Audio read by The Mystery Fluttershy Fan
Pinkie Pie is planning on making a special batch of cream and icing for Ponyville's anniversary, but she feels that the current recipes aren't tasty enough. So, she goes to the best place to get things soft and fluffy: The sky! The clouds are the softest and fluffiest things known to pony kind, and so the recipe she needs is definitely there with them.
However, with any pie, she needs to go to the surface. Instead of finding the 'bestest' clouds, she instead discovers an entity that created and maintains the sky: A sky 'god'. Pinkie is not at all what it was expecting from a 'living shape'.
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Ok so, I really liked this fic, and here's my essay on why.
Most fics don't try to capture the energy of the original show, they just kinda do their own thing. This one actually feels like it could be an episode of mlp, if it was stretched out more ofc. Especially your writing of Pinkie here. This feels like you pulled Pinkie right out of the show and paid her to do a collab with you on this fic and I really enjoy it.
Next up on Pinkies Ireality Cooking Show?
Edible Fruitcake with a Quark Gluon Frosting.
Why not go to Cloudsdale?
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Because the clouds are artificial. It's mentioned in the story. She wanted to have the natural clouds you can find anywhere else.
That was a good story.
Wow. Pinkie Pie meets a higher being than the Princesses. I have a feeling that she'll end up becoming friends with the being.
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Only if the concept properly translates to it, but it did follow her, didn't it?
Pinkie's personality was captured perfectly here.
So Ponyville's resident eldritch abomination gets to befriend a biblically accurate angle?
Based.
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Yes. It was kinda obtuse at first, though.
I've read this aloud for the audio version.
Hmm, gonna have to figure out what to do with those bits where the sky god kinda says nothing.
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How about a warped noise where it sounds like something is exhaling alongside some wind flowing?
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Thanks, good to know what the author has in mind, I'll see what I can do.
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Just thought of it on the spot as a suggestion.
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Ah, thanks for reminding me.