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RaijingtheClockworkPony


Just a guy that writes fan fiction from time to time.

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Black Wing was one of the elite. A member of the highest order within the Equestrian Military but when Luna fell so did he and many of the members of the Night Legion. Now he has returned to a changed Equestria.

This story will be undergoing a rewrite in the near future. It's highly likely characters will be ret-conned, or back stories will be changed.

This Story is a supplement to Legend of the Arachnapony and follows the journey of Black Wing (or Sammael as he's called in LotAP)

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 17 )

Interesting, you know all too well how much I love your arachnapony story so I'll definitely read tis when I get the chance.

Freaky... Good day to release this. Forward the bluffs!

Woo! That was quite the beatdown at the end! No competition whatsoever. Remind me not to piss this... guy? Male horse? I dunno. Just don't make him mad!

Reading through it, and the typos and such seem more prominent than in Arachnapony. Other than such little gripes, I'm liking it so far.

Supplement? ...Don't you mean sequel?

3952500 No, because some of this story will happen before, during, and after the main story from LotAP. It's more or less a focus on one of the other characters in the story.

3952723 ......Then why didn't you put it in the main story?

3952757 Because I felt like it really didn't fit in with the story that was centered on Guardian, and this one is more or less going to be snapshots that will be referanced to.

3952781 ....I have a feeling that you occasionally misunderstand the term 'story' but then I'm sure you understand yours enough to do whatever you feel like to it...By the way, I am reading what this references to, and I will deliver a critique upon finishing my review. I hope you will enjoy it.

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It's a side-quel, 'nuff said. Not the same story, but connected as it's happening in parallel, not at the same time.

On the note of the story itself: there's a lot of typos. Other than that, it seems to be a very interesting story, and I look forward to seeing what happens/happened with/to Lyssa.

Please sir? can I have some more? This is such an interesting start to what could be a very interesting story

Now move along and find you little fillyfriend.

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Sammael was in his face once more. "Say it again to my face or is this civilian to scary?"

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