My father has a saying for just about every situation. In this case, the one that applies would be "Never look behind you. Something might be gaining on you." Sage advice. I made it to the path and went flat out, shedding my backpack and dropping my walking stick, running as fast as I could. Despite his advice, I chanced one glimpse behind me. And I wish I hadn't. The glow caught up to me and swallowed me whole. Darkness overtook me and I knew no more.
What was the point of the walking stick?
Applejack threw up her hooves and turned away, grumbling, "Somepony else deal with this moron."
Is she talking sh*t?
Lily, one of the ever-nervous Flower Trio, timidly said, "And how d-do you know it won't gobble us up at the first opportunity, Princess?! Look at those teeth and its tiny eyes! It looks like a predator if ever I saw one!" Several other ponies voiced their agreement. Alex held up his hands.
He would’ve done it by now.
"Get him out away from us!" screamed several ponies at once. They started to form a mob and began to advance on the human when Applejack cried "Let's go!" and they ran, leading the human out and away from the Square. They soon found themselves at the relative quiet of the Golden Oaks Library. Alex had to slightly stoop to enter the building, but still had plenty of room to stand up as there was enough space above him. He looked around for a suitable chair and, finding none, just sat cross-legged on the floor.
F*ck that. If they wanna fight, then let’s see what they can do.
"Gross!" yelled Rainbow.
"Quite agree!" said Rarity. "It's vulgar, causing an involuntary effect on innocent ponies!" Even Pinkie and Fluttershy looked a bit put out.
It was a f*cking accident.
But despite their outward protestations, every mare couldn't help but glance briefly at his crotch as he stood and wonder to herself what he was packing.
Good start but i hope the ponies don't hurt him because he's different if that becomes the case i hope he get's returned home. If this goes the way of harem i hope AJ is first for the simple reason of questioning his intelligence, followed by Rarity for calling him uncivillized just because he was several days hungry. Let her feel like she is starving and see if she maintains being civil when presented with a buffet. Then finally Twilight because she wants to feel those erotic feelings again and effectively becomes the mouse that almost starves because it only hits the pleasure button instead of the food button
STOP POSTING ABOUT AMONG US, I'M TIRED OF SEEING IT! My friends on TikTok send me memes, on Discord it's fucking memes, i was in a server, right? and ALL of the channels are just Among Us stuff. I-I showed my Champion underwear to my girlfriend, and the logo i flipped it and i said "Hey babe, when the underwear sus HAHA ding ding ding ding ding ding ding *takes breath* ding ding ding" I FUCKING LOOKED AT A TRASH CAN, I SAID "THAT'S A BIT SUSSY", I LOOKED AT MY PENIS, I THINK OF THE ASTRONAUT'S HELMET, AND I GO "PENIS, more like peenSUS" *takes breath* AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH
This story sounds similar to Bad Touch!!! except that one was intentionally summoned to Equus, unlike this one. The situation seems to be vastly different too. Plus this one seems to have more comedy air in it. Let's see where it would go from here.
This is some good stuff. I like that the human is a jerk, yet not a total jerk either. Not a total nice guy (somewhere in between) which is a nice change. Roseluck shaking her booty was frankly hilarious, I think she is good friends with Lyra. Or at the very least. Roseluck may try get closer to Lyra to try learn more about humans.
Judging by the cover, I assume Rarity is going to end up warming up to him at some point.
Gonna be honest this is a pretty bad start, first the main six seemed more uh aggressive in a introduction and felt a little OOC except for twilight and was generally grilling on alex for accidents and ripples he caused and where does this even take place, it mentions twilight is a princess due to the "your highness thing" but she said there wasn't any space there, what? Like dude the kingdom is ridiculously huge and has been stated to have several rooms and it seems to maybe unnecessarily lead a little too hard on the sexual aspects like the jiggle butt thing, seemed out of place and especially the crotch thing, seemed so uh out of touch? Irrelevant at the moment? Just seemed kinda forced really especially when they just met the guy so maybe uh be more smooth with it?
