• Member Since 12th May, 2013
  • offline last seen May 25th, 2021

Darker Outcomes


I don't have anything too interesting to put here. I write sometimes, I do roleplay, and I'm overall rather boring.

Comments ( 26 )

You have my interest..........Go oooonnnn.

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Sometimes, mistakes slip through. Should be fixed soon!

Ohh please continue. I’ve needed this for quite a while. There is a severe lack of Cadence slave rape with Sombra.

This story really promises a lot, not only because it is one of the almost non-existent stories in which Sombra abuses Cadance and not Shining, without doubt kneeling before the writer of such a majestic work.

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No joke if you search for just stories with Sombra and Cadance in them it’s all just M/M smut with Shining.

This wonderfully vile, disgusting, and downright hideous form of writing has most certainly caught my damned attention. Personally, I'm not a fan of rape, excessive and various forms of pain, and "inhuman" amounts of cum. Or at least I wasn't until I read this:pinkiecrazy:. Although, I feel as though Sombra didn't have enough dialogue in the story, relatively speaking. It would've been nice to have him constantly mock Cadence and actually emphasize just how much of a plaything Cadence actually is to him. This, in turn, would've captured just how much of a sick and twisted bastard Sombra really is. Of course, I do acknowledge just how fucked up this story is, let alone Sombra, but I'm just stating my opinion.:moustache:
I could only cringe and feel bad for Cadence as she was gagged and nearly choked to death by Sombra's ungodly cock. But it's probably what enticed me to keep reading lol:trollestia:. Needless to say, I cannot wait for chapter 2!

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I... Didn't really expect to see this positive of a response to my mediocre writing quality. I'll be sure to try and get the next chapter out soon!

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For me it’s hiting that uptaped market with Cadance. It’s always Shining that’s targeted. It’s fine if that’s your kink but I don’t do M/M. It doesn’t work. I feel like this story writes it self. I wish Cadance had more dark stories but if it is rape it’s with Chrysalsis and it usually envovles brainwashing witch I feel gets used way to much elsewhere. Half of the dark stories on Fimficion envovle some arbitrary form of “consent” when I feel it doesn’t need it. What’s so wrong with some good old fashioned rape.

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You've kinda hit the nail on the head. Brainwashing/mind control is not and will never be my thing, and I'd prefer to avoid it. It's what drove me to write this.

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This alone makes me want to get back to writing and finish my own depraved stories. It was a good read, mate.

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I know right? Some good ol' rape with tears and screaming. I mean it is fucked up, but that's why it's so good.

Shit, I want more! Faved

Man I hope you’re not dead. You’ve been offline since the 11th. I hope you’re ok. Who else will torture Cadance so well.

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I'll be working on it more soon enough! I already have about half of the chapter done, and I'd rather not rush things. I haven't been able to work on it in any case in a couple weeks.

I change my mind rush it (not serious) aghhj

Well I waited a bit to say it but it’s safe to say this story is dead. Bummer.

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Not quite dead. Just not exactly in active development due to real life issues.

There's an MLP mod for hoi4?

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it's called Equestria at War

While I myself despise oral- stuff, I actually found myself liking this and not getting upset, thank you

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I don’t hate oral but I do treat it as the meal before the meal or an appetizer.

So this story has been stuck at mozzarella sticks and the pizza still hasn’t come out yet for a year now.

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Eh- I suppose so, just makes me particularly upset and so far I don't know why

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