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I love the ending!
That was hot and sweet, and once again the ending was hillarious, oh man I can't imagine what Luna might have done with that knowledge, oops!
YAY, finally can make sure to not miss any of your stories
Love your works
ah! one of few good ones makes it's way to fimfiction.
more of this please
Dat ending!
seriously, I was laughing LOUDLY at that!
Also, I kind-of-expected the whole thing to be a response/sequel written by Celestia, but this is nice too.
One again, Marvelous work! Truly amazing! 5 Star.
You shouldn't call the last bit "bonus". You should call it "icing".
Loved both this and the previous story. I really appreciate that this was edited superbly, even if it may have been because it's been out there before.
The part with the "Please Don't Banish me" and that freaking adorable picture of Twilight...priceless. Simply priceless.
“Oh.” Luna minced her forehooves along the edge of the table, eyes seemingly riveted to the sparkly crystal of her shoes. “Celestia? We wish to apologize. We believe you may soon receive some... harshly-worded letters from your School for Gifted Unicorns.”
Write that.
Write Luna doing that to a student. A colt if you will.
Take all of my money if you need.
I give you a new car, a new computer, a new PC.
Just WRITE THAT FIC !!!
you were right
i hadn't read this carefully
sorry
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F*ck. I meant a house, not a computer. a car a house and a PC.
Why am I loving this so much AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA-
A very nice continuation to the last tale. Plus of course, I LOL'd at the bonus
Keep up the good work, sir!
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I haven't really changed anything, so any faults that were in the original version still remain. (I'm so lazy!)
Cool story bro.
I'm not really into homo-interaction, but I enjoyed this. Kudos.
oh that was hilarious at the end. Is it going to have a sequel with with the three of them ending up together? and I just want to hear what happens with the reports from the school.
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I was still laughing from the ending of the story and then I saw this comment... Dude, you are responsible for a broken coffee mug, you know that? It was my favourite... *sniff* Still worth it!
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"Luna, you're my favorite princess!" *cough cough cough*
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Luna's probably going to have a role in the next tale, though perhaps not as you imagine it.
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If you like it despite not being able to enjoy the sexual content, then I'll consider that flattery regarding the story's plot and style!
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Trixie? Hmm, maybe, maybe. At the moment, though, preliminaries of the next part trend towards four other ponies.
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Whut? I don't know that song!
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EXACTLY what I mean !
DO IT MAN !
More please!
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Its called "I just had sex" by The Lonely Island and Akon
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lQlIhraqL7o
164624 Metroid1000 made an excellent ponified version. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k7rC0OemXRE here you go, enjoy
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*laughs* I see. I guess Twilight Sparkle would consider it quite the victory!
Oh twilestia, Why do I love you so?
it was, nice, well written, hilarious, cloppy, a great tale I must say
Lovd it and didn't clop to it. Then again I was never a clopper...
The concentration exercises for a lot of young filly and colt unicorns got a lot more than 20% more difficult.
*chuckles and applauds*
Honestly I was expecting the entire thing to be a "response" Celestia wrote to Twi and I was slightly disappointed it was "real".
I was reading this and had to explain what was so funny..... To my parents.....
Luckily, I'm a good liar.
PS. Your story is now a post on a nVidia support forum involving plugging your TV into the floppy drive and hoping for the best.
It's not funny. No one would find it funny. I passed it off as nerd humor and used my fried GPU as a scape-goat.
Read both stories. Both were awesome.
I'm email-tracking this fix until you confirm any updates will be in a new story, in addition to watching you.
I loved this. To funny. Also nice not to see Celestia lusting after Twi first.
Also I really liked all the art you did (or had done) for this fic, and wanted to say that I took the filly twi pic (thank you times 39999 for having it be transparent) and am adding a simple background to it so it works better as a wall paper for an iPod or iPhone.
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PS. Your story is now a post on a nVidia support forum involving plugging your TV into the floppy drive and hoping for the best.
It's not funny. No one would find it funny. I passed it off as nerd humor and used my fried GPU as a scape-goat.
twc.edu/sites/default/files/u74/dog-dude-wait-what.jpg
Is it true? Can I have a link for the lulz?
who drew the line art (also the filly twi one) and to thay have a deviantart acount
awesome story even if it hadin't had the pics
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The topmost image of Celestia in the spa, I had done for the story by LightofThunder.
All the other images in the story were all fanart drawn by KS4U on Deviantart.
For those that are curious: Yes, it's the same KS4U who requested 'A sequel to Where the Mind Wanders, please!'.
I love KS4U's art.
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I think he means the lie he had to tell his parents to avoid having to explain he was reading my little pony nawtyness.
>Drives her student to orgasm in a room full of sleeping foals.
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.... oh wait... I FORGOT TO CLOP!!! NOOOO!!!!!!!!............ INDEED
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Oh, that makes sense. I would still be funny.
"Hey, a tutorial on plugging your TV into the floppy drive! Just what I needed"
Starts reading, sees example wih story on the background.
"What is this?"
reads.
"whyboner.jpg and notsureifwant.jpg"
So...
Twilight's bi?
Have all 5 of my stars sir.
LOLZ. They said it was an official teaching method! That would be interesting if all of Celestia's students had to...
Wait that would just...
No. Not imagining that.
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Well, it is a school for gifted unicorns. Just clarifies what they're gifted at...
this was just as good as the last one
and more 
and by the way if it hasn't been said yet "DAT MANE!!!" (see first picture)
I DEMAND MOAR! <3
The trial in the dream had me laughing aloud for quite a while. It was excellent.
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Luna thought it was! How was she to know Twilight Sparkle'd accidentally sent sexy fiction to Princess Celestia? She thought that was how modern princesses teach magic!
So maybe some of the gifted unicorns recieved an unexpected gift...
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I actually didn't realize this place allowed clopfics. That, and I'm just plain lazy when it comes to posting these things in more than one location. I'll have to make a habit of it, though.
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"I really like her... mane!"
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Silly Fox, how are they all foals? That said, nopony saw anything anyway! It was dark, so should any have woken up, they'd just... ehm... hear stuff.
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Oh no! What will you do now?!
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I wonder if you noticed the little fourth-wall break I snuck in there.