Sunset happily takes on all her marital responsibilities, even when it means getting up in the middle of the night to have a long, comforting talk with her wife.
No, the other one.
Written for the Sunset Shimmer x Midnight Sparkle Competition and also entered in Bicyclette's SciSet Contest
aw, this was a cute little read. i love me some midnight-scitwi coexistence, and her dynamic with sunset in this was wonderfully sincere. great work, and best of luck in the contest ^^
Ah, the unique circumstances of your wife having a headmate. Lovely exploration of the concept. Thank you for it and best of luck in the contest.
If you’re interested in submitting, your story’s also eligible for our ongoing SciSet contest! https://www.fimfiction.net/group/216159/bikes-personal-contests/thread/521993/bpc-ix-sciset-contest-2023-aug-07-sep-17
That awkward moment when you cheated on your wife with your other wife who is the same person
I honestly expected demon Sunset to show up, but this was a good ending too
Yes, this was good.
Well written, interesting premise as well.
I did not find any glaring spelling or grammar mistakes either.
Midnight may want to try and talk with Luna a bit more.
A.) she is basically also a night owl and
B.) has had similar experiences before.
for some reason i am now imagining twilight and midnight bickering and trying to take over while having sex just to be the one to get/deny the other the orgasm.
and a very annoyed sunset.
Imagine getting cuckolded... by yourself.
I love this site.
This was lovely. Thank you for writing this.
lion's share?
Am I the only one wondering why and how Sunset isn't scared or curious as to why this happens from time to time?
Mhm. So there's pretty much nothing to worry about.
Where'd those come from.
Not surprised by her reaction as it's probably a norm for her. Sorta.
Heh. Incoming talking points and several lists. Makes for a good breakfast conversation.
Is this a sequel to something? I distinctly remember a story where sunset finds out about midnight and it's the human sunset not the equestrian one this feels like a sequel to that for some reason
Edit: while this fits with the story I described it turns out it's from a different author but it's also I believe been put in the same contest
Okay, this is cute.
Hahaha aw, this is such a cute read. You really capture Midnight well. n_n
I might end up using this idea one day for a story. Would not be 100% the same of course, since I usually have Sci Twi with someone besides Sunset.
But the idea that her wife gets both her and Midnight is too good to leave alone .
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Literally nobody fucking cares, spambott .
I like this. No terror, no horror, no magic. Just talk.
Nice to see someone approach a dual existence in a non get the evil out way.
very sweet
Midnight Sparkle as Twilight’s alter post-Friendship Games is a concept that has popped up in fics over the years, but this one does an impressive job of making it really feel fresh and new. Namely in the fact that this is a Midnight who seems to have either grown out of her diabolical, power-hungry phase or simply resigned herself to domesticity; either way, it leads to her having a very interesting and compelling relationship with Sunset. And with Twilight, for that matter, since this is a version of Midnight that seemingly can’t directly communicate with her headmate. It’s a little too short to fulfill its maximum potential, but in its short length it still offers a lot of compelling depth and warm fuzzies, and leaves you wanting more in a good way.
This was great! I never realized how much I wanted to see this side of Midnight. I'd love to see how she opens up to Twilight's other friends, and how she starts building out a life of her own.
love this small touch in the environment. really makes this slice of life feel lived-in.
oof, that says so much, love it
another great line
between this and the cold just mentioned, really clear how disconnected Midnight is from the body she is in
aww, so true! Sunset knows just what to say
nice
ahahaha
short and sweet, and a great exploration of a very fresh concept. the interplay and synthesis between the mundane life Sci-Twi and Sunset are sharing, and the fantastic element of Midnight Sparkle still living in Sci-Twi’s head, are just the kinds of things that i love.