Bicyclette
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Damn, I was not expecting an emotional gut punch of this nature on the third story in.
Ouch, right in my feels!
...more
It's funny how people say love is the purpose of life or something, but if circumstances go wrong love can make you suffer for your whole life!
Alzheimer's?
Well, that hurt. It's a good story, just... augh!
Wow…so many twists and revelations…and so much pain for everyone. You just never know what somepony keeps in their heart; or when it will come out.
This was a terrific story that hit so hard. Well done!
Horror indeed. All too real, all too familiar. Devastating work. Well done.
I might be overthinking this, but is Mrs Cake suffering from dementia?
Howdy, hi!
Oof. Yeah this one hurt. And having old devotions appear before whom was supposed to be the love of your life while they watch you whither away is quite bad. Really well done on this one bike.
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aww im glad your gut was punched by this story, thank you!
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if by more you mean more tragic lost romances from the point of view of an elderly pony with dementia, i do have another one of those in the works, lucky you!
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really makes you think, doesn't it? but i would not give up that lifetime of suffering for the world
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or whatever the pony version of it is, sure!
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aww, thank you!
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thank you so much!
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thank you! and yes, it is pretty horrific to think that this isn't some magic fantasy disease but rather an inevitable end to all of us lucky to live long enough, huh?
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not overthinking it at all!
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yes, quite bad indeed. would really hate to be any of the Cakes right now, especially Carrot. thanks, Otter!
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I see.
Nicely done on getting a sad story like this at exactly 1000 words. Interesting to present Mrs. Cake's relationship with Pear Butter like this.
And one day we will all be together again, in an empty bliss beyond this world