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Ebonyglow


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my balls can't handle this

interesting. noncon ain't my thing but i always enjoy a good Sombra story, thanks to 2 friends, one of them liking it when Sombra is the bad guy.

This is too hot for me to make a detailed comment about what I liked best
Literally everything is amazing
I need this story

Author please say that in this story also be Celestia and Cadance please?

nicely done! Hmm, i kinda wonder if he has any guards around or something

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This story is already over 100,000 words with only the Mane Six being the focus.

Once the remaining chapters are released, the sequel will contain those two, Luna, and Gleaming Shield

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You can't just make me excited for the sequel!
This one has just started! XD

The cover art for this story is incredibly well done, and you can find the full version (which has the rest of the mane six in it) at derpibooru id: 3150856

Or, preferably, you can go directly to Light’s Twitter and support him there! He did amazing work for this fic’s cover, and he definitely deserves the love!

Also, here’s a fun fact, this story is the only reason any of my stories exist. The original version of this fic, which is long gone, was my first attempt at fanfiction. My friends eventually told me to try and start publishing stories soon after, and the rest is history.

Yay for clopfic lore

very nice, kinda reminds me of a comic of them and Sombra

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Don’t need guards when you’ve got that porn story main character plot armor! (But seriously I don’t think he has any guards yet!)

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of course. I was just wondering while he's "busy", what keeps the crystal ponies in check and such.

Plus, old habit of a thought

Oh, damn, dude, hilarious timing on this one. I was literally just sat about workshopping my own take on this premise :rainbowlaugh:

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Oh man, I’d love to see ya do it! Been a fan of your work for a long while now!

I love Sombra fics especially with bad ends, there have been a very few

I love it so far, can't wait to see more

Ooh yay another Sombra story to add to my collection, and a clopfic at that! I’m so excited to read this one.

I wish there was a prologue of an already conquered Cadence sending an innocent letter to lure the Mane 6 into being trapped by Sombra

Looks at Title

Looks at Description

... Call up Badger, we got another Sombra to beat the absolute shit out of.

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Funnily enough, there was originally a prologue. I scrapped it because I want to use her and some others in the eventual sequel. You'll get that luring concept still though, just...used to lure a different Princess in... :trixieshiftright:

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I will be looking forward to that. I love evil, dominating, stud Sombra fics, but I always end up prefering seeing Cadence as the one being dominated.

Was expecting this to come out…And I'm confused to see that there's no "dark" tag.
The writing stuff is fine as always, I know the usual non-consensual or mind control content aren't "dark" because the control person technically isn't "the villain", and if we see Sombra as the main character here then it's technically not "tragedy", but when he wins as the villain and corrupts the heros like this…
Yeah, please don't mind, just a question I have here, hope you had fun writing These stories.:twilightsmile:
Also I'm curious about how you can make it engaging throughout all 100k of porn with only them as the protagonists and make it sexy but not too cruel to watch at the same time...
You have my attention.

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I honestly forgot that was a tag. Not sure if it’s applicable here or not. My experience with it, the tag I mean, isn’t extensive :twilightblush:

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Well with all those stories here I honestly thought you'd already know about it, and considering the stuff you're writing and the nature of your OC I'm quite surprised to hear you say that. I mean this certainly would warrant the dark tag, "Villains winning and breaking the heros into submission in such vicious ways" is hardly ever not dark, if I dare say it even needs to be reminded that with the heros' hopes lost, it needs to have the tragedy tag as well.

But you do whatever you see fit, I'm just a little reader with only average tolerance to dark, spooky stuff. Curious to see how will you make it engaging across the very long tale but not too cruel for people to handle.

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From what most people have told me, it isn’t that rough to them surprisingly. I always focus on the pleasure of it all, hence the mind break, and that helps make things a bit less dark. I’ll consider the tag, might add it, might not. Just going off what I’ve been told by others, I’m not too sure!

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Well...that's OK, as long as this story is served well then all is good, but a part in me must point out that the description alone makes it extra dark to just think about for me, and if people are willing to start the story knowing there will be serious mind break and bad ending then they're likely to be able to handle the rest.

Those who can't…well I don't think they will engage with you about this story to begin with as long as they are nice enough to leave the story alone.(Even I am not that good at handling all that darkness as long as I need to use my brain to imagine the stuff:twilightsheepish:)
Besides, I don't think this is that different from your usual mindbreak, so your usual readers should be fine. (I actually don't read your story that much aside from your last one so I had to ask)

Author for your sequel of this story with Celestia and Cadance can we hope to see also such amazing sexy picture cover?

looks very interesting, although honestly I don't understand what's that very long introduction for, it basically just describes how Mane 6 acts in every MLP episode, I already know that quite well and don't need it repeated ;)

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I have a surprising amount of people following me/supporting me who don’t watch the show but still read my fics, so I usually do stuff like that to fill them in

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JFK, I am thrilled to read this. Thanks for writing it!

