The Fall Formal.
For Sunset Shimmer, this is her chance to win her crown. To finally be crowned Princess, like she deserves. She had been expecting it for weeks.
What she didn’t expect, however, was having a date. She only said yes because Flash Sentry was a popular student at CHS. She doesn’t like him.
But maybe she does? Sunset isn’t entirely sure.
Tonight is her chance to be crowned. It’s also her chance to find out how she truly feels about him.
Featured: 05/01/2023
Written for: EileenSaysHiʼs Equestria Girls Spring Fling Contest
Winner of: The Sleepless Beholdersʼs Judge Pick
Proofread and edited by: Trellia and Scroll
Now with Patreon!
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Stellar job.
Not many mistakes at all if any.
Bravo.
love it
This is a pretty good first attempt at a romance story, the awkwardness Sunset felt, in my opinion, ties it all together really well.
Very nice.
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Thank you all so much for your wonderful compliments!
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Glad I got Sunsetʼs character right. Thank you for your compliment!
You really portrayed Sunset's character really well. I always enjoy reading about Sunset before her redemption. Especially when they show signs that she isn't all bad. All in all, great story.
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Thank you!
Congratulations on the story already being featured. I'm glad this is going so well for you.
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Thank you!
This is a very nice, warmhearted take on how Sunset and Flash got together pre-EqG that does a very nice job giving these characters nuance and depth. The portrayal of Sunset as wrestling with her feelings between whether she should treat Flash as a mere asset or as a genuine partner, and their dialogue is charmingly awkward in a way that feels natural to them as confused teenagers (one of whom is still new to her species, even). Well done, and congrats on your Judge Prize!
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Thank you so much for your compliments, and for the work you put into this contest.
Iʼve always wanted to write a Sunset-Flash romance, but I never found a plot to write about. But this contest gave me an excuse to finally do it.