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Blaze Wings a Young Orphaned Filly travels back in time to meet her idols, the Cutie Mark Crusaders. She ends up getting far more than she bargained for. A One Shot Story
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Faving to read later! This looks promising
Yay Thanks!
Not bad. Is this a first attempt? Its not bad or amatuerish just wondering.
Depends on what you mean, if you mean first attempt at a one shot then yes. First story no. First time travel story.. yes :) 1785280
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That was about when I realized who she really was!
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What a
But you forgot about her appearance in the first episode...
My twist makes perfect sense when you think about it.. in context to the story :) 1786198
AH AH AH, I did not forget about that. I sort of handled it in the story but when you think about it, no it does not make sense unless I slapped on an AU tag which I don't want to. 1786198
I didn't think I would find this so quickly.
Like I said before, I like time travel stories, and this one was pretty enjoyable.
would have been better if I didn't already know the twist but hey I still liked it
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I think she's referring to the scene in Return of Harmony when the three fillies are hiding under the table from Nightmare Moon.
Technically, it was a storyboard error anyway, right?
Yes she is refrerring to that scene and I sort of took care of it when Blaze tells her that she found some friends when Nightmare Moon showed up, even if it does not fully make sense.... I know it is a lame excuse but a lot and I mean A LOT of stories forget about that and do not need an AU tag or anything so I choose to ignore that episode :) 1786249
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I won't tell if you won't.
Also sorry I guess I got over excited and told you last night.. heh 1786249
who was the letter from!?
Foreshadowing at it's best..... but if other's wish for a sequel I might just write one. Or at least an epilogue 1787113
1788093 yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes!
I want to... sigh it seems that this story did not get enough attention, but maybe. I keep trying to find more groups to add this story to, but when I try to search for new groups the site crashes. Any suggestions for groups that this one belongs to? 1790454
I don't understand......Blaze is Scootalloo?
YOU ARE CORRECT... Which is why this line make sense even though hit shouldent:
"Names Scootaloo!" She was feeling nervous deep down but, apparently it was the truth even if it was also a lie.
It is a lie because her real name is Blaze but it is also the truth because without her existence, Scootaloo will cannot exist.
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1801535 Oh.......still don't understand
I do not understand how you cannot. Blaze is from the future where the CMC thrive. She knows all 3 of the elder original members. She goes back in time to meet them and she finds out Scootaloo is missing and after looking at are reflection she discovers that she is Scootaloo. Get it? Time Travel Twist, that was the whole point of this one shot, Scootaloo is from the future. 1803830
OHHHHH!Kay I get it now
YAY! It sucks cause I thought this kind of twist and story would have people going crazy... I thought it was neat idea but oh well
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Whoa, so I just got around to reading this now. ^_^
What a
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But it was a good one, and very well done.
Great little one-shot, my friend, so you earned a 
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YAY! Thanks! I just wish this story was published at the right time, I think that was its down fall lol. But Oh well. 1878473
You never really described 'Blaze Wings' in detail, wow. Haven't seen that since FO:E....usually authors really put focus on the character's physical shape and colors; you certainly have a good sense of how to keep information from your readers when you really need to. I like that, it tells me you can get stories written well and keep your reader just enough in the dark to keep them interested.
What I'm curious about is the letter at the end, and what was written therein. I'd be willing to bet that that mysterious mare that we caught snippets of was Blaze Wings, or in the case of continuity, 'Scootaloo'. Sweetie Belle has dialogue that supports this, as she said that Scootaloo would join her and Apple Bloom in retirement 'in time'.
This story needs a sequel or more content; I'd lean toward sequel because this is marked 'Complete' already. Hope to see more from this story's plot line in the future.
Thank you, unfortunately I highly doubt I will do one any time soon. The letter could be from anyone but if you follow one line you can conclude who it is from. Not enough people paid attention to this story at all, but maybe I might do a re write or something and make the story a bit more serious. I don't know, but thank you about keeping my readers in the dark thing, exactly what I was going for.
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it feels like there should to be another chapter...
good job...
Sigh I know. I was going to make a sequel but there is just so little interest from my readers. 2469792
I like this little one shot, I think you did pretty well with it, considering you were taking your own story take that lead into a cannon episode (cannon? canon, I can never remember which is the proper one lol).
I can see why you didnt follow up. Unless you did more in the future (as in after the seasons so far), theres not much to go on. A small epilogue where she reads that letter (assuming she found it) or something would have been nice to wrap it up, but that may have just been me. I like to try to figure stuff out, but most times I like a nice finality to things like that. Oh well!
Actually... this story is about to have a revive in the form of another story of mine. I don't wanna spoil stuff, but let's just say one of my stories will follow up this. I don't want to say which though, I can say that my readers tend to read all of my other stories.
Also, I'm glad you liked it! 2621152
Well she kind of is, first off why do you think she liked Fluttershy over Dash more? Don't you think that might raise some alarms? Without a sequel or continuation though, it doesn't. But there is one in the works to a story of mine...
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Like your story one problem when "blaze" goes back in time the misterios mare followed her but sweetie belle said she would be joining them soon if that's true then she couldn't have gone back to give her the letter.
I was really vague on Scootaloo and Blaze especially at the end. But if you keep reading onto Spike's Nameless Brother, it should make more sense. Also Scootaloo said she would be joining the elder Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom soon. 3525448
This was a great story!
But I kinda don't get it (I haven't read Spike's nameless brother by the way)
If Blaze was Scootaloo then wouldn't she be like 50 years old? And how was she talking to her?
Blaze is... you have to read the sequel silly. Scootaloo is an elder and very old. Blaze is Blaze
If this is still confusing then you will just need to read on! Sadly it takes a while to get into this subplot. 3654504
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I just finished this story so I haven't read the next one.
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I'm kinda stupid.
I down voted you, cause you not silly. 3654510
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I look for stuff I think I've lost when it's in my hooves.
Heh, I knew from almost instantly that she would become Scoot's, dunno why.
To be fair, I wasn't exactly that subtle. I made a cheap attempt to throw people off by doing that joke where she wants to see Fluttershy more than Dash and that was it, lol. 3998254
3998317 May want to add more subtle hints towards her not being Scoot's.
There is no point now, but are you so sure she is Scootaloo?
There is a sequel that goes over this story and expands on it 
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3998407 Well, ever since I read anything about Time Travel and Blaze not being able to fly, I instantly drew the connections.
I see, well I hope you read the sequel, up to you! 3998432
read and faved. I would say that I'm now stalking you, but I have been for a while.
Yay
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Instant reply is insant.
BTW, I'm going to be familiarizing my self with more of your works then just this and SNB.
The moment both "flightless" and "orphan" were mentioned, I knew. Still, cool Scootaloo origins story. I have one planned for my own fic that is... well, very different, but still somewhat similar at the same time.
P.S. Congrats. This comment just gave you two pages worth