A changeling out of place struggles to forge a new life while hiding from his race. He will need to find good sources of love to keep himself strong, but what if love meant more to him than food? Can he really afford to wait for somepony special? This is the story of Cherry Plum, a self-named changeling that wants to be a pony everypony would want to call friend. But he may find more than friendship in the small town of Ponyville.
M/M with Noteworthy. Teen rating is for language & suggestive themes.
Chapters (13)
Perfect just like u
not bad. just when i thought everyone had been shipped already. i like this.
3773615 im glad u enjoy his story
Interessting concept. In many ways. A clear "Thumbs up". FiMF has a lack of good (non-clop) M/M-Shipping with male Changelings.
In my opinion the only tiny flaw is the story speed. It's a little bit to fast for my taste.
Still one of the greatest writers my friend i enjoy the twist good job
This is a really good story and it is going a little to fast but I can adjust to that. You get a like, favorite, and a moustache for good non clop D'AWWWS so here you go
I like the suspense and can't wait for the rest. You still have my support
When will you return to the White Night stuff if you dont mind me asking also get better man if you need to go to the doctors
I agree. LUNA IS BEST PONY! (wait...why is there no Luna face?)
WHY IS THERE NO LUNA FACE
Well this seems interesting :D
Yup im liking the shit outta this
D'awww cool chapter
Bravo good sir
I haven't read a decent M/M romance before, but this was quite well done.
hey this is an awesome fanfic and i am bummed out that it ended but all i can say is this, not trying to offend others but in my opinion this is one of the best stories i have read on here and i think that you will have a great future with stories like these since they can take interest to many people... but anyway to wrap things up i say that this story was absolutly amazing!
Looking forward to reading this
this story is awesome i love it
so awsome
Damn,Berry is scary! And she wasn't even drunk this time!
Okay, now saying I have read this entire story I can say this.
It deserves a like. It is an alright story, interesting enough to make me keep reading.
But I also have to bring up its shortcommings.
And one huge one is the pacing. My entire thought process throughout this story was "My that escalated Quickly", Until maybe around chapter 10 when things finally got a bit of a heel on it.
Also, there are numerous typos which can bring one out of the story, and the lack of space between the paragraphs can really turn one off at first sight.
Despite all these flaws though, I will say your story was pretty good. You do certainly get a like from me.
5191667 I plan on going back through all of my earlier stuff and editing eventually, but I'm having trouble finding time to write as is. Hopefully soon I'll be able to sit down and fix everything from beginning to end.
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Just hold out hope!
Writing is a wonderful thing to do, no matter the stress. But just try and take it easy. It is fine. The story is alright, as said. But just when you find your time, it would really help you to fix up the issues.
My main issues so far is that you use ampersand (&) instead of "and," and you use numbers instead of letters on various amounts (say, 20, instead of "twenty"). The ampersands are really distracting and pull me out of the story whenever my eyes roll over them, which isn't a good thing at all. Less so for the numbers, but it's still a hiccup to overcome.
So, loving this so far. Lots of D'aww's and giggles to be had. But then I see this:
And all of a sudden I have Avid giggling like mad in my head, going, "Noteworthy! You dirty little colt! Lol!
All I can do is cackle along with this mad, dirty minded pony living in my head.
HEY!!!!!
Oh please. You know it's true.
*pouts in anger*
Great. Now he's upset. Anyway. Beautiful job.
I love human obsessed Lyra!
i like this story so much, i had no time to read anything, but now that some things happen (bad things) I have time to read a lot.
Keep up that great work you are an awesome writter. 
WHAT!
one of your stories I haven't read! I must fix this at once! 
6457030 I really like the human obsessed lyra too. It's funny and cute.
Bule's Clues !!!!!!!
(Sorry the joke got me)
Daww/10.