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A boy and girl recieves a mysterious message from an unknown sender as they were just enjoying life to the fullest, but as soon as they opened it, they both find themselves in a new reality that they thought was just a fantasy. What's happening to them? Is there a purpose for them being in this new world? Are there higher powers in motion here, playing with them behind the scenes?
Read to find out.
Also credit goes to GX98 for the awesome cover art.
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I like it, and want more. please keep up the good work.
I loled so hard when pinkie pie said "i read the beginning of the chapter " she clearly boke a wall there
Um, hate to be a party pooper, but while this story has potential, the writing is, *ahem*, sub-par
. There are grammar mistakes, spelling mistakes, and simple sentences that could easily be improved. It kinda ruins the moment. Also, the pacing seems rushed, but that's just a personal opinion. Advice: get a proof reader/pre-reader and/or use a spell checker. 
good luck in the future.
wow diamond dogs what was arcana doing any way
Arcana YOU watched the SHOW time to Rarity it up girl
Then Cloudsdale exploded and it was all Rainbow Dash's fault.
hooof lotion i cunfussed
I do say chap, this tale is rather good and I would appreciate it if you posted more of this wondrous story!
ok
umm...
I humbly think this is a bit cliché.
I mean yes, it is nice, but I cant avoid having a bitter taste seeing the plot unfolding like this.
No intention to disavow you, I hope you the best.
umm lol ?
Crap indeed my dear Star.*smokes pipe and blows out smoke*...Crap...Indeed..
okay luna trolling somthings up i can tell its not good arcana might find him he should still be scared because if luna trolling they be lieing
It was good, but I feel like it is not yet over.
so thats what a transmutation circle is just wondering is it from full metal alcheamest? cause i think ive seen one befor on that
i think thats where its from, or it could be from many other shows/games world of warcraft, wizard 101, and it can be found in many different books about false magic on cultist religions
194157 transmutation circle are the basis of dark age alchemy theorists.
>>derpityderp I don't know, I was just looking for a picture of a transmutation circle and found it with a star so I just used.
i don't really notice any grammar or spelling mistakes, my brain automatically corrects them (don't ask) all-in-all a good story
yay, lack of physics
oh no, i sense whining ahead
O.O
HAHAHA nothing like a nutshot to create laughs
nice rhyming
heh, that was interesting
O.O
throuought the whole chapter i was laughing, this was a good chapter, escape scenes are fun
and i would have immediately gone into the everfree forest (nopony goes in there exept zacora and a few monsters, but i'd rather deal with monsters than what he had to any day)
*shutter* kinda like beetlejuise beetlejuise bee*shoves hoof in mouth*
but honestly i'd rather have pinkie pie than bee*shoves hoof in mouth again* him
pop out of somewhere in my house
202891 you were the first one to get that referance, I really enjoyed making this chapter and thanks for the reviews.
202930 :3
Hi there its really early in the morning
hi. it's midnight to me
funny chapter is all i have to say
208614 wait i thought of something, PROTECT YOUR JEWELS (i didn't even know they had any)
its hidden...?
um...
lol part of your story repeats itself (when rarity is giving star the suit) i was very confused
Nice story...
>>ketcham1009 Thanks for that I don't know how that happened.
224837 np
Yay for forth wall breaking!
Awesome story. I like :D
Yeah, very good chapter
267748 why thank you my good sir
"O shit im in the past" 'then i fainted...again' Beautiful
275011 *takes a bow* "thank you good sir
, for that review you are the first one to comment on this chapter.
i cannot wait for the next chapter of this wonderful fan fiction
for this is truly a work of art
279970 wow I never thought this to be a work of art
and dont worry, I am currently writing the next chapter, and I hope you'll enjoy it.
Yeah, nothing like a little midnight reading.
Great chapter, can't wait for more.
283305 I am so so so so happy
, that you are doing your midnight reading with my story
aauhg! taco why you no let me be first!
lol
still this an amazing story