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The second age of superheroes has now come to Equestria with there being three foal superheroes in Ponvyille: Superfilly, Filly Be-Goode and Kid Dash.
However when pompous snooty filly Diamond Tiara after being infused with one of Discord's scales she becomes endowed with great dangerous powers! These three super fillies temaing up with new heroes Cyborg and the Blue Beetle will have to form the Foal Titans in order to stop Tiara before she gets someone seriously hurt or killed with her powers!
Taking place on my MLP DC Comics universe Earth 52!
Chapters (5)
Coool!
I like!
I like it, but i found some grammar errors. I would suggest getting an editor when you have the chance,.
Fun fact on the original version of 'pony freeze" I came up with: Victoria wanted revenge (meaning, she wants to kill them), not to make them like her. Mostly since she could only express rage and hate. Another thing is, unlike this version, she never is sent to Arkham. The reason is she can't be held there, as they'd need a way to keep her at her current temperature. Also, She still has her morals intact, just not when it involves her ex and daughter, so any hero or moral pony can talk her out of anything that is completely Immoral. She just just want to make Icicle and Frost suffer for their crimes.
Another thing is, she does have a son named Coldwave (aka Captain Cold). He is not a bad guy per-say, as he is only stealing bits to try to pay for a cure for his mother (not a good guy, but has better morals than his father and sister). He also does not kill (for the same reason his DC counterpart doesn't. The Rogues don't kill unless they feel they should, and even then, they don't kill women and children. For being criminals, the Flashs' Rogues Gallery [as in Captain Cold, the Trixeter, Mirror Master, Captain Boomerang, and the other main rogues besides Zoom and Grodd] are saints compared to the rest of the DCU villains or most real world criminals).
As you can tell, I was trying to link the major ice villains together when I created that backstory for Victoria.
Other than those differences, nice use of that origin story. And thanks for the credit.
Woah. Button Mash as a Scarab. It shall be very interesting.
pretty good cant wait for more.
Great story but you need a proof reader... Just saiyan
Mesa like. MOAR!
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Nice pun, both broneigh and Saiyan.
Great story! Please hurry up and write the next chapter I'm dying for it!
3848505 i can sea that happening why one the dc blue scarab are video game dudes two simeler persenalitys, sory for miss spell.
yes pinkie and I am so excited
I only have on nitpick, it's Button Mash, not Buttons Mash. Otherwise, glad to have you back!
Hey there. Thanks greatly for getting this story continued. I have to admit, I love the mixture of action and humor. :-D I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this. :-D
Excellent job on this wrap-up. :-D The action, humor, references and possible future adventure set-up are well done in all the right places. :-D
HooF cannons.
How do you put Deviantart picture on Fimfictions?
6009064 mas long as you have permission from the artist ont he site you can use it here
Just save the pic and then upload it
You know, my favorite person who makes superhero fimfictions is Michael_Ravencroft, but is as good as my favorite fanfiction; Michael_Ravencroft's MLDC: SHAZAM, Equestria's Mightiest Mare. So please, make a longer version of this story
You know, my favorite person who makes superhero fimfictions is Michael_Ravencroft. But this fan fiction is as good as my favorite fimfiction; MLDC: SHAZAM, Equestria's Mightiest Mare. So please, make a longer version of this story
Can't wait to read about what happens next in this story nvm
This was an interesting concept and I really wanted to like this story, but I just can't. There's way too much telling and not enough showing.
Nice!
Quick question though. I've been thinking of making a Blue Beetle story on here.
I was wondering if I could use your idea of the Super Friends and the Foal Titans in my story?
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Not really my idea but I think the foal Titans were
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Okay, good to know.
I'll let you know when it's public.