Through last minute preparations and rushed circumstances by visiting Apple relatives, Applebloom is accidentally left home alone the week of Hearth's Warming Eve. Unfortunately for her, a familiar pair of rivals return to seek revenge. Will she be able to defend her home and still have a wonderful Hearth's Warming Eve?
(Obvious title is obvious, but we need a good nod to Home Alone! If Fallout and Luigi's Mansion can be done, then by golly we're gonna have a holly jolly Christmas this year. Hopefully it will be completed by said holiday. Oh man, that would just be awkward if I didn't finish it in time, right? That would totally mean I ruined Christmas.
I'm so pretentious.)
Chapters (3)
FIRST. but this really does have potential.
try adding in CMC and it might be great.
also let me guess... Apples are visiting Oranges in ManeHatten right?
1789506 Do you even capitalize?
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im on an ipod its hard
Foal Alone?
You get a thumbs up and fav from me
I think you should add a crossover tag [And love the story
Dude. This is, by far, one of the most awesome ideas I have ever seen on this site. It makes me jealous that I didn't think of it.
You're awesome.
1789805 No, he doesn't. It's based off of the idea of Home Alone. It isn't actually a crossover.
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MOAR!
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Home Alone parody? YESYESYESYES TAKE ALL OF MY YES
Edit: Oh, this is just perf. *evil laugh* Gimme moar, nao, pwease.
(Joke) Alt. Title: Foal A-groan
*Reads title and description*
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*grins*
This is going to be awesome, isn't it?
You have my attention...
Mushy Core....
There's always that one....
Also +1 for the awesome slapstick comedy!
"Shame on ya for trustin' Mushy Core1"
if you're going to do that, might as well put "Mush Core111!!!!ONEONE!!!111ONE111!!" not trying to be mean, just trying to make a joke that very few/just me will understand.
anyways, YUS! new chapter. kinda not what I was expecting because the crooks "stake out" the house in the original, but then again, making an original would be a bit boring. let's see how this turns out...you know, in the later chapters and stuff.
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Sorry bout that, slipped by me.
Anywho, thanks for reading, everybody. Comments are appreciated and this should be finished up before Tuesday.
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I catch so many editing mistakes when reading stories here it's not even funny. You don't have to be sorry, you just have to be observant. and maybe get an editor.
I looked at the title of this chapter, and the first thing I thought of was the scene where Kevin's tricking Harry and Marv into thinking there's a Christmas party at the house with all those celebrity cardboard cut-outs and "Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree" playing in the background.
Prior to reading:
Oh god, this looks like it's going to be epic. Home Alone was pretty much the film me and my family watched at Christmas when I was a kid, and I also watched it many times outside of Christmas. And this just looks like it'll all fit in together so well. AB, known for having a tantrum when she feels she's being treated unfairly, Flim Flam as the burglars, massive Apple family... And hey, maybe AB will get her Cutie Mark in DIY :P
Happy Christmas and a Merry New Year! nice timing to put out the chapter too. and even though you couldn't explain how AB set up each trp. it kinda put a huge hole in the story...oh well, it was still a pretty good chapter.
lol well that escalated quickly!
Funny story though!
...even Mushy Core.
So... You ever thought about the second home alone.
I want to know how it ends.
nevermine. I was it tired when i read this. funny crossover.
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Mebbe
Anyway, thanks for sticking around.
That first part gave me some feels, especially when I thought about the instrumental version of 'Dream to Dream' from Feivel Goes West.
1790231 no, this is a parody of Home Alone. If it had the same burglars in it, then it might be a crossover. A crossover is when you take one thing and add it into another, so like Pokemon in the world of Yu Gi Oh would be a crossover, since eveything is the same, except the two universes are crossed, making it a crossover.
This was fun.
Applebloom: I hope I don't see those jerks again ðŸ˜
I felt like that was a little bit off character of her but she's a little kid Sometimes they always feel like taking their anger out that somebody
Well it looks like they're gonna have their horrible holidays experience ever because they have no idea what's in store 😈
I was sort of was hoping somebody make like a home alone type of story Even though it would've been cool to have all cmc together Planning on protecting the farm but im not too upset about that They should be very interesting
Are you kidding me kid It's not that hard to remember what??
No offense but he's not to bright
so Things have really gotten bad so far The family almost there Train but worst they left Apple Bloom at the barn Now she was home alone but unfortunately not long enough until those crazy brothers Flim and Flam wants to get Even with the Apple family by robbing their home so Apple Bloom try to get some help but instead she got caught in the plant But it looks like Apple Jack and big mac are on a way home to get her Boy what a way to spend a holiday huh
Wow that was good So AppleBloom found out why the Shoveler aka Little Slate was like that but it was so sad what happened to him but then applebloom Finally realized she was wrong about him And now she has to defend her home from flim and flam Who still Trying to rob the place With the little traps that applebloom set up lol But unfortunately they caught her But in the miracle Little Slate came to the rescue and stopping those two But the Apple family came home For Apple Bloom This was a pretty good story I mean it was short but it was good
Wait, there's a Luigi's mansion fic? On the sane level as fallout equestria? That sounds amazing. I wish I knew the title
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I think I can help you. I'm not sure if you're looking for the Applebloom one or the Sweetie Belle one though. Here's the Sweetie Belle one (personal preference I guess.) It never got finished but it was so close to the end. Not only that but it also has alternate endings which end pretty creepy honestly.
If you were looking for the Applebloom one, let me know. I've never read it but I keep coming across it.
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I haven't read this one but I can already tell I'm going to like it. I like really lighthearted comedic MLP fanfics like this and I like Home Alone; I watched it growing up, plus as an adult, I still think these movies are so funny and like to re-watch them from time to time. Also did you make that cover art? That looks really cool.