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DarthBall


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Nothing lived here. Nothing could.

These were the only coherent words Luna could force onto the page of her dream journal.

Who is to blame? Why is this happening? How does her sister not see the chaos unfolding?

These questions dance within Luna's addled mind as her nightmares become indistinguishable from reality.

A big thank you to UnamsuedWaffle, INeedSleep, and Orderly Disassembly for prereading and editing!

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Any feedback would be appreciated! I think I’ve greatly improved since I’ve started writing Moonlit Stranding, but I’d like to know what you guys think about this little short I made.

Also, if anyone knows any reviewers or review groups that are still active message me!

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I'm planning on adding this to the Sad Luna group, but first I have to determine how sad it is to add it to the appropriate folder.

"smol luna fic idea" my ass! But damn did you stuff some good content in those 16k words!

Took me a while. VERY nice pre-banishment story.

Freaking awesome one-shot. Nice work.

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Thank you so much!

Comment posted by nonspecific13 deleted Apr 22nd, 2023

Hello DarthBall, I wrote a review for your story that can be found here!

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