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The-rogue-shadow


I'm relatively new to the world of fanfiction, but I do have a real deep passion for both MLP:FIM and writing.

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After an experiment with the Elements of Harmony goes awry, Applejack awakens in a whole new world. With a whole new body. Now, with nothing to her name but her element of harmony, Applejack must find a way back to Equestria, with the help of a certain fortune hunter named Nathan Drake.

(A/N: Hi there, so this story marks a couple of milestones for me. Not only is it my first humanised fic, it is also my first proper crossover. If you find any mistakes or you have any suggestions, feel free to let me know. And thank you.)

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 108 )

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I don't know anything about this series of games, but I'm going to favorite the story based entirely on "black, Kevlar-lined motorcycle cargo pants"

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That's all it took? awesome. And just for the record. Black, Kevlar lined motorcycle cargo pants are extremely comfortable. I actually have a pair. :pinkiehappy:

Hey Derrin. I love this game series, although the only one I've played all the way through is the 2nd one. Also, is this going to be a romance? I'm not sure if I like AppleJackXDrake.... Although it is an original idea. I'll have to give this a read later and tell you my thoughts.:twilightsmile:

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I wasn't going to go that way with it actually. Drake has Elena for that. :twilightsmile:

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Besides, everyone knows that Sully is way more AJ's type.

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Oh yeah? I can see that haha.

1403402Oh yea....:derpyderp2::derpytongue2::derpyderp1: I just derped so hard....

That was quite enjoyable, though I noticed a few errors. Might want to shoot over to the Proofreaders and People Willing to Proofread group and pick up a proofreader. Though it was mostly only a few capitalization errors and this:

digging into her skin as rolled onto her stomach

Should be "skin as she rolled".

Hope you continue this because it has piqued my curiosity.

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It's cool, and besides, I only ship AJ with Rainbow Dash. So far.

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Oh, thank you very much, I'll change that and then go check them out. :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

1403707Wait a second... How am I not watching you yet? Because iaza.com/work/121008C/iaza11560283550300.gif

1403783No prob, man. We bronies gotta stick together!:twilightsmile:

1404397Indeed. I'll message you... Tomorrow(?) when I have read this for my thoughts on it. And goodnight, good sir!

There were some minor grammar issues here and there, but I'm liking where this is going. Please continue this!:twilightsmile:

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Thanks, and I know there are a few issues. I wrote this after finishing an assignment at about 11:30 that night, so....:ajsleepy:

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"I only ship Applejack with Rainbow Dash."
You are now awesome to me. :pinkiehappy:

This story has potential I'll fav it

I am very pleased by this update.

This is very good. Faving and on to the next chapter :rainbowdetermined2:

I was wondering when you were gonna update this, but it looks like I'm late for the party:ajsmug::twilightsmile:

Kansas, a state in the southern half of America
Uh, a state in the center of North America.

It's kind of sad about New Orleans. It's still a dump, even years later. I drove through, and was too depressed to stop.

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Sorry about that, I'm Australian and here Kansas is usually considered to be in the south. Is there a state you can suggest that would suit her accent better?

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Georgia. Alabama. Mississippi. Texas. South Carolina. Arkansas (pron: Are-ken-saw).....Anywhere that used to be part of the old Confederated States.

1736568 I personally would suggest Missouri, although there's nothing wrong with choosing Kansas. I was just a little confused on the geography. You being from outside the United States explains that, and I probably shouldn't nitpick so much.

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Fun fact: Arkansas = Ar-Kansas, even if it isn't pronounced that way.

I applaud the use the whole Rainbow Serpent thing. I can remember they used to tell stories about that on Playschool back in the day.

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I should have known that. I had people from Kansas, Idaho and Ohio as Housemates this year. AND I know someone from Missouri, and the accents are pretty similar. Thanks for the suggestion.

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Thanks very much. I feel silly because I had a housemate from Kansas this year at Uni, and the accents are nothing alike.

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Thanks, and so do I. I love mythology of any kind, and I try to interweave it into my stories whenever I can.

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There used to be an old sitcom that ran for years on end in the sixties called 'The Beverly Hillbillies'; the protagonists were a group of subsistence farmers from the hill country of Arkansas who sold the oil rights to their otherwise worthless property and moved to Los Angeles to be closer to their money. Wacky hijinks ensued as they tried their best to not let their money turn them into snobs. They spoke as AJ does.

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I remember that show. We even have an old Beverly Hillbillies board game lying around the house somewhere.

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As I recall, the only reason it ever went off the air was that the network purged all the rural sitcoms in order to appeal to a wider demographic base.

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Was that what happened to 'The Dukes of Hazzard' as well?

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Oh, no. The Dukes of Hazzard was filmed decades after Beverly Hillibilles. I

1403707 Excuse me while I go see all your other stories!

Also, it isn't often when I read crossovers, but you've piqued my interest.

Haven't read it yet and I already know it's gonna be good! :twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

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I'm really glad you enjoyed it. And I hope you enjoy my other stories. :pinkiehappy:

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And I hope that it doesn't dissapoint. :pinkiehappy:

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A fan fic disappointing? You trippin'. :twilightsmile::ajsmug:

I love this. As far as I can tell, you've got a storyline going that's befitting of the Uncharted series. I own all three games myself (and am in the process of writing my own crossover with the dynamic duo of Nate & Sully), and I can say you've gotten their personalities down really well! Well done! Tracking this with gusto! :pinkiehappy:

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Thank you. I'm really glad you are enjoying it. I too own all three games and I am soon going to be playing all three of them in one big marathon session for my deviantart followers.

The plot thickens :rainbowderp:

This story makes me happy. I just wish you could type faster and update it more than once per month.

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