Finally, an update! Hope the next one would not take this long.
So many plots have been bottomed up and I could see many different kinds of desperations just in this one chapter.

This was a wild chapter and it looks like it only going to get crazier in the future.

HELLOOO, Nurse!

Why is it when a whole group is scared of something that the first thing they think of is to kill it?

Lyra's Wish is password locked.

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...hence the clues for the password in the story...

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Ah, I was wondering what all the random bolded letters were for. Thought it was just a display issue.

Why Twilight has six fingers.

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Because brains are a considerably more recent development than violence and old habits die hard.

I don't want to sound rude, I liked the first half of the story, but after the second half? Everything started to feel... random? without direction, without meaning, something like discord would do on a good Tuesday afternoon, so many stupid things happen that you lose the pleasure, again, just my thoughts, I like how you write but the decisions made in the second half of the story They are bad, I leave my like and say goodbye, it was a pleasant read.

Oh boy. My lynching senses are tingling.

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Interesting critique. Where did I lose you?

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I can't say the exact chapter, but after "the change" is were I lost interest, still read all till the end to, but I drop.

Ah... pony racism...

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For me, it was this chapter, actually

Lyra: "I tried to kill myself and almost killed Derpy in the process"

Bon Bon: "AWESOME, LETS GET THAT DICK"

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