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It was supposed to be a simple lesson in consent.
After Twilight discovers that Starlight Glimmer placed their friends under mind control magic, she proposes some turnabout to demonstrate the importance of consent. Instead it reveals one of Starlight's deepest secrets.
Now Twilight must decide if she's willing to take things further to help her friend, even if it takes her far out of her own experience.
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I'm so happy I pushed you into this
This is seriously amazing and you should be proud of what you accomplished with this.
What a great exploration of consent, trust, and communication in a healthy relationship. It also explores the consequences of total power exchanges like mind control. Plus it fills in the backstory of Starlight between her childhood and when she shows up in the show.
Truly an amazing story. Well done.
P.s. oh, and it's hot.
This story was great! I had a feeling of just where the story was going to go before you published it, and what I could expect upon reading the description.
Chapter 2 is quite possibly my favourite part. A very nice interpretation and exploration of Starlight's past, and containing an important message pertaining to the matter of consent, intertwined with a story about someone getting what they deserved.
Couldn't ask for a happier ending.
Think it might be fun to see a possible role reversal someday. (Though that just might be my love of Starlight as a dom speaking)
This put a grin on my face during an otherwise quite boring day. Thank you so much for writing it! Starlight's gotta be my favorite character of the show so far, and I find it difficult for most to do her justice. I really enjoyed the background you came up with, it all clicked sensibly and it made me feel for her. The interaction between her and Twilight was spot-on, and the mind control part gave me some ideas I might use for my own work, as I enjoy well thought-out and detailed hypnosis. (I'm mostly thinking of the 'all delayed sensations snap back on subject at once' angle. XD)
Very good.
I would also like to see a potential sequel, preferably with a more... explicit focus, especially once Twilight gets more comfortable with making sexual requests. (and it would be interesting to see how Starlight responds when she reciprocates. If she cums this much after a session just from the sheer horniness of it, imagine how much she'll go off when Twilight is actually giving her physical stimulation as well!)
In short, I will be watching your career with great interest.
I really hope for the sequel, this story is so good, and have so much potential!..
Well, I'm sure glad Twilight's experiments with consent through mind control didn't suddenly get weird or anything.~ That would have been awkward. LOL!
Neat! This reads like a pretty nice sister fic to Tribus Modem Compelus, if you've seen that one.
(Also this might be better served with a Mature tag :P)
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Thanks! I don't know that one, but I'll look it up.
I'm pretty comfortable with the Teen rating. There's no explicit descriptions of sex or genitals, with the major action happening off-screen. There's no gore or violence at all. There isn't even swearing. If it seems like it should be mature after all that, then I did my job. Thank you.
Very nice! There aren't a lot of wholesome hypnofetish stories out there, so this is a lovely find.
I love this. It’s incredibly sweet and very hot, and, as someone with more than no experience with hypnosis (I’d much less than I’d prefer), Starlight coming out of the spell and profusely thanking Twilight put a huge smile on my face.
I will say that I’m somewhat skeptical of Starlight’s claims about not being attracted to mares…
Cutest kink fic I've read thus far!! LOVED IT!!!! Unexpected fusion of hot, wholesome, cute, hot, and humor that left me enjoying every word!
My only complaint: I NEED MOOOOORE DAMMIT!
Twilight + Starlight content (regardless of romantic or platonic) feels woefully underrepresented to me (possibly cuz there's so few good name combos for the romantic pair hehe), so I'm glad I found this fic!
Anyway, great work and looking forward to reading through your other works! Even if they're sfw in nature of course.💖
...On that note, this story is giving me ideas for some potential future fics of my own hmmmmmm