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Just a man with loads of free time and loads of fanfiction ideas


Tired, cold and hungry, the Dazzlings look to their last remaining hope and ask if Sunset Shimmer can put up with them for the night. There is one problem, it's late at night and Sunset is not pleased to be awake.

Takes place two days after Rainbow Rocks.

Credit for the image goes to 0bluse.

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Comments ( 25 )

I see a neatly modified version of one of my own little comment-scenes from way back in February in here! That someone found it funny enough to use is oddly flattering. :pinkiesmile:

6049915 Yeah, I'm kind of easy to please, though it sometimes depends on what I'm reading. :twilightsmile:

"Maybe they do deserve a second chance..."

"And then they snored. I immediately regret my decision."
^Imagining that right now.

Also, Aria, not Aira. XD

6051675 6052101 Oh my god! All this time, I've been spelling Aria's name wrong? :pinkiegasp:

I'm a class five idiot! :facehoof: Anyways, it's been corrected now. :twilightblush:

I liked :pinkiesmile:
you should do a sequel? :ajsmug:
I'm just saying :twilightsheepish:
You're good, keep it up :raritywink:


No worries, it's cool. XD

6053497 Well, it's tempting but I'm gonna resist for now and thanks. :pinkiehappy:

6054518 don't worry :twilightsmile:
i like you fanfics :pinkiesmile:

Well that was marvelously silly. :pinkiehappy:

6062403 Cheers, I had a lot of fun writing this. :twilightsheepish:

Fun and silly! Liked and faved!

6049915 I see one of mine in here, too.

"carnie-vores" was I the only one that started imagining the sirens eating carnies? (probably, I need sleep)
"I once stayed awake all night long to see if I snored, and I didn't!" I can't stop laughing. "Do I look like I care anymore?" Aw man, so great.
I really like these Dazzlings-seek-refuge-with-Sunset stories! It's nice to see that you've decided she's pretty fully integrated into society now. At first I thought she was being unsympathetic, but then I saw the sleepy grump in her, and by the time I got to the end it was really sweet and cute. Good pacing, good characterization. Short and simple, just the way I like it.

6143244 Many thanks for that. :pinkiesmile:

I do so hope this story just does not end here, it would be a shame if it did.

6843370 Well, I didn't really plan to make a follow-up. :twilightsheepish:

Maybe if I can find the time to plan a sequel (since 2016 may well be a busy year for me), I'll see what I can do.

I find it strange that after thousands years in human world they wouldn't have house and lot of money.

6844556 I hope you make a sequel

"Yes, we... we apologize! Really!" Aria added, half-heartedly. "We didn't mean to try and conquer the school, and then starting a world war after that to feed on conflict and achieve apotheo-OW!"

Apotheosis? Aiming kinda high there Aria. Takes more than a butt load of power to become a god. You'll just be stupidly powerful.

maybe she meant in a way that all life below them would be subject to their will, and not God in the omnipotent sense.

Aria facepalmed harder at the dramatic scene. "Ugh, sure, kill any dignity we had left all at once, nice work Sonata."

Sonata sniffed. "I do my best."

She's perfect.

"And when the normal food wasn't enough, they offer themselves!" Sonata added. "Back in the old days, I would gorge myself on them by the hundreds like tacos and-" Adagio elbowed her to stop saying anymore. "Oww! What? What did I say?"

Somehow, Sonata manages to make eating ponies by the hundreds adorable

i love that aria was saying sonata was dumb for thinking they were gonna hallucinate each other as food, but couldnt even finish the thought before she saw adiagio as a cream puff.

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