And They Were Roommates

After living with them for months, Sunset begins to suspect that her relationship with her roommates might be more complex than she initially realised.

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Sunset_Shimmer83

Sunset_Shimmer83 #1 · Jan 22nd, 2023 · 1 · ·

i loved this. kinda wouldn't mind reading a NSFW version of the events that followed lol

PonyGamer777

PonyGamer777 #2 · Jan 22nd, 2023 · · ·

Very nice and cute micro fiction

Snowdrifter

Snowdrifter #3 · Jan 22nd, 2023 · · ·

This is a great setup. Odd that there are just the three of them, I would expect the university to assign that fourth bed to someone...

We've got Grumpy Aria (Melancholic), Bipolar Sour (Averaging her extremes to Choleric), and Only Sane Babe Sunset (Phlegmatic).

for a Four-Temperment Ensemble with plenty of hijinks, hairpulling, and chemistry, someone social, outgoing, and active (Sanguine). Pinkie Pie is the most obvious, but also Autumn Blaze, Rarity, Adagio Dazzle, The GREAT and POWERFUL Trixie!, Lemon Zest, Sunny Flare...

And like I said, this would result in interesting chemisty! I mean, explosives ARE chemisty!

Luminous Comet

Luminous Comet #4 · Jan 22nd, 2023 · · ·

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Interesting analysis, though two things that I didn't outright state:
1. It's not an assigned dorm room, it's rented. Only Sunset is attending college.
2. There were only two beds until Sour Sweet moved in, at which point they put a second bed in Aria's room, because Sunset is paying a large share of the bill.

Snowdrifter

Snowdrifter #5 · Jan 22nd, 2023 · · ·

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Sorry, thought it was a shared dorm. :D

Also, paying the largest share of the bills and only gets TWO pizza slices?! Step up, Sunset!

Salmanzero

Salmanzero #6 · Jan 24th, 2023 · · ·

Amazing story hope to see more

Flash Magnus

Flash Magnus #7 · Jan 30th, 2023 · 1 · ·

Pure gold

Vaguely Demented

Vaguely Demented #8 · Feb 1st, 2023 · · ·

Nice. Honestly though I found college to be so much easier than high school, mostly because classes took up less time and the homework was better spaced out.

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