• Member Since 22nd May, 2012
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The-rogue-shadow


I'm relatively new to the world of fanfiction, but I do have a real deep passion for both MLP:FIM and writing.

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Spin off to 'Always Connected' and explores the repercussions for the mane six in the wake of Gilda's attack. With two elements of harmony down, they must find replacements. A certain time travelling pony and his wall eyed assistant come to their aid as Equestria is plunged into war, and difficult decisions are made that will change them all forever.

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 39 )

Oh, that explains a few things from the original. Brilliant plot hole covering. Kind of feels like when Moffat cleared up a lot of plot holes during River Song's arc with just one episode. -is talking about Doctor Who- :raritywink:

1420873
I guessed that. I'm a major whoovian.

Ohohoho! This is sounding more interesting by the chapter! :pinkiecrazy:

"Meany pants!" Duskheart laughed, "You are not fit for war girl, go back and make me a cupcake."

This remotely reminds me of way back then, when women were not allowed to fight in wars and couldn't do much except make sandwiches food and give aid to injured men.

"Hey, you're Mac's fillyfriend right?" He asked. Fluttershy nodded her head. "Well don't worry, from what I've seen Mac's a fighter. He got that wound at the start of the battle and he just kept going. Hell, he saved my life more than once. I have no doubt that he's going to pull through."

I believe it should be "marefriend," but oh well.

1422894
Thank you. I am really happy you are enjoying it.

1422909
Thanks for picking that up, very few people got that. :twilightsmile:

1424509
You're right, it should be marefriend, but I only learnt the proper term recently, and I just forgot that it was wrong. :twilightblush:

Ah, Rarity's point of view. It was inveitable! :raritywink:

I see a Doctor Who-esque plotline here....and not complaining. :rainbowlaugh:
From what I've read from you and the information I've gathered, I can conclude one thing: you, dear author, are from the UK. :twilightsmile: I'm kind of hoping my hypothesis is right.

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Close, but afraid not. I am actually from Australia. Still a part of the British commonwealth though. :pinkiehappy:

"YOU'RE PREGNANT!" :moustache: Happens to the best of us.

I see, so the Doctor already knew everything was in her mind! Once he tricked it into thinking it was safe, everything was okay! :pinkiehappy: A fine way to end Rarity's mini-arc, if I do say so myself.

1425541 Close enough. An Aussie, eh?
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Assassin's Creed reference...I see it!

1425955
That's right, Australian born and bred.

1425963
yeah, I tried to fit quite a few references into my stories just as a bit of fun. Like the second chapter has a green lantern reference.

Celestia chooses her time to die terribly. :trollestia: A troll to her last breath.

1433277
True, bit I'm not entirely sure she had a choice in the matter. :rainbowlaugh:

It's all in a day's work of PINKIE PIE!

A nice ending to a nice chapter. :coolphoto:

I somehow felt awkward reading this chapter. :twilightsheepish:

1438566
Thank you, I'm very happy you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

1441341
A marriage proposal turning into a threesome is definitely not awkward. :rainbowlaugh:

As I descend into the last chapter, I find it quite satisfying to end with AJ and RD waking up. :pinkiesmile: It's time I headed to the last story of this series. /sigh

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Good point. And don't worry, it's not the last story in the series. I have a sequel to 'The Element of Laughter' titled 'Broken Laughter' that is set after 'Aftermath' that I'm going to write after 'Dusk Rises' which is another in the series. And then after that is a prequel featuring The Doctor and Derpy and will mention a few of the timey wimey things I touched on in the others.

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Oh ho! It seems I have much to expect from you. :twilightsmile:

And I hope I live up to the expectations. :twilightblush:

1420873 Which episode is that? :pinkiesmile:

Loleus, why are you always the first, and quite often the only, comment on each chapter?

Flutters, Your scaring me.
:flutterrage: :twilightoops:

Pinkie... you are not a human nor a matrix pony:facehoof:... yet you do these things:applejackconfused:... you are a super pony:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:.

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