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RaijingtheClockworkPony


Just a guy that writes fan fiction from time to time.

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It's a normal day in Ponyville. Elusive, Rainbow Blitz, and Bubble Berry are all hanging out and having a good time until Blitz offends Elusive's honor as a stallion. Now the three have a bet, the objective: Get a date with one of their close friends, Applejack Twilight Sparkle, and Fluttershy.

This story contains R63 on three of the mane six and a few other characters. This idea was spawned by the picture.

Warning may contain massive Dwaa's and a few clichés.

Chapters (11)
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Comments ( 209 )

Hmm. I want to see where this is going. Good so ar. :pinkiehappy:

Well I'd definitely like to see how this goes, but there is one thing that sticks out.

Well, to be quiet plane,

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I always suspected Elusive to be a jet.

Hoo, boy! This was rather well-written, and it has a rather good plot. I like where it's going, mate: Keep doing what you're doing. :raritywink:

Intriguing concept, gender-swapping only half of the mane-6. You have piqued my curiosity, I want to see where this goes.:trixieshiftright: Keep it up :twilightsmile:

1834438 and a quiet one at that :trollestia:

looking forward to the next chapter and to see where this is going :twilightsmile:

You misspelled 'challenge'. At the TITLE.:ajbemused:
Anyway, I'm a sucker for these kinds of stories. I just find them very cute.

This deserves to be continued :)

I would really love to see a bit of the back story - what were the interactions in the group BEFORE the bet.
Unless we are expected to just take this story based on a blank slate "everything is exactly as in the series, except 3 of the mane 6 are dudes" approach.

Might be okay for a short story based mostly on comedy of misunderstandings...

This is going to be :rainbowkiss: so awesome!

Wow... This is going to go well...

Looks fantastic so far, can't wait for next part.

Wait. Elusive has the easiest target.

Twilight is so oblivious, Blitz is going to have to practically hit her over the head with romance novel or something.
Fluttershy is well... Fluttershy.

All Elusive has to do is go up to AJ and be straight forward. How hard can that be?

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Reminds me of the comic adaption of 'the unusual love life of Dusk Shine' where AJ hit him over the head with a basket of apples for kissing her hoof.

So there's that challenge. :twilightsmile:

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Well, I think the only challenge for Elusive is fight his natural tendency to use fancy words and gestures. Applejack may get confused or take it the wrong way.

Riz

So what happen to Dashie, Pinkie and Rarity ? :rainbowhuh:

1846703 In this story they never existed. Instead of being born female those three were born male.

Riz

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Hmm...
So this is an alternate alternate universe...with Rarity, Pinkie, and Rainbow being born as colts...interesting....:pinkiesmile:

i was skeptical about this at first thinking, "is this gonna have AppleDash?", then i read……"No?…TwiDash! all my yays!"

Bring me MORE!:flutterrage:

1900041 TwiDash ftw :twilightsmile::rainbowkiss:
also I think they should bring up if no one wins... :twilightsmile::rainbowkiss:

Silly Bubble, being subtle minimizes the confession's shock value. Then again, 'Bubble Berry' and 'subtlety' aren't the kind of words that show up in the same sentence, eh?

Cute, I also like how pinkie(berry) is not crazy off the wall like most fics!

1919548 do you mean bring up the bet are you crazy (i am but thats not the point :pinkiecrazy: ) if no one wins they will have been dating for months and one thing a girl never wants to here is "i only started dating you to win a bet"

1919946 yes I mean like if none of them ever break up

1919954 OK here is what will happen if they do that, :rainbowdetermined2:>> "twilight i know we have been married for 10 years but i have to tell you the only reason i started dating you was to win a bet" :twilightoops: >> "YOU WHAT" :rainbowderp: >> "... i love you" :twilightangry2:>> *ZAP NOW YOUR A PLANT*

1919975 never need to mention it but what if the bet flops since no one stops dating :twilightsmile:/:yay:/:ajsmug:

1919984 then the guys take the secret to there graves and never never never never never never never never tell there girls about it :scootangel: because if they do find out it will be like this :fluttercry:/:facehoof:/:ajsleepy:<(pretend this is sad face) then this :flutterrage:/:twilightangry2:/:ajbemused:< (pretend this is an angry face)

1920022 we need more Spike and a angry AJ emotes :twilightangry2:

1920034 yes yes we do, don't forget :trollestia: and :eeyup:

1920063 also Zecora, Owlowiscious, Philomena, Angel, Gummy, Winona, Opal, all the background unicorns, pegasus and earth ponies, Stephen Magnet, Candence, Shining, Sombra, Discord, NMM, Chrysalis and everyone else but Luna :trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

1920072 maybe we have just the right number right now

1920077 not without at least one of best pony Zecora, also obviously the everyone but Luna is a troll thing
EDIT: But Opal's Cheshire Grin in The Stare Master would be a cool one

1920080 fine but luna too cause she better then trollestia :trollestia:

1920088 better than troll worse than normal when she stopped talking like she was Ye Ol England (any appearance after Lunar Eclipsed)

D'awww! So deliciously sweet and fluffy.:pinkiehappy:

I call upon the all knowing lord of foresight and he has told me that three relationships will bloom and then crumble when a certain bet is discovered and then all of the idiot stallions will be forced to work for the mares:rainbowlaugh:

I applaud thee Elusive. Also first

Good tactic but it could end sour if AJ don't like a stallion being to forward. Or she could kiss back and really make things interesting.:pinkiehappy:

damn say what you want about the dude but he got skill at picking up the ladies that hook line sinker perfect

Elusive had turned back to his drawings when Applejack replied. He remained silent for a moment as he realized the dangerous position he had just landed in.

I like to think Elusive had the following look on his face when that happened.
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I hope you can give me more opportunities to reference this game.:pinkiehappy: Keep up the work.

Damn you, Fimfiction! Why didn't you notify me when this updated!

AH! my heart! it actually hurts!

so beautiful!:raritycry: MORE! :raritycry:

I can haz sum Twidash? PLZ?

:twilightsmile: :heart: :rainbowkiss:

2082524 Technically that would be TwiBlitz. And yes. Eventually. *Evil Laughter*

2082539 WHY MUST YOU WITHHOLD SUCH VALUABLE CHAPTERS FROM ME? WHHHYYYYYYY!?

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Okay, I'm better. Expect Ezio Auditore to be outside of your window tonight. You should know what he wants you to do.

Hnnnng, this story is adorable! :pinkiehappy:

I noticed one tiny error though that you might want to clean up:

Fluttershy looked out from her mane with a single of her large beautiful eyes

That's a bit difficult to parse. Did you mean "a single one of her large, beautiful eyes"? Or, better "with one of her large, beautiful eyes"?

2082555 Good luck. I shall be sending a member of the Vindicare Temple to yours. :pinkiecrazy:

Well played, Elusive. Well played.

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I'll get right on that.

Honestly, I don't have anything to say about this chapter and story other than " DAWWWWW" and "MOAR!".

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