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dat picture.
this was very well written. and i absolutely LOVE how you ponified Harry Potter
I'LL BE WATCHING YOU...
this, just NEEDS continuation... also on that note (clop clop clop)
*respectful applause, punctuated by snickering at the last four paragraphs*
I notice you left it open for a sequel/follow-up... and I wholeheartedly approve.
i think i've read that on gdocs... are you the author, or an uploader?
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Lookup 'Where a Mind Roams'.
Just seeing the title again gave me the wingest boner as it triggered memories of how much I enjoyed it the first time.
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i.imgur.com/EL6wB.png
That was a very hot story, but the ending that was hillarious, Spike jumped the gun and now Twilight might be in for something serious, good or bad.
Oh Velvet, I seriously love your stuff - loved it before, and a fanart enhanced version? Oh my!
I felt it needed a comedy tag, this is hilarious.
That was incredible, 5 Star!
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I'm the author, but only now decided to upload it here. (I didn't realize this place allowed clopfics!)
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Hopefully you like the added fanart!
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*cough* Actually, I already wrote the sequel: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/8433/Where-the-Mind-Roams
And I'm brainstorming/doing preliminary work for a part 3, since people seem to like it. If you have any ideas, now is the time to show 'em!
That picture... frightens me...
So let's see... A fan fiction about Twilight Sparkle writing a clop fic in which Princess Celestia reads to her from a heavily altered porny version of a yet-to-be-released installment of a ponified imagining of a fantasy series. I probably ought to make a joke about clopception or something.
A fic about a fic containing a fic! FICCEPTION!
But really, delicious piece of clop, really neatly executed. And of course, LOL @ the ned twist. Have all my stars
OMCelestia this brings a new dimention to goooooood taste. I'm reading this first thing. Oh, dear Luna. LMAO. Good read. Well written.
Wow.
Can't wait to see the look on Celestia's face.
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Yes, Celestia needs better taste in decorators. Really, red drapes?
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Ohhh, I've heard that before, believe me! Yes, it's a fic in a fic in a fic. I actually considered signing it with a character's name (like 'Rarity') instead of Velvetheart at first. Juuust for that extra level.
Dat endin'
The ending was awesome!!
"I'm sorry, did I break your concentration?"
LOL The ending is so hilarious!
Princess Celestia or Princess Molestia
I'm so glad I'm not a pegasus on the other hand though I wouldn't be reading this if I was a pegasus I'd be flying
The door suddenly thumped open, “Hey, Twilight, I’m home! Is that a letter to the Princess? Don’t worry, I got this.”
“Spike, no! Wai-ai-ohh no..” Twilight Sparkle whimpered as she watched bright green flames consume her self-insertion clopfiction..
OH SHIT YOUR FUCKED
lawl
lol nope wtf is this
twilight.ponychan.net/chan/collab/src/131247105859.gif
this was very suggestive to say the least. please write more!
(Stares, his eyes traumatised about what he just read)
So... to get this straight.
I just read a clop fic.
About a pony writing a clopfic.
About a pony reading another clopfic?
Inception would be proud...
MY GOD THIS WAS GOOD. MAKE MOAR!
Holy shit. This is very good.
Celestia be a trolling every day, she be a trolling because thats her way, when you see her coming down the street, you best be on your way, or she'll troll you, she'll troll you for the rest of the day.
Also You said "her sinful essence", you trying to imply something, because if you are
But I do like it, it was very funny. so please continue
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Fantasy princess! Specifically, Twilight Sparkle's fantasy princess.
...the real one can be just as naughty.
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A clopfic about a clopfic in a clopfic, of course.
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Yes, red drapes! What was Twilight thinking?!
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I have! Look at 'Where the Mind Roams'. I'm doing preliminary work for part 3, since people seem to want it so badly.
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What you need is some CMC cupcakes-style rape-and-slaughter to clean your mental palate, stat!
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A story where I wrote about Twilight Sparkle writing that Celestia wrote a clopfic.
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Yes! YES! Praise me! Praise the little attention horse! Oh Celestia, yes! I am a bad little attention horse. I need to be praised!
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Because you are a filthy, filthy filly!
163930 Your profile picture shows most reactions to the picture.
166337 What fic do you suggest then?
Funniest clopfic I've ever read. Well done.
Hate reading clopfics, but when I see the rating I have to know what happens. On a scale of 1 to 10, how cloppy is this?
This fic is absolutely magnificent! I've read it before, but oh man I'm glad it got brought here, since there's a large crowd of authors that spend their time at FiMFiction, far as I've noticed. Then again, I'm an author too, so, brohoofz! *offers hoof*
I hope we get that part 3 sometime. See ya 'round!
Temptation got the better of me
Good story, but clopfics ain't my thang.
*Proceeds to cry in corner*
LOL I loved the hilarious ending, I wonder what Princess Celestia would have thought of that paticular letter?
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Try part two! Also cloppy, but less focused on it.
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Of course Twilight Sparkle wouldn't consider her personal filly fluids to be worthy of a Princess!
Then Let Thee Be Praised Glorious Attention Horse!
163987 Where the Mind Roams. 'the' not 'a'
Just a minor detail, I know, but enough to derail the search engines and send you on a futile endeavour.
166771 something around 5-7 I'd say.
The description of the arising sensation was nice and detailed though there is still room for more light on the internal conflict/confusion.
The buildup of heavily seductive and 'inappropriate' contact is making up most of the length of the scene.
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Once it passes the line of physical contact from a level of more or less 'suggestive snuggling' to 'running the bases at dangerous speeds', things go over really fast.
(note: This is no criticism. Neither on you, VelvetHeart, nor on Twilight
I'm just asessing the cloppyness based on how long the story dwells on what level of raunchyness.
conclusio:
detailed description of events
understandable but not offendingly direct naming of body parts and actions
rather large emphasis on light physical tension-buildup
(other than the reading) low 'movie in her head'-level
the 'foreplay and actual sexing' is rather short
[meant to I assume. After all this about 'caught unexperienced and by suprise' and not 'they bucked for hours'.]
So: 5-7 'On a scale of 1 to 10, how cloppy this is'
Of course, it depends on how well it resonates with your preferences on the subject.
(whatever floats your boat, as they say)
PS- for whom it is not obvious: that is no highscore-thingie, just a scale of 'raunchyness'.
If VH aimed to go naughtier, I have full confidence that he/she (how should I know?) would have simply done so.
Oh and for the sake of completeness and because it can't be said enough!
(though I can imagine Twi would disagree on that last one...)
the ending is PRICELESS!
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I understand where the mistake comes from, since when I first uploaded the story elsewhere, I uploaded it as 'Where A Mind Roams' rather than 'Where The Mind Roams'. Not so here. There's no particular reason for the difference, to be honest. I thought it looked better.