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Spitfire and Soarin' have been friends from the moment they first met. The two of them are like brother and sister, but when Soarin' confesses his loneliness to Spitfire she takes it upon herself to find him the perfect mare. Will it work or will this back fire on her spectacularly?
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Could it be? A SoarinShy fic?
MY SILENT PRAYERS HAVE BEEN ANSWERED!
Oh yeah, slight misspelling.
The potential is strong in this one
If you disappoint me with a crap chapter I will kill you.
Nice
We are pleased, continue.
1514916 Um... thank you?
1515612 You are welcome.
I like how Soarin is socially awkward and not a huge dick-head like too many fics make him.
Ah, these two are practically made for each other!
I like this interpretation of Soarin, different from what I've seen but still recognizable.
By the way:
I like shy Soarin.
I think she should know soarin sice dash and her are praticlly the closest friends ever so RD would talk about them alot
"Took a leap of faith" I love that series. Also, it's been a long time since I've read a straight shipping so I'm gonna give this a chance :)
I want moar
please
Dash chocked on her drink at the mention of a coltfriend.
Would you believe that misspelling that word is a more common error than using the wrong "to"?
Nitpicking aside, good job on another fantastic chapter. I really like where you're going with this. Soarin x AJ might be my favorite pairing for him, but Fluttershy pulls a lose second. And with how you've built his character in this story their date promises to be wonderfully awkward.
Yes, let the daw control you. MWUHAHAHA
Oh snap! Shit's about to get real!
on an unrelated note, at the end there "idle" should be "idol".
I've been a FlutterMac person my entire brony 'career'.
Now here's what I have to say:
WHAT WAS I THINKING?! This ship is near perfect!
Fluttershy and Soarin'? Ok not a paring I would have thought of since I tend to concentrate on Soarin' being Twilight or Applejack, but I think you are making it work. Background paring of CheeriMac, nice don't see that too often.
*reads the end* Oh dear this won't end well...
Fuck you featherweight.
Fuck you.
The Dawwness, it's overpowering
Amazing story heres your flutttershy :
Right in the dawwws... that was a great chapter.. .but something tells me there's going to be some massive fallout at the school soon. Whoo boy....
Great update, but I found some typos....
"Soarin' moved to the side of the sofa closer to her. This action only made the shy mare hide behind her mane once more. He paused and the room went silent for the third time. A question came to his mind after a few seconds that he knew he probably shouldn't ask but couldn't stop himself from doing so.
"If you knew I was a Wonderbolt then why did need to ask my name?"
As she talked they had gone around and fed the rest of the animals, giving each type of animal their own feed and helping the injured or sick ones by feeding them. He was currently holding a small hedgehog in in his and was holding a small bottle so it could drink.
Umm, you wouldn't mind fixing them.... they just sound awkward.
Featherweight: Paparazzi in training.
Here we go.
You know... I think this was the best choice for sure.
It was better than FlutterMac, anyway...
And Featherweight... you should know better. Take it from Spider-Man.
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...Err... actually, not too sure... you know, I think we'll settle on this...
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Cool.
Soarin'Shy?
*ERROR: STORY CONTAINS TOO MUCH CUTE. PLEASE RESTART BRAIN.*
I-i mayb b-be a ponybot b-b-but i feel emotion-BZZZZZZZZZZZZZZT
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oh Ditzy don't you ever change. Ah that was so sweet, nice to see before all hell brakes loose
So much cuteness... I love it
The calm before the storm. Let me get one last D'AAAAAW in there.
A coup is military revolution, and has nothing to do with chickens.
A coop is a what you're meaning.
I'd also like to point out that you are missing a ton of commas.
Also, I doubt Flushy would kiss somepony after only a few hours with them, even with things going well. That's just my conjecture, though.
Even still, I haven't stopped reading, yet.
Oh boy. Here we go.
Oh shit.
A storm is coming
Batten down the hatches
Yeah...tabloid journalism never ends well, just ask the cutie mark crusaders. So he's either gonna make up some made up story or he's gonna make it to where they can't enjoy any peace and quite. There are 2 parties that know the truth 100%: Fluttershy and Soarin', Spitfire and Dash because they set their best friends up in the first place.
oh when will the stare be reveiled also let soarin meet fluttershy's parents and tear them to shreads
How can one story be so damn cute?!? Also, paparazzi!!! They're gonna ruin fluttershy and soarin's relationship!!!
"started t=rubbing"
You need to get rid of the t=, then it will be 'started rubbing'.
It says this chapter has been resubmitted. I'm curious as to what has changed?
1694674 As of right now I have no clue why it says this story has updated. This happened to one of my other stories earlier this month and I'm wondering if it was merely a glitch. I'm sorry for getting your hopes up for nothing. However if it makes you feel any better I am nearly done with the next chapter and hopefully it will be up for real later today.
1681636 Also what chapter is that mistake in?
1694709 Did you release a Blog or anything? sometimes I have found when you blog something this stuff says it updates.
1694769 No, no blog. I was editing one of my already released stories. (Duality if you're curious.) and then a friend of mine told me that he noticed an update on this story. I'm still trying to find out what happened. Most likely I hit something with out noticing or it's a glitch. The silver lining to this though is that it really made me want to finish this chapter. So yeah...
This may go one way or the other
This is the most adorable story I have ever read.
Keep up the
goodawesome work!1697862 Actually his name does have the ' in it. Both the wiki and his creator(Amy Keating Rogers) use the spelling I use. I'm not trying to sound rude or anything by this I just wanted to point that out. I've seen people use one spelling and others use the other spelling. Both are fine to me so long as I stay consistent.
I like the development you put into this chapter. Things are going to get interesting from here on out, and I look forward to every minute of it. Just don't fall into the cliche where everything goes to hell, they break up over a misunderstanding, and then one of them (probably Soarin') has to go and make a big, dramatic public apology to get their "happily ever after". I hate that cliche...
On a side note, there were several spelling errors and one or two grammatical errors I noticed in the latter half of the chapter (starting from when Soarin' leaves his house to get the bagels). I didn't reread the first half that got accidentally posted earlier this morning to see f the few I saw up there were fixed, so they may or may not still be there.
Well I give silver tongue a life expectancy of 2 weeks.
My initial reaction: BLARGLFLARGLE I WANT MORE!
Seriously, though, it'll be interesting to see how everything starts to blow up. I never knew that bears could hold occupations as guards!