Equestria.
The shining pinnacle of everything good about the world of Equis.
The Badlands.
The run-down hole of everything terrible about the world of Earth.
When a massive corporation fires one of its Snipers for failing to perform well enough in the field, he ends up transported from Earth to Equis. Hoping to make some new friends, he sets about socializing. However, this is harder than it seems, especially when he's not the only one to be taken there. After all, how is a murdering gunman with low self-esteem going to fit in when placed in a country full of peaceful equines with friendly attitudes and whilst under fire from everything that isn't himself?
Horribly, I assume.
Self-Insert; Simply using my Sniper as a placeholder for myself.
Chapters (8)
AAAH!
I didn't even read it. Sorry mate, but you need to format your story. That wall of text equals an instant turn down for me and lot of other readers.
4215020 Well, apologies, but I write most of my stuff on a Nokia Lumia 710. It's pretty much impossible to judge paragraph length with it, so I do end up writing a fair bit in between speech. I think I fixed it, however, but just point out how many lines, sentences, or fancy words a paragraph needs to be, since it's gonna be pretty difficult to count myself without going through the time-consuming process of waiting for just over a week to write some of this on a computer.
Grammar isn't something i care about as long as the story is good.
but since this is a tf2 fic. I'll fave it.
Also no offense. but If It's not a huntsman than screw that noise.
Elites from halo, nice.
4244119 Well, the main character originates from TF2, and he's on the cover art. The aliens come from Halo, and that's really all you need to know thus far.
I can just picture the sniper muttering under his breath "You prancin' show-ponies"
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This. Is. SO AWESOME! I loved this story, and can't wait for more.
4996627 Everybody that isn't colourful cartoon horse is an enemy of the Communist state of BulgaRainbowia.
Also, c'mon, you say you wouldn't a Maya?
He had to say it
I see nothing wrong with this. Great grammar, everything is put together nicely, lots of description of the surroundings, WHY DOESN'T THIS HAVE MORE LIKES THAN MY SHITTY STORIES!?!?!?!?
I write about 2,000 words per chapter in my RED Soldier fic, and I got 100+ likes! I barely even put that much detail in! You sir, are a great writer/story teller! KEEP UP THE GREAT F
CKING WORK!!!!!!!!
I love you!
5085407 Ah, cheers, I guess.
I love this story, but it needs MOAR HATS!!!!!