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StevieBond


Just a man with loads of free time and loads of fanfiction ideas

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After being let down by her former student, Princess Celestia selects a new and promising student to take under her wing and teach her, but can Twilight Sparkle at her filly age be able to train and study more than anypony could handle in a short space of time?

A follow-up story to The Adventures Of Tia & Woona

Based on the fanon idea about Twilight's accelerated training with a few twists of mine added in.

Artwork design and credit goes to harwicks-art.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 12 )

Principle = a primary rule, law, or resolution
Principal = a primary person, the person in charge of a school

Good story, but please get an editor.

Errr... I can understand why Celestia acted like that but don't she already know that Twilight will need friends and contact to become a bearer of the element? I mean, yeah she must be good in magic. But if she become so good that she will confront Luna instead to run for her life and go collect the elements, it will end badly.
Also, how does she know about Luna in the first place? The only book aout that is hidden and will only be present to her a few time before the return of NM according to canon.... so how?

Don't mean to sound harsh but they did act out of character in this chapter but I still like this story

Eh, everything feels robotic and scripted.

Ehhh, What?
The characters are insanely OOC.
Will read the last chapter before I rate.

Celestia was looking for a female? why?

this gave me a dark thought where it back fires on Celestia as Twi does not snap at Celestia and grows not making friends with the other 5 as she thinks that get in the way and killing Nightmare Moon and Luna because she also thinks Family is a wast if time and Celestia has to live with the fact, it was all her doing

this seemed a bit rushed

Based on these pictures, huh?

You resolved the conflict way too quickly and easily. The training was outright traumatic, but easily brushed away; her breakdown was instantly dispersed by a passing maid; Celestia was forgiven instantly, and no genuine reparation was made (returning what should never have been taken from her doesn't make up for anything). This was what the story revolved around, but it ended with not a bang, but a whimper. As a result, the story is left with an unsatisfying conclusion.
Although it certainly explains the deeply-rooted terror Twilight has of Celestia in canon.

And what will Luna think, when she learns that much of her return was based upon foal abuse?

Also... who put this in the Momlestia group? There's nothing mothering here, nor any implication of a bond beyond that of student and teacher.

I haven't gotten around to reading the story but it's my headcanon that Celestia chose Twilight to become her eventual successor.

6872894 You mean what Lauren Faust said she wanted to happen?

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