This is some excellent content! Keep up the great work! 👍

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Well, I haven't thought about it but I completely get it. Also, I know the description clearly says about 'lot of teasing' but I must say that after n times it becomes kinda frustrating when you can't really start fapping cuz you don't know if it's for real this time or if it's gonna stop again. That's the biggest issue I have here, but besides that it's been a really enjoyable story so far, i'm definitely waitin' for more!

Every King needs heirs to his throne Twilight maybe the only one able to produce Worthy heir

Incredible.

This story is on an entirely different level. The range of emotions it provokes is by turns enraging, encouraging, stimulating, lustful, and satisfying. I find myself being torn from rooting for the girls to succeed over the Tyrant, to reveling in their downfall, so I have to remind myself it's just one story and not canon. So, I'm conflicted. I came here fully aware I was reading a Porn story, and one of Domination and Non-Con, so I knew what to expect going in, but you've written both sides of this conflict so well that I'm able to sympathize and feel some regret for the girls' defeat...yet I can't stop reading.

Normally, Non-Con is certainly not my cup of tea, and I worry for myself this story has changed my view of this genre, but you've done it in such a way that is similar to my own style, in that the females resist male domination at first, but secretly long for it. I'm still repulsed by violent rape stories where it is obvious a crime is being committed, and I was quite relieved to find this wasn't one of those.

From the reading, I see you're saving Rainbow for last...and I applaud your decision! Pinkie remains my favorite pony to lewd, but I always luuuv me some Rainbow action, so I'm eagerly looking forward to that, although I expect you will write it in such a way that it will also be painful to read, as she'll have seen all her other friends defeated and permanently changed. Will she still be defiant? Will she still vow revenge? Or will she simply accept her fate, seeing all her friends have been turned into mindless sluts?

Nah. That doesn't sound like Rainbow Dash to me.

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...but she still needs a BIG dicking! and to become a good slut! As I said, I LUUUUV me some Rainbow Action!

“You will not defeat us. We stand for Equestria, and our friendship will prevail,” she continued, a cocky smirk now forming on her face as the cheers of her friends filled the room. “You’re no king, and you’re definitely not our king.”

Oof, if only they realized they could still cast their Rainbow spell without the need of the Elements of Harmony. This would've been that moment.

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When I write Rainbow getting teased so intensely it rubs off on my readers…

Sombra for real got too much power :twilightsheepish:

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When I write non-con, I always focus on the pleasure and make sure it is pleasurable for the character. Be it mind break or mind control, I always have the character enjoy it and/or be changed to love it in some way. Noncon focusing on genuine suffering or similar isn’t my cup of tea, is too realistic, and is just downright saddening at times. Good part of the whole “fucked so good they break into a slut” bit is that it isn’t really realistic, which leans it to a more fantasy idea and keeps it away from the reality of noncon.

But yeah, it’s hot as fuck when done in the “fucked into blissful submission” way. Not enough stories on the website do it that way. There’s a reason I try to balance every bad thing that happens to the mane 6 in this with some kind of lustful reaction or feeling of desire!

Also yeah dash is hot as fuck and my bias towards her is shining through big time in this story, heh.


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Inb4 I massively disappoint

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Good part of the whole “fucked so good they break into a slut” bit is that it isn’t really realistic, which leans it to a more fantasy idea and keeps it away from the reality of noncon.

You're speaking my language, mate! Being "fucked into submission" is PURE fantasy, although I did have a girlfriend once that liked to act all independent everywhere but in the bedroom...there, she absolutely loved being dominated, so it isn't that much of a stretch from reality.

Also, I forgot to mention kudos on your handling of AJ's submission...that was UBER hot and in keeping with the majority of pornmeister's views on her, in that she's an anal whore! I personally LUUUV writing her as such...it's just sumthin' about that big, round, apple-booty that just makes the words fly off the page!

This epic of yours has inspired me to write more submission and mind-break stories of my own, though I doubt I'll be able to turn out ones of this caliber just yet...

He stood up on his hindlegs, unabashedly showing his full tool to the six bound ponies before him. The titanic length of his cock and the size of the orbs below it caused them to gasp with shock, now given a clear view of exactly what he was packing.

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I would argue that it's potentially (potentially) possible that the Elements of Harmony can wash away Sombra's Permanent Enslavement Spell, the only issue is that nobody realized yet that you can use the Elements without needing the Elements.

I also think there's still hope that thanks to The Young Six or the Pillars having the same type of bond that the Mane Six have. Plus, they have some male members in both teams so it's not like Sombra's spell will work with them, eh?

As long as they either get the Elements or realize that the Magic of Friendship can be used without the Elements then Equestria is saved. Even if Sombra permanently corrupts both the Mane Six and the Alicorns.

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Even if I were to die, as long as I didn’t exceed the volume my magic was capable of, the target would still be a slave.

I get the feeling this is how he'll be beaten. If he subjugates the Mane 6, no biggie. But if he also tries to bring every other alicorn under his thrall - on top of whoever comes between them - he'll likely overwhelm his magic and they'll all break free. Probably don't wanna be in the same room as a packed harem full of very pissed off mares. Although I'm just guessing based on a single line of dialogue.

another one down for the count i would say

Bruh, how many times did Sombra came so far?
The perks of being him I guess.

Great story, very hot 👍

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