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“Golly,” said a small voice, and Luna looked down into dull red eyes the exact colour of blood. A filly smiled up at her, no more than ten years old. “Who are you?”
Written for the 4th Cozy Glow contest, with the prompt Cozy Glow vs. .
TW: for implied off screen emotional abuse of a child.
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This is top-notch writing. The premise is incredibly interesting and I loved both the humor and the horror. I can't believe how well executed is the change from the wholesome, kind part of the story at the beginning, to the nightmarish state of Cozy Glows' psyche at the end. If there is something that put a damper on my mood, it is the fact that this is a one shot and not a multi chapters full-fledged story. Great work. 👏
Oh crap... I hope Luna can figure out something
Uh-oh.
What a slide, from silliness at Silver Shoals, into psychological horror, and then that ending... Wow.
...please do more with this one.
I would wonder how well Cozy can pull off Nightmare Moon to fool the others.
One "Golly!" and Twilight and company might go unfreeze the statue. Of course, this Cozy Glow is apparently super murderous, what with the geisha scene, so she might just go murder Twilight with no fanfare.
A deep unsettling chill is running through my spine right now.
That was beautiful. Beautiful, in the sense that the writing is top-tier. Great work, Shaslan.
I did not expect that ending, but all of this was so well-written, amazing job <3