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This story is a sequel to Parental Fear
Opaline has finally been defeated, but her words still hang heavily on Alphabittle's mind. How could somepony be so cruel for no reason? It's even worse, because she held Misty captive for so long. Desperate to gain some closure, Alphabittle invites Misty to the Crystal Tearoom for a talk.
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Ah man. Downright emotional one-shot with Alphabittle and Misty. Yeah, I could see where discussing Opaline would be an extremely touchy subject.
Yeah it kind of sucks that Misty was stuck with that crazy alicorn for almost her life
Oh yeah that's stupid glitter age which how the heck did anybody took some of those things from the beach
This was a pretty nice conversation between these two especially Alphabittle still feels guilty about what happened to Misty but Misty never blames him for anything I mean despite everything it did turned out pretty well at least they found each other and maybe they can finally this reunion with each other I really like this one keep up the good work
Misty: “So Dad, when are you and Haven gonna get married?”
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Alphabittle spews out his tea.
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This is a nice heartfelt conversation betwween 2 ponies who really need to do that more often.
Good, but the first three chapters are background info-dump, as well as being all telling and no showing. They could have been cut and the story wouldn't lose anything.
I like having more Misty stories to read. A nice discussion about everything after Opaline was defeated seems like should been in the show.
Hopefully someone can write something about Alphabittle and Haven getting together, then Misty will have a new step-mother, and step-sisters. After everything she deserves a big family. I feel that Haven would be a nice mother-figure for her.