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Serina


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Octavia's Encounter with Vinyl Scratch, also known as DJ-Pon3, at the Princess' Hearth's Warming Eve Concert, leads to an unexpected collaboration.


Part of Serina's Hearth's Warming Eve Collection for 2023.

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Lord Huron?

This was a lovely, feel good slice of life. Its nice to see a Vinyl/Tavi characterizations where they actually appreciate and understand eachothers music, since oftentimes theyre depicted as blowing it off as too snobbish/simplistic.

I really enjoyed this fanfic. Those two are so sweet together.

Octavia, with her polished demeanor, navigated through the crowd, her cello carefully cradled in her magical aura.

Little nitpick, but Octavia is an Earth Pony, so no magical aura to levitate stuff with.

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Thank you! I do think that specializing in a classical instrument in Canterlot does have the stereotype of being snobbish. However, I think musicians in the modern era are beginning to respect one another and collabing much more often than they used to outside their normal genres.

11771719
Thank you! They are one of my fav ships 💙

11771921
Whoops! I knew I'd forget something. I originally had it with her hauling it on her back and then I was like that seems unreasonable through a crowd. I meant to have her assistant assist her! Fixed!

Octavia :heart: so obviously I had to read.

Not gonna lie this was a bit strange. I liked it, don't get me wrong, but it was weird.

The first part felt like you wrote it and then wrote it again. Especially with these parts...

"You know, Octavia," Vinyl began, her sunglasses perched on her forehead,

Vinyl Scratch, her sunglasses now resting atop her forehead,

I dunno it felt like i read the initial parts twice.

Octavia was great here. Vinyl felt more refined and romantic than I'd expect from her, but it's your Vinyl so...

All in all, have a like.

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Thanks for the like! I went back through the story and realized how many times I mentioned sunglasses and I was like "How in the world..." My normal writing style is writing everything in one sitting to avoid accidentally repeating phrases or similar dialogue. Some of these stories I would go back and forth between back in November, which I probably shouldn't have because I would work on the end of the story then the beginning etc. I also wish I had more time to proofread them, but the past month was busier than expected. However, since I am down with the flu for the rest of this week, I am taking the time to go back and re-read published & unpublished stories to polish them a bit more. Hopefully, that will reduce errors.

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Understandable considering the pure volume of fics you're releasing. Nbd just found it a little confusing.

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