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Awww yeeeah.
Saw socks. Must read.
I like where this is going.
Twiluna clop? EPIC WIN
SOCKS :D
I was going to wait to read this...but then I saw the cover pic...god damnit i'm in the middle of writing a chapter for Tartarus high but I am going to read this epic!
Read it.
My thoughts.
Ohoho!
Awwwww yeaaah.
DAYUM!
Hawt.
Again, Awwwww yeaaah.
Loved it. Please continue this story! You get a thumb up from me!
soooooooooocccccccckkkkkkkssssss
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Sorry to disappoint you all, but there are no socks.
I didn't even know that was a thing...? It was just the only decent Twilight x Luna picture I could find for cover art. Might add socks for chapter 2 though. For giggles.
Nice. Just nice.
No socks? Instant downvote!!!!!!!!
Kidding, reading and will up vote in a bit.
782121 I didn't even notice the lack of socks. Anyway, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee gimme the next chapter!
I love being a clopper xD
I would like to note, that:
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782121 The term 'Tuna' works for TwilightxLuna.
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Thought process.
Twilight x Luna.
TwiLuna.
Tuna.
Smelly vagina.
Nothankyou.
Holy shit! Unexpected but awesome!
*sigh, fine. I'll favourite it....
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nice fic though.
twillestia with socks
looking froward to it
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YEEESSSSSSSSS!
goddamnit, another clop to my faves, thx alot... sigh...
(moar pweeze?)
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Could also be LunaxTwilight=Lunight Odd word, but hey. It's the english language.
The Principality of Zeon approves of he boner this story generated.
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"how good of thou to accept our invitation"
*thee
"Deciding that she had, indeed been invited for drinks"
*either ,indeed, or just indeed.
"if thou is to enlist in"
*are
I um... sorta stopped paying attention to the details after that. Good story, but not much relationship building beforehand. I generally don't mind if clop gets into my shipping, but this was a bit... heavy. To each their own I suppose.
782512 It has pony socks! On Twilight!
And that first view was from the prereader. But pssst, the first person to read it was...ME.
782484 To be honest, with the 'old timey speak', I've given up. I'll settle for 'close enough'. And as for mindless clop...I generally write long romances. It's nice to just write meaningless naughty clop once in a while for a break~
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True, and provided it is Twiluna, or Twilestia if pressed, I enjoy reading it occasionally too. I mean, why else would I be here right?
>Given the nature of our sisters work
>gently lifting her own tongue to press against the other mares
>she enjoyed the faint taste of the unicorns saliva
>grinding her hindleg back and forth against the alicorns sex.
>A soft, breathless groan left the alicorns throat
>pressed a hoof against the unicorns chest
>the alicorn ground her hips down against the unicorns hindleg helplessly
>wrapping her hooves around the unicorns neck
>releasing the unicorns clit
>crawling up the unicorns form
^ All of the above require an apostrophe
>The letter inside was meticulously neat
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>For all that she was an alicorn, luna was only a little bit larger than Twilight
Luna's name requires a capital letter. Oh, and:
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>With a grin, the tipsy Unicorn swirled her tongue
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>To be continued...
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782140 So do I
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782531 lol i noticed the socks but i figured enough bronies had made that statement.
ponies in socks... its a beautiful thing.
DAT ENDING
782575 Chapter 2 will have 100% more socks than chapter 1. It's a sure thing!
heh, can't wait
783105 I'm pondering on sharing the google docs link....hmmmm
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and chapter 3 will have 200% more socks because it will be both princesses and Twi hot sexy action
783159 ...You mind reader
That is if I get to chapter 3.
Dammit.
I find this chapter only AFTER I finished... yaknow.
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Also, it doesn't sound like Celestia gets laid very often. That's obviously about to change.
I laughed. There's one "eachother" that needs must be "each other".
Also this particular run on sentence (Of which we are all guilty of at some time or another) uses splayed twice in it:
"The alicorn was splayed out before her, exposed, on her back, cheeks flushed and hindlegs splayed, the rosy tint on her cheeks mirrored in the faint hint of pink around her white nethers, which were spread just enough to reveal the true pinkness of her inner flesh."
You could replace one of the splayed with wide open, or lot's of other things. There were a few instances throughout the story where a word would show up just a little too often. My recommendation is to check out a thesaurus, dictionary.com has a pretty decent one that I use frequently. It helps when you notice that in your writing.
But ultimately, I liked it. I'm only offering advice because I wish people would do that with me, and I think you write well enough to use it. Good show!
I need that damn third chapter.....NOW!!!!!
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Yes!
Wow, this story certainly grew. When I viewed it, it only had 24 views :P Grats on the success.
I'll read chapter 2 tomorrow. Bed time for now. Fav'd
TwiLuna _and_ TwiLestia?
Oh, my dear sweet Buddha yes.
SOCKS?! WINGBONERS?! OVERDOSES OF APOSTROPHES?! REFERENCES TO The Secret Life of Celestia?! AND SOCKS?! anonymous pegasus you are either a perverted mad genius or just a regular mad genius. either way i love you for it.
784146 The Secret Life of Celestia? I wrote that...Didn't I?
I didn't put any references in to it, here. Confuzzled. I didn't do it on purpose at least.
And yeah, I'm crazy. Probably not a genius though.
You have all of my attentions.
784154 They say all crazy people are geniuses in some way.
784154 of coarse you wrote secret life of celestia, we had a conversation in that comment section too. the reference i saw was "the magical object" inserted into twilight by celestia. a slight reference yes, but i saw it even if you didnt.