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It was just another day on Gunsmoke. Vash the Stampede was locked in a gun battle against two outlaws, but in the aftermath of the fight, a strange light burst out of the desert, bringing with it a strange woman. Lost and alone on this strange new world, Applejack must trust in the strange creature that the people call "The Humanoid Typhoon". Will Applejack find her way home? Or will the bounty on Vash's head lead her to her final rodeo?

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Comments ( 51 )

Trigun Huh? Do not dissapoint :rainbowderp:

3302594 I wouldn't dream of it. I love the series far too much to make this sub-par. I believe next chapter I'll be introducing Applejack into the wonderful world of insurance...

3302603 heh heh Sounds interesting :twilightsmile:

wait Trigun? don't care I'm in full support of this

Okay. Definitely want to see where this goes.
There going to be shipping?
Also, where in the series is this exactly?

*looks at 'sex' tag* :facehoof:
As long as it not Vash getting it on I have no hate tho it ain't my story so...have at it :rainbowkiss:

3303333 This takes place after the events of Badlands Rumble, hence Wolfwood mentioning Gasback. There won't be any real shipping, perhaps Applejack gaining some feelings for Vash out of gratitude, or something between Vash and Meryl, but no full blown shipping. 3303932 Don't worry, it's teen rated so the tag is only for sexual themes i.e. Vash staring at Applejack's... features. And besides, this is Gunsmoke we're talking about. Better be safe with those tags than to regret it later.

Well, if you have to die, a Trigun fic would be the way to go..

His gaze seemed very unnerving, as though he was looking at her body rather than her.

:ajbemused:Yep. That's Vash alright.

Trigun is an amazing anime. I love the style of vash's revolver. It wonder what applejacks reaction will be like to his fake arm.

When I saw Vash's reaction to "a pony", I had a sudden mental image of him standing over pony Applejack with a hairbrush and saying "Brushie Brushie!" Am I the only one?

Also, I'm surprised Vash hasn't put together or explained her being from another dimension. After all, the plants work by drawing energy from extra dimensional organisms.

All that aside, well written and enjoyable. Good job! Looking forward to more.

Could be good but ... you really lack descriptions, and I think it's crippling the story.

AJ don't know shit about anything, you NEED to describe the various characters way more than that. Especially détails like how huge and soft-spoken Milly is compared to the small but energetic Meryl for exemple.
Add more description about how AJ's body work differently than her pony's one, how sensitive hands are compared to hooves, how she can see farther because she's taller, etc ...

I've seen Triggun and know how the characters looks or acts, but so far if I didn't seen the anime I have no clue about these détails at all with the few things written. And you need to correct this.

3309150 Well, Applejack hasn't mentioned the Plant that was on Equestria, but two and two WILL be put together soon.

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Actually, as far as Applejack reacting to the new world, her surroundings, and the changes to her body, there's one thing I'd really like to see.

Since they were actually alone for the moment, Applejack decided to ask a question that had been bugging her for quite some time. She was glad it was just her and Vash, as he seemed to be the only one who actually believed she was from another world and didn't used to be human. "Say, Vash?"

"Yes, Applejack?" Vash replied, turning to face her with a goofy smile.

"What are these?" she asked, cupping the mounds of flesh that protruded from her upper torso, the likes of which she'd never seen before arriving here.

She wasn't quite sure why her innocent question resulted in Vash falling over backwards with blood explosively leaking from his nose.

3309246 I'm gonna get to that sort of stuff once these robbers face the hilarious wrath of Vash.

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The worst is, I can totally picture this scene :facehoof:

3309254
Alright. But giving us more of the world from Applejack's perspective will help flesh out the story.

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Is that because it totally fits the characters too well, or did I just write it that good?

Im curious to what its going to take for the others besides Vash to believe AJ is from another world. Vash seems like he is believing what she said. But when she said Pony a couple of thoughts ran through my head on what Vash is thinking.

3310000 Remember how he grew up on one of the SEEDS ships which had education and animals from Earth? I figure he easily could have learned about horses, and by extension, ponies.

3310630 that is true. but its one thing to know about those animals. then to believe some one saying they are one of those animals i would think. but then again im not a big expert on Trigun characters. But Vash does seem to trust easily, of course that could all just be appearance

You have my attention with this one!! :ajsmug:

lol they're already in a town...so Applejack's getting a crash course on Humanoid Typhoon 101

3314174 I.. Never knew that was a thing... It's glorious.

in the face.. shoot em in the face!!!:flutterrage:

3318841 You have watched Trigun before, right?

I don't wanna sound impatient or anything, but... UPDATE!!!!!!

Yeah, normally I don't do that, since I understand how hard it is to keep up a flow, but seriously. I wanna see Vash kick some ass. And AJ's reaction to it.

And So Applejack gets to see the Humanoid Typhoon and The Punisher in action...Faust help her.

> Get home to see roommate watching Trigun
> Look up pony/Trigun crossovers
> Read story
> Require updates
:rainbowkiss:

Honest Disaster updated... my evening is complete, :pinkiehappy:

So glad to have it back. Hope updates will be more frequent...and that you remember where you were going with it after all this time!:rainbowlaugh:

Like that scene with AJ, Wolfwood, and the gun. Also like AJ putting Vash in his place. ...but where did she learn bipedal hand to hand combat so fast?

5265070 Suspension of disbelief. In any of these fics there is almost no good explanation for how any of the characters can move around in these bodies in the amount of time they do. That said, AJ is no stranger to scrapes in Equestria, so it stands to reason she has a few moves that translate over into this body.

Oh praise the lord for this wonderful gift on this day!

5265081 my best guess is that the body instills some form of innate muscle memory in the mind of its user.

Great to see this story updating again. Too bad there isn't more trigun and mlp crossover stories. either way another great chapter. can't wait to see more.

When I see this story while flipping trough my favorites I always say to myself, "That is one of the best ideas I've seen. Too bad it probably won't continue." Boy am I glad I was wrong.

If I were to give some critique I'd say that you nail Vash, Wolfwood, and Meryl quite well. You got AJ's stubbornness pretty well too. But I think that there's one too many references in here. While we did love those moments in Trigun I think it kinda ruins the immersion. It sticks out too much to say, "Remember that? That was really funny!" But I think that this story can be awesome in it's own right, not using what has already been established as funny and/or awesome. YOU can make that awesome moment when AJ realizes what kind of man Vash is and how skilled/powerful he is. YOU can make those funny moments between AJ and Vash/Wolfwood. YOU can come up with interesting situations to throw these characters into. YOU can do that and I know you can. I'll be here rooting for ya and waiting for the next chapter, Godspeed friend.

Dude, I haven't even read the story yet, but I already want to shoot you with Milly's gun multiple times. You haven't updated in over a year! And theres only three chapters!:flutterrage:

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