It is said that in times of danger, heroes will come together to face the rising tide of evil, and fight back to preserve the light. These heroes can come from the strangest of places.
This is the story of one such hero. Although he appears to be Hitch Trailblazer, you may be surprised to learn his true origins...
Part of the Rebirth of Magic continuity. Tags will be updated as the story continues.
great chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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Thanks for commenting. This one's a tad different in style, but hopefully still recognisable as part of this series.
How cruel of them!![:twilightangry2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightangry2.png)
Yep, Hitch just broke the fourth wall.![:ajbemused:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajbemused.png)
those truck things*
Monticello is also home to a train museum too.![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
My car smashed*
Oh no!![:raritydespair:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritydespair.png)
He's sure gonna be going through a lot of craziness once he's awake.![:unsuresweetie:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/unsuresweetie.png)
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1. Posey often ran into this problem, hence the complaints.
2. He sure did. He sure did.
3 and 5. Corrected.
4. This is news to me.
6. Toasty!
7. Oh, you bet he will.
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Jimmy has just released the final entry in the series!
- MLP Gen 5
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The life and times of a Deputy who found his destiny... just not the way he expected.Thanks very much for getting this final story in this first phase of your series. Definitely like the work going into the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Really liked the reflection on the state of things after magic was returned before the flashback to how this human character became Hitch. Yeah, I could see where the car accident could be that bad before the human ended up in Equestria as Hitch.
Well, I'll go read the first chapter in Jimmy's latest story and look forward to more of both of them.
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Thanks for reading. I'll admit the whole 'finds magical object and gets turned into pony' story beat was starting to get stale, so I thought kicking things off with a bang would shift things a bit.
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The next chapter has arrived!
Excellent work on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Definitely liked "Hitch's" reflections on when and where he was and knowing he had to at least mostly "Stick to the script" for the time being to avoid suspicion even having some general knowledge of how things are going to turn out (maybe not the full exact details, but still - ). Also understood the reaction to the alteration in "Sprout's" response and surprising sincerity concerning the final instructions for the time being.
Very much looking forward to more of this.
Sunny is not a crackpot, and unicorns can't fry a brain out!![:twilightangry2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightangry2.png)
Lmao, a sonic movie reference since James Marsdan aka Hitch's movie va played tom aka donut lord in the film and it's sequel which I recently rewatched. Still, great reference!!![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
Don't let those lies get to your grain Sprout. They're nothing but loads of hogwash someone made up to scare you and many others.![:duck:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/duck.png)
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When Jimmy updates later today, some of the stuff in here will make a tad more sense.
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1. Dahlia doesn't know this. They only know what they have been taught, and they have no alternative way of finding out the truth.
2. I'm surprised they didn't make more of that in ANG. Still, Tom and Hitch are rather different characters; the latter is rather closer to Marsden's usual repertoir.
3. Sprout has no way of establishing the truth, remember?
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1.& 3. Ik.
2. Indeed.
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Well, glad to have that sorted. I also forgot to point out that the ZIP code is not a real Montana one.
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Glad you liked it.
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I figured.
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No worries. I didn't use a real one to avoid idiots spam mailing a potential real address.
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There's a new chapter here, folks. Jimmy has also updated his story if such a thing interests you. Link to the story is further back in the comment chain.
Excellent job on this latest chapter. Definitely appreciated the mental reflections as well as the extra details in certain things. Most assuredly liked "Hitch's" reflections on things like the mapping system, the series "Ashes to Ashes" (as well as its Equestrian counterpart in this universe) and finding that inn.
Really looking forward to more of this.
I think they never finished the road so the tribes wouldn't cross paths because they were scared.![:unsuresweetie:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/unsuresweetie.png)
Who knows if we'll ever learn the full story as to how it came to fruition.![:ajsleepy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsleepy.png)
I'm sorry what!?![:applejackconfused:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/applejackconfused.png)
And the narrator broke the fourth wall.![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
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Seeing as these characters spend a fair amount of time in their own minds, it makes sense to spend a fair bit of time reflecting on things about the world and their own lives. Besides, there is a theory that the entirety of G5 is Sunny's dying dream.
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1. That certainly seems plausible. That has happened IRL.
2. We may never know, indeed, but one can only wonder if things happened that were so horrific it would be better to be ignorant.
3. I'm serious. This was an actual TV series that aired in the late 2000s.
4. Indeed he did. It's an allusion to the tabletop wargaming series Warhammer 40,000, which incidentally is the franchise from which the word 'grimdark' originates.
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cool chapter mate i remember in g4 you saw silver bits once and the rest of the time it was gold![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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Yeah. I could see those points.
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Eeyup.
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Suggesting coins with different values.
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Indeed.
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The new chapter is here. I would mention Jimmy's new chapter but you guys beat me there!
Hitch is going a bit off course here if he wants to catch up with Sunny and Izzy
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Hitch suffers from chronic hero syndrome-he is driven by his need to help others and uphold order.
