The Hole in A Wall
written by Blck-Dynomite
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Pinkie walked around until she was standing in front of Rarity and held both of her hands in hers. “See, Rarity, they’re serious about keeping everyone who works here safe. We’re just here to have fun! So, what do you say…?”
Rarity looked at Gilda, the hole, and then Pinkie.
“I say…F*CK this I’m out”
Rarity then storms out of the stall then out of the building, never to return.
THE END
Not only a decent build up but great scene and world building plus a very good length of a first chapter...hey kronk?! where's that upvote for OP's first chapter?!
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