Calmer Shores

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On a world far away.
From everything today.

In a grand green forest.
Where evil does not rest.

On a quiet bright hill.
Where none do bode ill.

Lie a home, made of vines and leaves.
Twisted bout’ grand, great trees.

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Prologue: Singing Strings · 2nd Mar 2022 · 2,713 words
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Spring · 11th Mar 2022 · 63 words
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Spring's first chapter - from dark crevices, crystals shine. From a burning sun, most benign. · 19th Mar 2022 · 2,101 words
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DarthBall

DarthBall #1 · Mar 2nd, 2022 · 3 · · Prologue: Singing Strings ·

Beep

UnamusedWaffle

UnamusedWaffle #2 · Mar 2nd, 2022 · 3 · · Prologue: Singing Strings ·

I'm a sheep

Falkenlied

Falkenlied #3 · Mar 23rd, 2022 · 1 · · Spring's first chapter - from dark crevices, crystals shine. From a burning sun, most benign. ·

Needless to say; the background descriptions in this fic are astonishing, very well done!

Let me get this straight though; Benedict is some form of hermit drake that lives in the Everfree and guards the tree of harmony. He's trying to sing with it, but I can't really tell the reason. Is it connected to the sickened gems in the ground? I caught that those were the fault of others beings we haven't seen.

I know you said you thought of music and then wrote this, but I'm honestly getting more information and investment from the stunning background descriptions. I didn't really uhh...understand or feel moved by the musical descriptions.

It's a very chill story, as you had explained, so it does what it sets out to do! I like that the tree of Harmony is its own character and that it speaks. And I'm personally hoping for some interactions with Fluttershy in the future!

Orderly Disassembly

Orderly Disassembly #4 · Mar 24th, 2022 · 1 · · Spring's first chapter - from dark crevices, crystals shine. From a burning sun, most benign. ·

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Benedict plays his violin with the tree, because they both enjoy it. Some people talk when they hang out, some play games, and these two play music

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