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Ebonyglow


I do be writing. You do be reading

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This will be an ongoing series, so expect more chapters soon!

I'm liking where this is going!~

Arizona succumbing to his hypnotic magic and becoming his is very, very hot, and the settings too~
I do also enjoy when she got sent to publicly advertise her produce, or his technically~
And of course, him stuffing her to start his whole milk operation in the first place, incredibly hot~

I am interested in seeing Spearmint increase his variety of milks, mostly because I want him to hypno and stuff all of them XD
And it seems Velvet will make a grave but blissful mistake~
Nice work!

If you don't kind me asking, what exactly is Thems Fighting Herds? A game? A show?

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A game which was originally an MLP fighting game called Fighting Is Magic. They got C&D’d by hasbro, and Lauren Faust designed all the new characters, like Arizona on the cover

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Interesting, thanks for answering, I was curious :)

cow print outfits

I didn’t know any of the Them’s Fightin’ Heards characters wore anything like that. Or is that just something from this story alone?

Usually, I feel mixed with mind control in porn stories like this. Because it's technically r*pe.

And it's sometimes reminds me of that nasty Fall of Equestria storyline. ( Which ironically has Caribou/Deer-like jerks that tend to use mind control on every poor mare/female too. )


But, checking this out and even reading it. Has me very intrigued for some reason.

Don't want to ask for spoilers. But, does this all end with him permanently keeping his hypnotizing "harem" of milk furries. And permanently has rich success with his "milk business". Like a good ending, for him that is.

BUT, I could hypothesize some loose ends in the future.

How would he deal with the girl's own parents and loved ones if they somehow find this out?

And what about the predators, aren't they still a threat?

Or the girls somehow eventually be free of the hypnosis, and Spearmint will be in deep shit. And that will be the "Bad ending". But they will all still be pregnant though.

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If all the Keybearers were defeated by one guy, even in an unconventional manner like this, then that makes him the true Keybearer who has to defeat the Devourer. Since last I checked we know literally nothing about the damned thing, there's no reason it can't be female and hypnotized into a milk-slave accordingly. The ultimate apex predator in our world is a mammal, after all. :trollestia:

My body and loins are ready for more! :trollestia:

Absolutely following this.

For some reason, when reading the end of the first chapter, I remembered the phrase of the novice from Warcraft III.
Just imagine how Arizona says in a mysterious voice, "I am eager to serve"
please note that mistakes may be made in the comments due to the use of a translator.

Bro, (or girl) I LOVE your stories! They all have such cool stories, characters, and plot! Can't wait to see more of stuff like this. keep up the good work! Cant wait for the next installment of the king Sombra story!

Why a story like this in this website? It's not even MLP! :pinkiegasp:

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Them’s Fightin Herds is allowed

MOOOAAARRRr

An update!

Wonder if Stronghoof will like this

Sheep milk next? Nice.

About time we got to Pom

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