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Waking up in a dream as a dragon, that I could handle. Suddenly waking up and discovering it wasn't a dream, not a problem. Being captured by three little ponies who want nothing better than to torture me over and over? Dear god help me!
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So much feedback. How will I ever wade through all of this? So much constructive criticism.
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6970753 I sense a large amount of sarcasm coming from you.
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Well that was an uh, interesting tale, but yeah, that guy is such a cry baby! Almost like a baby dragon.
6970864 Woah woah woah woah woah! He's clearly a dog. But, yes, he's a big crybaby.
6970858 I am disappointed in the fact that I can't find a good response to that on the internet.
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...I'm sorry, I couldn't help myself.
Read this first as Dragonscat :P just shows how disgusting my brain is-.-
6973313 Another friend of mine did that too
I thoroughly enjoyed this, Kinda wish it was longer/more in depth though.
7000517 Haven't heard that one before.
I don't think I could have stretched out this joke for that long, hehe. But I'm glad you enjoyed it!
God that picture is a cursed image it will give me nightmares
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It was a good find.
Hi! I've been going through my old reviews, and given your bio text I thought you might be interested that I reviewed this last year. As I say there, it's a bit rough but with an entertaining heart. The CMCs' sometimes snarky interactions with each other were my favourite parts, I think.
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eh. I'm not great at writing comedy and I was just kind of trying to write something silly. I'll admit I'm not always that great at dialogue, but this was published seven years ago.
Thank you. As for the rough parts,
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Yeah, that's why I always put the publication date of a fic in my reviews: because people's writing does develop. I mean, my earliest stories are definitely rougher than the later ones. And tbh maybe you undersell yourself a bit on comedy -- the CMC snarking was great.
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When it comes to the CMC, I have a lot of experience writing for them. I'd love to know what you think of Training is Magic. 
I might undersell.
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It will be some while before I have time to read it, especially since I've had quite a few review requests recently -- but I will get there. Thanks for the suggestion! 
I've just added Training is Magic to my RiL list.
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Sure!