Sunset is surprised when the Dazzlings want to return to Equestria--and in the spirit of Hearth's Warming, want to make amends with those they've wronged in the past. What she nor Starlight on the other side know is: the Dazzlings have revenge in mind on the one creature who wronged them so long ago.
It's just not who you think it is.
Written for DrakeyC for Jinglemas 2023. Merry Jinglemas!
This story can be considered a spiritual sequel to last year's Jinglemas story, "Good Will Towards Man", but reading it first is not necessary.
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Wow, this was quite the story. So, many little beats throughout. I applaud what you have done here, great holiday piece that is sure to last for for years to come.
This made me stop and do a double take because I've NEVER even thought of the geodes being taken back to Equestria...and then it occurred to me that whenever they crossed over, they didn't have the geodes as ponies. I have many questions now...
To be honest I was disappointed it wasn't really focused on Sunset and Starlight, but they were good supporting cast. And for what it is, I don't mind the Sirens at all, they're great characters too and I liked what you did with them here. The idea of them being rivals with the changelings has never crossed my mind either but it makes perfect sense, so it was interesting watching them and figuring out what their scheme was.
Not quite what I wanted, but unexpectedly enjoyed it just as much all the same, and I mean that in a good way. Thanks very much for the read and the gift. Merry Jinglemas
This was lovely Bill. Always love seeing the Sirens return home to Equestria scenario, and I love what you did with it.
Happy Holidays, Bill!
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I'm glad you liked it! Merry Jinglemas.