Hey there. Thanks very much for getting this next chapter up. Again, really liked the work going into the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Really appreciated "Hitch's" observations concerning how things have changed over the centuries in Happy Hollow before going to help out in that search for the missing miners. Also liked the note that some of the stuff picked up from helping out in other places proved to be useful on the main journey.
REALLY looking forward to more of this.
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As previously discussed in other stories' comments sections, RPGs were a big source of inspiration for this series. This, and the next chapter, also draw a little bit on personal family history; my folks on my mother's side have a long history of working in either mining or industries connected to mining, so this section is actually quite personal.
Not only that, but as noted exploring and speculating how G4 places might have evolved and changed over thousands of years is also a personal interest of mine.
nice chapter mate keep it up cant wait for for the next chapter![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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Huh, guess you do learn something every day.![:applejackunsure:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/applejackunsure.png)
Imo, I'm fine with menu they have either or.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Interesting.![:rainbowhuh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowhuh.png)
back in the human world*
Yikes!![:twilightoops:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightoops.png)
Oh?![:rainbowderp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowderp.png)
It makes sense*
made my way out of*
Coal washers?![:applejackconfused:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/applejackconfused.png)
Feels weird reading something like this as just last week I watched a film that made many scenes filmed at a coal mine. Not to mention it takes place in the late 50s in West Virginia, aka coal hauling county.![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
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Glad you liked it.
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1. I learned the origin of that phrase whilst living in the United States. Funny how often we use phrases without thinking of their origin, right?
2. I've made that blunder more than once!
3. They're slowly moving over to this approach in Britain as well.
4. Nationalised mining indeed. I don't believe the US ever had a nationalised mine system.
5. Corrected.
6. This happened an alarming amount in American history. Leadville, CO, for instance, was effectively owned and operated by the mines, with law enforcement being used to crack down on unionism. They also were under strict orders to ignore crimes committed by company bosses.
7. That's a nod to the Blackpool Specials. Many factories and mines would organise holiday outings to the seaside, and if you lived in the north of England those usually went to Blackpool on the Lancashire coast. The trains were usually operated by all sorts of weird and wonderful locomotive combinations.
8 and 9. Corrected.
10. Coal is used in different grades depending on the industry. If, for instance, you bung coal that just came out of the ground into a steam engine's firebox you'll get a lot of soot and clinker as it's full of impurities. Coal washers are machines that process coal using water to remove impurities and ensure it can be used in different industries. In the United States, the Pennsylvania Railroad maintained extensive coal washing facilities to ensure the anthracite they used was of the highest quality.
11. As noted in the comments below, my ancestors are from coal mining country (my mother was born in a mining town, and most of my male ancestors worked in various mines). I doubt I could have done that sort of job though- I'm partially claustrophobic!
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Hi everybody. The last chapter for a bit is now live.
REALLY good descriptions of the mines and the mapping systems. Yeah, between the limited light, also limited air and the dangers of the water and poison gases, it DOES provide a good imagery just how bad the situation is. And almost hitting another miner when he was about to start digging? Yikes.
Anyway, certainly looking forward to seeing which of the three other stories you're working on right now in this series is going to get five more chapters next month.
It feels like I'm rewatching the movie I watched last Friday all over again but in word form as coal mines were a huge part of the movie since it took place in West Virginia in the late 50s.![:applejackunsure:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/applejackunsure.png)
I hate being in tight spaces so I doubt I'd ever go in one.![:twilightoops:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightoops.png)
That's pretty much why I hate being in thick darkness. Even with no light and my eyes are wide open, I'll feel like they're indeed closed.![:fluttershysad:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttershysad.png)
lights had simply stopped.*
in the event of an accident*
great chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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Back in the really old days of Lego, there was a game called Rock Raiders, which very accurately captured the claughstrophobia of working underground. It's currently being remade in the Unity engine, and is well worth a play.
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1. How strange.
2. Me too.
3. You probably wouldn't cope well in Mammoth Cave, KY, then.
4 and 5. Corrected.
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Brutal stuff.
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Hey folks! Rebirth of Magic is back! And we have formally returned to Zipp!
- MLP Gen 5
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This story has returned with a new chapter!
Thanks immensely for getting this next chapter posted. Definitely appreciated the work going into the dialogue, (limited) action, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Most assuredly liked the reflections during that brief "misunderstanding fight", followed by the conversation concerning the mine's troubles, the top-level greed and corruption and a little bit of added detail on the Earth Ponies' spin on that battle Sprout mentioned in the actual movie's prologue. Yeah, they WILL eventually learn that they're wrong about the Unicorns and Pegasi, but it will still take a while.
Anyway, very certainly looking forward to more of this.
there is a reason why Ukrainians and others switched sides and join the germans stalin treated them horribly and that was the last straw great chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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The shaking I do agree is mysterious, but the glitter flood is well... I'm not sure to express about it if I'm honest.![:applejackconfused:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/applejackconfused.png)
Uh huh...![:applejackunsure:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/applejackunsure.png)
Whoever thought of that clearly is insane.![:ajbemused:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajbemused.png)