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Blck-Dynomite


This is not a resurgence, nor a resurrection. This is a revamp! I am Blck-Dynomite! And I have returned! Still writing sexy horse words. BOOM BABY!

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Oh, you got me acting UP

Pinkie walked around until she was standing in front of Rarity and held both of her hands in hers. “See, Rarity, they’re serious about keeping everyone who works here safe. We’re just here to have fun! So, what do you say…?”

Rarity looked at Gilda, the hole, and then Pinkie.

“I say…F*CK this I’m out”

Rarity then storms out of the stall then out of the building, never to return.

THE END :rainbowlaugh:

Well-written, and the safety precautions make me wish this were a real place for multiple reasons!

I could believe Rosie would do this for money. Put fun story on top of it

“Hmm, well, perhaps I don’t mind a bit of danger,” said Rarity as she began to sashay her way to her predetermined stall.

Gilda and Rarity, I’d ship it

This was great, hoping for a sequel where they accidentally find out it’s each other though.

Nice little story. One thing to note is you kept writing "bowl" instead of "bowel". Other than that, a fun read.

Genius! So many directions you could go in if you decide to make a sequel, sweetie bell, pinkie, any of pinkie's other friends, cookie just looking for a little excitement, I mean she allready knows where he's going right or you can go for my personal favorite princess Celestia.

Comment posted by Deathsia deleted May 28th, 2022

Not only a decent build up but great scene and world building plus a very good length of a first chapter...hey kronk?! where's that upvote for OP's first chapter?!
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11254765 Dang, and here I thought that was going to be a throwaway chapter. Glad I put some thought and effort into that. Thanks for the upvote Kronk! Oh, and you, too, Deathasia, I guess. lol Seriously, though, thank you! :pinkiehappy:

11254633 I didn't realize that until after I wrote it that I did give it a lot of sequel potential. Perhaps we might return to this world.

11254409 Honestly, thank you for pointing that out! That was embarrassing.:twilightblush: I have corrected it, thank you! :twilightsmile:

11254389 I don't know why I thought that, but I just tossed in there thinking, "Huh, don't normally see a lot of that, so why not?"

11254321 I'm ashamed to admit it, but I kinda, sorta, can see her doing something like this....SO SUE ME Y'ALL, IT'S HOT!

11254027 Seriously, if only real life places like this took such precautions. Call this my ideal version of what a brothel should, one version of it anyway.

11253973 F*** that shit I'm out! lol :rainbowlaugh:

11253930 Then mission accomplished :rainbowdetermined2:

Damm that was hot.

Rarity is not like that, and she would say it's uncouth and horrid.

Main issue I have with this is the incest angle. I get it's kind of meant as sort of a joke as given the situation it could happen but I don't find incest appealing so....yeah.

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The two main problems with incest are the power dynamic and the possibility of offspring. After all, it's hard to say no to daddy. Well, this is anonymous, and there is no babies possible because of reasons. It's just two adults making each other feel good.

Was kind of hoping she'd have printed her name on the inside of the thong and forgotten about it.

Most excellent.

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That would be hilarious, but imagine her shock if she ever finds this thong in his possession.

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This is a universe that is canonically multiverse in nature. In an infinite number of possibilities, there is surely one universe in which a Rarity was convinced by a Pinkie Pie to do this.

I just realised something...

You did not say Rarity took the anti contraceptive pill before servicing her customer...

Oh my...

God is great fic although it would have been very great to be able to see chapter about the first time that Rarity had sex with his father to see what big problems he had to endure when taking it for the first time

X 865 #21 · Jun 1st, 2022 · · · #58 ·

Sequel/side story of Sunset working at THAW?

Very nice hope for more!!!

I need more chapters...

Put in another vote to see more of this :)

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