You've been in Equestria for just under half a year now, and the fabled land of friendship has been wonderful. But to you, the best part is without a doubt spending time with Equestria's moon goddess, Luna.
A story of Luna with you starring as Anonymous
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Will there be romance later on in the story?
luna is so cute in that picture i love it
It truly is a disappointment to live somewhere where the light pollution blots out the stars, and I cherish every moment that I go camping or out to camp where there isn't a city for miles.
You can get lost in the sky on nights like those, laying out on the grass just staring at the heavens until you realize that the sun has begun to peak over the horizon.
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There might, I'm still debating on whether or not to turn this into a 'real' story and not just a bunch of oneshots, if it goes full, then there is a good chance of romance
I'm sorry... the name of this particular work definitely threw me. One of my favourite stories has a near identical name.
do it, you don't have nothing to lose!
Why no music in this one put it in the next one it really relaxed me
MOAR!!!!!!
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Please, don't turn this into a romance story. There are far too many human/pony love stories on this site and them just staying friends is perfectly peachy. This story is wonderful the way it is now, you don't need to go into romance to make it better
I can't handle all this d'awww, I'm going to- *pop*
Yup, there goes my heart. I'll be sending you the bill for a new one.
1716437 go for it
it alredy has some slight romcance why not go for gold 
Jup you are making good progress for a full story.
It's not bad and has a nice pace :)
Keep the train going!
1738503 lol you are the one percent your the only that says not to turn it into a romance
1780494 I know. To be blunt, for me, pony/pony and human/human is fine, but whenever I see Pony/human all I can see is bestiality. Besides, this story doesn't need love to be good. Just simple friendship is all that's needed.
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The romance doesn't need to include clop you know ( even when i don't mind it :D) It makes it easier to put feelings into the story like giving a small kiss on the cheek and stuff. Or on the mouth depends where you are taking it.
1781533 I know that and I understand it, but I just feel that some lines shouldn't be crossed. Probably just me stuck in my ways...
Why not include transformation? like a spell that turns him into a pony or Luna human? Lots of plot lines that can stem from that.
1781327 not all romance fics are clopfics
(same can be said for M rated ficts) that and romance will add more emotion and detail to the fict
1786143 Again, I know that and understand that, but is that added detail really nessesary? What's wrong with them remaining just friends in any case?
1787595 thers nothing wrong with that and if it can be better then i see no reson why he should not add romance
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But the question is would it make the story better? Or would it just be a change and little else?
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Ok just plain and simple here. If you ended up in Equestria and you would be the only human that lived there what would you do.
I would say: ''Screw everything and lets start up a new life.'' You can't expect a sentient being to not develop feelings which he already showed towards Luna.
1793072 it would make it better
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And by "Screwing everything and starting new life" You create abominations. But to answer your questions I would just live in the Everfree and become a woodsman, helping out when I'm needed.
>>shadowflame2000
How would it make the story better? That is something I fail to see
1793184
Sorry about that, just re-read you post a couple of times and I found out that I had misunderstood what you meant. But athough sentient beings they may be, they are both still different species. That alone is enough to remain friends.
Can't wait for furthered chapters since I am really interested where you are going to take this?
Possible romance or friendship or a completely unexpected thing
Now commence the romance. Gogo! The setup you made for it is prove enough that you were thinking about it :3
1716253 That's not the half of it. The biggest nuisance is going somewhere where light pollution is minimal and the clouds roll in before you can take in the night sky.
is this fic cancelled :(
Is this fic dead?
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2291592 Well yeah haha, The guy hasn't been online in 53 weeks and the story hasn't updated in 3 years, I try to stay away from stories that haven't been update in the last 4 months tops, there's not really a point in getting invested in a story that will never be finished, it's just upsetting.
5804361 Funny how my comment is from 6 weeks ago. I think I know it's not going to be updated.