An astronaut finds himself in the Astral Plane after his ship's reactor melts down. Many people think horoscopes are a joke, but this astronaut finds out just how real they are.
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This is actually very entertaining.
Way to go Anonymous! Ya fucked up in your home reality, and then straight away fucked up in the new one your in! Where will the fail stop?!
I think the same, a many times^^
"Stars made her escape"? Huh... No. Human with plasma cutter made it. Canon is *&^%@(bad).
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!I can just picture Trixie with a magical collar around her being dragged by him haha!
Amazing first chapter! And that Trixie thing was just TOO hilarious!
whats the point with naming your character anonymous? I find it very unimaginative and annoying as Ive seen a few others that did this
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So you can put your own name in where Anonymous goes, but I see where you're coming from, it is kinda annoying.
All my LOLs!
This story is one of the rare ones that gets an instant REAL favorite from me.
Glad I didn't just reject it like I was going to. Would have been a missed chance to suffocate from laughter.
More please for the love of what ever deity, if any, you worship MORE!!!
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Hopefully the drop pods won't just open to anything, don't want ponies, or any other creatures making off with valuable supplies.
Least we don't have to worry about them being broken into. Reentry is one hell of a force, and that's what the pods were designed for.
I'm going to fave this just because its funny as hell.
I'm going to fave this just because its funny as hell.
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Well the last one needed a code, so yeah.
Awesome so far!
Gotta admit, when I think of him, he has on Warhammer 40k space marine armor (in Luna's colors)
I'm enjoying this story greatly so far. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Very good but I echo the sentiments of several here. Why anonymous? Anonymous is the bastion of bad second-person stories.
This was an epic chapter!
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Dat doubled comment.
I'm not too proud to admit it... I squeed.
2318095 Canon was that the "stars will aid in her escape", and they did... they sent a human with a plasma cutter to cut her lose.
'Trixie had summoned you from the moon and broke the binding spell between you two in the same night. Apparently, that was some seriously high caliber magic' Suuuure..... Miss ticklish lightning can cast high caliber magic. :P
Things were going so well, until this tire slasher typo popped out of nowhere.
You are stuck in a possibly hostile environment with little to KNOW information on your possible enemies.
It really should be just 'no'
Also, I don't think the hidden information is too much an issue, mostly considering you just answered a whole bunch of questions incidentlessly to these 'possible enemies'. Yeah, first contact designed information, but even then there was no way no hiccups could have been encountered if such was the case.
I'm actually starting to believe the A.I. is the thing that shouldn't be trusted. She rubbed off me the wrong way ever since Hecate first came up. Cold and robotic, but giving personality quirks at such a low level that it's capable of turning on you. All I'm missing is a goal for the image to seal...
And what better position is there than having your enemy mistrust their allies, and put their dependence on you.
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Wow. Two proof-readers and countless revisions on my part and none of us caught that. I feel rather silly. Either way, the error is fixed now.
Also, keep in mind that I'm not trying to be derisive when I say this next part.
As far as the AI being dangerous, here is something to consider. If an AI is being stored inside an orbitally deployable suit station, that has heavy implications. Add to that the implications of the AI being tailor made for programming. Do you honestly think a post singularity society would program artificial intelligence that could defect on its creators?
Now, I will admit that your idea is a direction that I did not even think of. I actually find the idea intriguing to no end. However, I already have a clear path for the story written. You may find that HAL 9000 is not part of it.
Getting really interesting.
SHU: High Sci-fi has always been my favorite genre, and I'd love to see where you're taking this story. You displayed an awfully solid grasp of interpersonal interaction in Tranquilize and adding that to Anooooon-Iiiiiiinnnn-Spaaaaaaaace, I'm expecting great things here.
So thanks for that.
Looks kind of interesting so far. Have any plans for a reasonable update schedule?
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I will most likely never have a regular update schedule for this story. Life doesn't work out for me like that. However, I haven't went a day without writing something for this story. So, take this how you will.
this is really good!!!!
keep it up :3
My first reaction:
GAH, I'M ISAAC CLARK! I'M SUCH A BADASS!
(and yes I am picturing everything tech-wise to dead space)
This is definatly Dead Space-ish. 'Suit Upgade Station' my ass. It's a store! Also, plasma cutter, is a plasma cutter, not a blow torch.
DAH IM ISAAC CLARK!!
Isaac Clark AND Master Chief!
Best. Day. EVER!
2319838 LURK MOAR newfag.
Anon: It's Trixie. Small pony, big ego.
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Well I'm fucking Vergil. (From Dead space on the iPad)
MOAR!!!! Please?
Thanks for the warning!
its dead right ?