This story is a sequel to Violet's Tragedy
Violet Runner: A unicorn stallion with a light brown mane and tail, tan colored fur and two interlocking brass gears for a Cutie Mark. He's Steampunk, can fix/make anything that runs on steam, clockwork or early 1900 combustion engine,and specialises in experimental machinery (plains/airships and automobiles) and weaponry (Flintlocks, revolvers and muskets) and tests all of them himself.
This is the story of how he went from working on airships in Manehattan, to working in a small shop in Ponyvile fixing and making clocks and other clockwork items, then moving into a warehouse in the mountions, where he continued to make different machines and weaponry.
Chapters (11)
Hiyo, cute story so far, but there are some major typos throughout it. May I suggest an editor? There are plenty of groups that are happy to lend a hand.
1806673 Ya but none of them ever get back to me.
1806942 really? that sucks, I reccomend these two. They're fairly active and helpful folks. If it really comes down to it I can likely lend a hand but i'm really busy with real life so it's very erratic when I'm free.
So far pretty cute, the chapters feel incredidbly short though and spelling errors are still a big problem. Still enjoying it nevertheless.
Cute so far, my major issue here is the idea that her name is Derpy and folks call her Ditzy as an offensive term. Derpy is more of an offensive slur than Ditzy I think. Otherwise looks good, pacing is improving.
Cute story but again the grammar and typos are really dragging it down.
awsome story man. i have to read more
2317436 Thanks.
I see what you did there.
Nice reference from Atlantis, "Milo Thatch"
Just so you know, it's "lead", not "led"
Anyways, good job.
2326599 did you get the reference at the end?
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No, sorry. I didn't get that last part.
Hey, I know this chapter was short, but I did see a few errors. But anyways, I can't wait to see if Discord appears again.
You should get an editor. But you really are improving in your writing.