Was it really the weather pony's fault, though? Applejack intends to find out.
Takes place around the beginning of / before season 3.
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Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
Nice job on your first story. :) You wrote Applejack and Rainbow's respective characters quite well, and the ending was sweet. My only suggestion would be to note the time period in which this story takes place (maybe in the long description box) to prevent readers from getting confused. The setting appears to be before Rainbow joined the Wonderbolts, but after the defeat of Nightmare Moon and Discord. Thus, I recommend stating an approximate time of the story's occurrence (i.e. around Season 3). It's not absolutely necessary, but I thought I would give you the tip. ;) Aside from that, good work overall.
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Thank you for the feedback! Where should I include the season timeline? In the description or the authors note etc...
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I'd say the description.
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I added it to the long description, thank you for the input!
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No problem. :)
This was good. Also, did she get to the bottom of who caused the storm?
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I think I'll make a sequel to this, and possibly explain that in time. I was on a bit of a time crunch so I couldn't add everything I wanted for this.
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Oh ok
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This is on a good track. Speaking of, I’m gonna track this. Hope to see something soon!
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I'll try my best! I already started a bit on the first draft but I'm balancing work and other things along with this. I also need to make sure I'm taking this story in the right direction as well.
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Ok, thanks for the heads up!
I waiting for more similar stories