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WeirdBeard


Yarrr!! WeirdBeard be in the writing mood, or something. Idunno, probably'll edit this later.

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What happens when our dear Doctor Whooves becomes aware of some being narrating his life? Will dastardly shenanigans occur? Can this stranger give our hero some insightful knowledge? Probably not, he's a bit of a prick.

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Comments ( 80 )

I enjoyed this. You have humor.

Have a cookie! :coolphoto:

YES. YESYESYES. AHA! Lungs... Collapsing... LAUGHTER WITHOUT END!
Definitely gonna keep an eye on this little beauty. This has some serious humor potential. X3
Also, go figure Pinkie knew all about him. :pinkiesmile:

:pinkiehappy: :twilightoops:

That was actually less strange than many similar fics I've seen. That said, I think that's actually a vote in its favor, when you get right down to it.

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I can't breath!! :rainbowlaugh:

THE TEXT, GOOD SIR. THE TEXT. I CANNOT READ PINKIE IF I CANNOT SEE HER.

Succaeros typed furiously.

OH NOT YOU AGAIN.

~S.C.

You win...five 'staches for winning.

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

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Yeah, that pink text is a *YAY* to put up with. It shall now be cyan (we'll say it's a tone from her cutie mark) in your honor, good sir.

Also, thanks for the comments everyone. I'm happy to see this is getting a better reaction than I anticipated.

This is soooooo funny! my brother liked and he's not even a brony! :pinkiegasp:
I'm soooooo tracking this story!! lol! :pinkiehappy::raritystarry:

This feels a lot like a more comical version of Stranger than Fiction

I'm okay with this

The description reminds me of that Looney Toons bit with Daffy Duck and the paint brush:derpytongue2:
Will definitely check it out

Alternate title: When the 4 th Wall Attacks!!! :pinkiecrazy:

Hmmm..... A bit too much swearing for my tastes, even for a background character with no defining traits canon wise, but other than that, I don't see any flaws that are noticeable with how the narrative works. I look forward to seeing if you do another chapter.



Also, it's me, Si Fron from the forum. FYI.

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True, my apologies on that, good sir.

Thanks for the comments again, our heroes will certainly have more capers ahead of them.

More, more, more! We demands for MOAR! :pinkiecrazy:

This color is not too much better, to be honest. At least you can see it. But I digress. A better word for class-less would be crass, and also
"Pfft, you didn't *NEED*my help to do that.

There is a missing word in that sentence. Other than that, Take it away steve!

No, Not YOU, Steve. That Steve. Yes, You. With the hair. AND the eyes, yes.

Ugh. Narrators. What a bunch of amateurs.
~S.C.

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Once again, thank you. That 'need' ninja'd it's way out of my view, I appreciate that you caught that.

Inorite? Those rascally narrators goof off all the time!

Now, of course, the good Doctor and Twilight have to figure out if they're in a comedy, or a tragedy.

........ The bad jokes were funny. Also, this story is an interesting take on human in Equestria in the most meta sense possible. I look forward to more.

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I love it tons!!!!! Why? because it's SO AWESOME! :rainbowkiss:

Erwin from Accounting is best pony. :raritywink:

Here's a thought:

....was steve narrating for the entire court case as well? :applejackunsure:

Scroll back up and read it again, and now keep that in mind. :coolphoto:

*hands reader a contract promising that their minds will be blown once directions are exactly followed*

Nobody expects the Spanish inquisition! Ahh..good reference. Monthy Python is awesome! Keep up the good work ol' chap!

Oooooh dear. I'm surprised they weren't jumping on Erwin for narrating like Steve was trying to. X3

Steven Seanery Con, I giz Steve a Sean Connery voice. :rainbowlaugh:

Excellent! Yet another chapter added to one of my favorite fics right now. :twilightsmile:

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A TAIL! Do you not understand the words that are coming out of my mouth?! It's a glorified butt limb and OHMYGAWDIT'SMOVING, ITCANSMELLFEAR!"

whether he cared anymore or not, Steve crawled into Ponyville still on his belly. It was mid-day and just about everypony and their cat and dog were out enjoying the nice weather. Or as Steve would have phrased before, 'it was hella' busy.'. Just as Pinkie Pie had predicted, Steve stuck out like Waldo on an empty page.

Every mare and stallion were either whispering about, laughing at, or straight-up ignoring the newcomer. That ol' Steve just kept chugging along; chugga chugga chugga chugga chugga chugga chugga chugga, toot toot! Even when the guerillas rigged the bridge with plastic explosi-("YOU'RE RAMBLING AGAIN, CEASE AND DECIST. BESIDES, NOBODY HAS SEEN THAT MOVIE BUT YOU, ERWIN."). My sincerest apologies, Steve's attitude is rather infectious, nyaha.


Best lines in the world, to bad I can only give you one like :fluttershysad:

I get the feeling that Erwin might be joining our heroes shortly. :rainbowlaugh:

I would like to revise my statement from the previous chapter, for it appears that Erwin from Accounting is not best pony after all.

Erwin from Accounting is best everything! :pinkiehappy:

"Thats a good chaptah" said Sean Connery "Steve"

Liked and Tracked. I'm thoroughly enjoying your story so far.

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I'll share a little secret with ya, this next chapter is gonna get even nuttier with Erwin from Accounting. That rascal, he's such a goof.

Yeah, now im jealous because SOMEBODY that i know wrote a Doctor Whooves story that's more popular than mine

Also of note: VERY suspicious parallels, Mr. Author who I shall instead call BronyKen. For example, the narrator is a spastic, snarky human, who has long blond hair, and is named Steve, which may be short for Stephen. Do you see what I'm getting at, Ken?

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I do see what you mean. However, Steve is Steve and a whole different Steve at that. In fact, his name was that even before the thing at the place that we are speaking of. C'mon Llama! Call me Ken one more time! One more time! :rainbowwild:

What a twist!

lol! All hail the ban hammer!

I CALLED IT!!!!!! :rainbowkiss::raritystarry::yay::twilightsmile::scootangel::derpytongue2:

Ahah.... Win. One can only chuckle at thoughts of the step-dad mocking him at every turn through narration... X3

"Erwin! I want yo babies!" :rainbowlaugh:

I think the writer's academy is going to get converted completely to ponies before this is over.

Is it weird that I'm saying the Doctor's lines with a fake British accent while reading this?

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