it.
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A war? I suppose it does seem that way, doesn't it? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
Son of a bitch, thats annoying! I want the Noble's to get there way with the whole marriage thing, just because I knew there would be sadness, anger and anguish, but then of course Twilight would fix it and it would be a brilliant happy moment. I love it when stories do that. But this new "thing" that Celestia and Luna speak of just sounds like it will ruin Twilight's life and also sounds like it cannot be avoided. Oh please, for the love of ponies, can there be some light shed by Celestia!
Ok, now I have this little crazy theory that really, Twilight is a piece of Celestia's power. During Celestia's using of the elements of harmony to trap Nightmare Moon, the powers of Harmony proved to great for Celestia to be tied to. After NM was trapped, Celestia sealed the element of magic into a piece of her soul which she then kept within a pocket dimension until the right time (this also explains why the element of magic was missing). close to 980+ years later, Celestia gifted an unborn foal with the piece of her soul so that when the time came, said foal would be able to release the element of magic tied to Celestia's soul within the foal, thus allowing the elements to be reunited to free Luna from NM's grip. However, now that the element of magic has been released and is no longer tied to the fragment of Celestia's soul, that fragment becomes unstable within the foreign body. Of course, this foal was Twilight. Now, the piece of soul is becoming more and more unstable within Twilight, and will soon rip itself from Twilight soul and return to Celestia. Leaving Twilight soul damaged and no longer being tied with Celestia's soul, Twilight will lose some if not all of her magical abilities, wreak havoc on her life force and will no longer be tied with the elements of harmony. This leaves the elements uncompleted once again and opening Equestria to threat of attack. To prevent this, Celestia must reclaim her soul, but also take Twilight's into herself so she can have the completed soul composition which the element is tied to. This will allow Celestia to wield the element of magic should Equestria come under threat, but leave Twilight an empty husk unable to have emotions, wield magic or love.
I saw something about one one in there somewhere, but i accidentally refreshed the page and lost. just fix that wherever it is.
Otherwise, fun stuff! For a second I was like, HOLY SHITBALLS, BATMAN! THAT TIME SKIP! And squeed a bit at the futa filly. That needs to be a thing for Cheer's baby.
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Why is Celestia freaking out over the baby looking just like her? And why does the fact that it's got a dick make her upset?
Ah Ha! I was thinking last chapter that it had been awhile since the other Mane 6 had really been around, and low and behold, here we get 3 of them. Well played good sir.
Commence read.
When will she be ready is the question? What she will have to do is the more troublesome part.
2490714 Hells yeah I like! My fave pony with a harem of hot mares, involved in some kind of - I don't know what! Bravo good sir and or madam, continue you on!
On one half,
in
Whoops Dashie, it's not very nice to call out another mare's name in bed...sixteen times. Guess that crush never went away. I will admit though, when these stories first started, my thinking was very similar to Dash's. I wanted Spitfire to hook up with Twi and the pair to have a fling with DashiePie.
I've always liked Flitter & Cloudchaser since reading TAW's "It Doesn't Count". If you haven't read it, take some time to give it a look. It's a very good one-shot.
I'm afraid you didn't get me with the birth scene. I knew you wouldn't do a time skip that major before they've even had their herding ceremony.
That scene with Luna & Celestia at the end...wow. That was really emotionally powerful and even brought a bit of a tear to my eye. Very well done.
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My point with the tor is that in and of itself it doesn't describe a shape. Tors come in all different shapes and sizes (This is the curse of having too many geologist friends).
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All of these are tors. The only thing that changes the shape is how the bedrock is aligned before soil erosion exposes it.
I also want to see Plain Sight get a shot with Twilight, but it wouldn't feel natural for her to just come out to Twi with her feelings. Thankfully we have such wonderful meddling princesses to help things along one of which has a very close relationship and this is right in her wheelhouse.
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That would make for a fantastic story. I gotta write that sometime. Or suggest it to Varanus. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png Oh, and sorry, but you're still off with your theory.
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I knew that would make your day. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Derpy_dealwithit.png
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It has more to do with the baby being an alicorn than anything; but an alicorn that looks exactly like her? Could be a bad sign.
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Thank you kindly.
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What one's destiny is, is often more distressing than when it will happen.
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Thanks for catching those. I'll get those now. I haven't read too much of TAW's stuff, actually. That sounds pretty good. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and back on board. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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HALP! I can't stop adding to my post
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OH! Luna was referring to the foal. I thought she was referring to Twilight. Oops.
In retrospect...derp.
2492324 Srsly. It better be a genuine futa.
You didn't fix it >.>
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Well, I went and fixed it. All the nasty tors are gone and replaced with towers. I guess you can blame Reboot for my thinking tors are sort of tower-shaped. That was the name of Megabyte's stronghold, and it kinda stuck with me.
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S'alright.
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Look again. All fixed. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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Yeah, never use Reboot for things like that. They loved tossing in computer and mathematical terminology wherever they could. If it weren't for the fact that it didn't come out until a year after the show ended I'd have said they were probably talking about TOR (The Onion Router), as it is, they were likely referencing The Tor Functor, which I'm sure sent like all 3 math geeks that got it into an apoplectic attack on the spot.
Oh yeah, I forgot to mention in an earlier chapter I loved the ponification of physics units, although I kind of expected Watt to become Wat.
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I want to know moar about this previous character who is a dead ringer for Twilight for anyone who has lived long enough!
Just switch the stop teasing me brah comment to this topic. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png
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Now I wanna find some stories with Futalestia. . .
CURSE YOOOOOU, WRABBIT!
taste the rainbow
Ha, funny stuff.
I know I'm not the only one to agree with that. She's the best damn golden thing out there. And then Pinkie suggesting the twins... oh my. It seems as though I'm left confused again as to what it is Celestia and Luna are talking about. Then again, I'm not sure if I'm supposed to know yet. *sigh* Forgive my confusion.
~SolidFire
I JUST realized, that your section divider looks like a rabbit. XD
Mr. Wrabbit, you tell your muse to get off her ass and let her do your job; I want MOAR!!