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Shadow_Fire


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You wake up in a forest one day with no idea how you got there.


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This is my first shot at a second person fic. I'll continue it if it gets a good review
-Shadow_Fire

Also, if you're going to thumb it down, please tell me why

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 113 )

wow good job this is good

2276121 Thanks! Think I should continue it?

Not bad...bit too early to have much of an impression though; I'll keep an eye on this.

2276197 You know, I think I will

2276170
yea man this here is good story telling

continue the story or youll make fluttershy cry:fluttercry:

2276313 Alright. I wrote this after hitting a minor block in A Turn of Events and decided to see what people thought

2276204 whoo! :pinkiehappy: party time! :pinkiesmile:

do not disappoint us or we will have to kill you:twilightsmile:

2276333 Don't forget, we BOTH have other readers to not let down as well

2276351 And if you like this story, at least favorite it dude. We've been over this :facehoof:

EDIT: There we go

Cool story, please continue :pinkiehappy:

2276365 I've gotten too many good responses to abandon it now

2276121 2276365 2276194 2276197 And if any of you want, you're welcome to feed me ideas via PM

2276313 I'm not asking you because you've got to focus on Turn of Events

:fluttershysad: but i can make the good helps too....

2276407 We're already working on a story together

2276427 Fine. A COUPLE suggestions.

And you're lucky you get those. You need to work on MY story.

GO EAT YOUR CAKE!!!!

Stumbled upon this by accident... glad I did! Looks like a good start to me.

You've got the cliffhanger, which is about right. Then you have a drunken night and fight with a "human" with yellow eyes? That got my attention REAL fast.

I hope you continue this, it's vague enough to where you could go anywhere with it.

Oh, nice to see one of these kinds of stories without shipping for once.

2276443 Thanks:pinkiehappy: And I will be continuing, just hope I won't dissapoint

:pinkiecrazy: yay...wait how much cake did you give her?

2276457 I gave her a literal ton. A whole 2,000 pounds.

That's a HUGE cake!

Yes, and I have no idea how much she's already eaten

Oh, One little thing I noticed, maybe change that last sentence so it doesn't start with "And". Perhaps something like:

“With what? And what in Celestia’s name is that?!?” is the last thing you hear as you pass into unconsciousness.

all dat cakes gonna cakes gonna go straight to her plot:twilightsheepish:

2276472 WHAT?!?

Celly, calm down-

NO! YOU CALM DOWN!

I am calm, but you-CELESTIA! PUT THAT BOULDER DOWN!

HE CALLED ME FAT!

You might wanna go bro, she's losin' it

:twilightoops: da fuq celly it was only a joke!?

2276492 Don't worry, I got Pinkie locking her in her room.

AAAGGGGHHH!!! LET ME AT HIM!!!!!

YOU NEED TO CALM DOWN, PRINCESS!!!

DON'T FORGET TO LOCK IT THIS TIME! Yeah, she'll be fine by tomorrow :twilightsheepish:

:twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops: i fear for my life man

2276519 Just come by tomorrow with a banana and she'll forget all about it

but why a banana? :rainbowhuh:

-walks up to the door- hope you enjoy your big butt!

2276628 You know she's gonna get us both for that, right?

well she might actually enjoy her bigger plot because it will make sitting anywhere more comfortable:twilightsmile:

anyways some guys like big plots and through some turn of events cannot lie :applejackunsure: maybe she can find one of them to love

who knows...she might :heart: you bro...:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

:rainbowderp::rainbowderp: but do i have somebody/pony that likes me?

2276782 Possibly, don't freak out now, but possibly...Rarity

2276351 I think he said you like Shadow_Fire

HE SAID WHAT?!?

i need to find me a knife and a barricade because i dont want rarity:pinkiesick:

2276977 I think Pinkie told Celly what you said about her

god save me...

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