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[ 2nd Person fic starring YOU and SOARIN ]
Wake up, go to work, go home, repeat.
This is the schedule of your average day as a Lieutenant in the prestigious Royal Guard, and you're perfectly content with that. Life continues on as normal as ever until you meet Soarin, Captain of the Wonderbolts for the first time.
And then your life changes in a way that you wouldn't ever have guessed.

Yes, this is a gay fic.

Rated Teen for mild language and sexual references. There will be no clop in this story (I will be posting clop in a separate, Mature story).

Picture created by Skipsy. God I love Skipsy

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 44 )

No human this time? Okay.
I thought Soarin was the second in command.

Edit - Okay, so then this story does have ''you'' as a human? If not why was it added to the Humans Falling in Love With Ponies group?

Good to see you haven't fallen off the face of the earth. Great story so far.

First chapter got me all excited for the next one! Sad to see downvotes on this. It's nicely written.

A bit more padding in some areas than was necessary, but it's early enough to overlook it. Hopefully it will come into play later. Aside from that, it is well written and I would be interested in reading more. :pinkiehappy:

I found a very minor thing you may want to edit.

You thought Octavia was gushing over the two of you hugging, but after Vinyl disengages from your hug, you see that she has found your neighbors cat.

“My neighbors cat,” you say.

In both of these instances, that should be "neighbor's"

I am really liking this! The setup is interesting, the characters are great and very well written, hell everything is well written. I'm incredibly excited to read more of this!!!

I really enjoyed this chapter, but I wish they could be up a lot sooner because I kinda forgot about this fic.

Keep up the good work!

cool not bad not bad at all. some 2nd person fics would usually make to much of a back story for you as a person and it ruins the anonymity but i thing you had a great balance of it and mystery. good job! :twilightsmile:

This is one Damn fine read. Keep up the good work.

I love this fic so much! It's so well written, the characters are all written well, and it manages to have a second person perspective that actually pulls you into the story instead of pushing you out. I simply can't wait for more! Easily one of my favorite fics on this site!! Keep up the great work! :raritywink:

This fic is really good so far. I like the slow pace of it, and how it doesn't just throw you into the romance. It's a nice change of pace. Really looking forward to the next chapter.

yay! im glad you're still here! Good luck with your whole major thing! :twilightsmile:

I need more of this story. Like, NOW

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Nice chapter, but there's a minor thing you may want to edit.

“Where is the race.

That should be a question mark.

I'm so happy to see more of this story! This story is one of my favorites ever, I stop doing whatever I'm doing when I find out about an update so I can read it. It keeps getting better! :raritywink::yay:

I love this story I normally don't like second person pov but this seems to be an exeption

awwwww. CUTE! :heart: i love it! and its so well written as well!

This story is really good so far, please keep adding more chapters and keep up the great work! :twilightsmile:

i love this so much soarin is like the nerd that gets flustered when he talks to a girl he likes

I need more of this story. Just gunna sit here and wait for the next chapter so keep up the good awesome work.

Yes! A new chapter of my favorite fanfic! And it is a super cute chapter too! Cannot wait for the next chapter as always, keep up the amazing work!! :raritywink:

When is the next chapter

omg their such dorks .. I LOVE ITS SO CUTE! :yay: Your doing so well keep it up!

God I love this fic so much! The only fic that whenever I see an update to it I drop whatever I am doing and read! It is just SO GOOD! :pinkiehappy:

Keep up the good work! :raritywink:

I swear to god i felt my heart stop while reading this. Soarin's cuteness is going to kill me.

I need more of this story so DON'T STOP

Soarin is just too cute! I can't wait until the next chapter :twilightsmile:

The level of D'awww is off the charts!

What's the update schedule for this? I read all of the current chapters today and am awaiting the next update.

THANK YOU FOR THIS UPDATE!!!! :twilightsmile:


This chapter was adorable.
I can't see any any mistakes with grammar or stuff like that, but I might just be distracted by the story.

Like every chapter so far in this story, this one was just as awesome, cute, and adorable as the others, I can't wait to see more of your content:twilightsmile:

Yay! The return of my favorite fic! I am just loving this whole thing, seriously. It's so good! Eagerly awaiting the next part, but please take your time! Perfection takes time!

This was absolutely amazing.

This whole thing is cute, adorable, and extremely easy to binge-read. Will read more later when not so tired.

Possibly my new favorite story on the site. Keep it up!

Damn must have missed this last chapter stupid phone! Really good so far, sort of reminds me of when me and my boyfriend started dating, well besides him or me being pony celebs and all that haha. Loving it so far think i like the nosey celestia the best of all. Keep up the good work.
Oh and hope your magic moment or how it's called (bugger forgot the name) gets updated sometime soon that cliffhangers been driving me crazy to this day. :twilightsmile:

Nice chapter, but there's a few things you may want to edit.

“Then great!” she yells, perking up, looking giddy. How exciting!”

You're missing a quotation mark.

And the hear some more fumbling.

And that should be then.

By the power invested in me, myself and I, (since this story hasn't been updated for exactly six months) I declare this story to be dead.

My it forever rest in peace.

Just wow... how do you write so many awesome fics? This one is just so cute :rainbowkiss:

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