I tossed it underhand towards the glow to see what would happen. Nothing. I'd seen enough. I backed slowly away and began to turn when suddenly the glow started moving towards me. I stopped and looked at it, and it stopped. When I turned and walked away again, it followed me. When I stopped again, it did the same, but this time it was a bit closer. I didn't like this. So I began running!
I don't know about anyone else but if that was me I would've started dying from laughter after finding out I can make female's wet from the slightest touch.
10919714 I’d ask if I could have some gloves in hopes of nipping some 80-90% of the obvious awkwardness in the bud. Whether they would help would depend on how much insulation the effect could penetrate, but if nothing else it’d be a good-faith effort.
Just then there was a knock on the door. "Great. Who could this be?" muttered Twilight as she went to it. Opening it, she saw Lyra, flanked by her friend Bon-Bon. Lyra looked excited, while her girlfriend had the air of somepony who really, really didn't want to be there.
11090424 Umm...yes, you could. Women are not as preoccupied with looks as guys are. Sure, they want their male partners to be handsome, but women are more turned on by how they are treated, rather than how good the guy looks. If you could give them an orgasm with just a touch, (in moderation, of course) you'd be the most popular guy on the planet, even if you looked like Quasimodo.
Well then... A clop with some decent story? A nice change.
Pinkie is sus
oh boy I hope this is a daily update
amogus
I Like it! Smash's cup on the floor shattering into the words Moar!
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Ah yes, I too second this notion!!!
A human story with the Mane 6, Lyra AND, with Spike not cut out completely?!
You have my attention!
What was the point of the walking stick?
Is she talking sh*t?
He would’ve done it by now.
F*ck that. If they wanna fight, then let’s see what they can do.
It was a f*cking accident.
I would not help them.
Good start but i hope the ponies don't hurt him because he's different if that becomes the case i hope he get's returned home. If this goes the way of harem i hope AJ is first for the simple reason of questioning his intelligence, followed by Rarity for calling him uncivillized just because he was several days hungry. Let her feel like she is starving and see if she maintains being civil when presented with a buffet. Then finally Twilight because she wants to feel those erotic feelings again and effectively becomes the mouse that almost starves because it only hits the pleasure button instead of the food button
STOP POSTING ABOUT AMONG US, I'M TIRED OF SEEING IT! My friends on TikTok send me memes, on Discord it's fucking memes, i was in a server, right? and ALL of the channels are just Among Us stuff. I-I showed my Champion underwear to my girlfriend, and the logo i flipped it and i said "Hey babe, when the underwear sus HAHA ding ding ding ding ding ding ding *takes breath* ding ding ding" I FUCKING LOOKED AT A TRASH CAN, I SAID "THAT'S A BIT SUSSY", I LOOKED AT MY PENIS, I THINK OF THE ASTRONAUT'S HELMET, AND I GO "PENIS, more like peenSUS" *takes breath* AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH
For some reason I always enjoy story based clops. Hope this keeps going for a while.
Also, Rose had me crying!
AMONGUS!
I like this.
I knew this would reach the featured box. Not often you get a clop fic with a story like I mentioned earlier.
This story sounds similar to Bad Touch!!! except that one was intentionally summoned to Equus, unlike this one. The situation seems to be vastly different too. Plus this one seems to have more comedy air in it. Let's see where it would go from here.
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Heh...thank you. I tried hard to make that part funny!
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Thanks for reading! The next chapter will be out by Monday or Tuesday evening.
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Thank you!
I can tell this clopfic will be one of the best of the year if it get regular updates. Can't wait.
Ding ding ding ding ding ding ding ding... ding ding ding...
Thanks for the free advertisement
Can't say I blame them. He's kind of an asshole.
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I was wondering how far back I'd have to go to find this.
Fortnite balls sussy impostor
AMONG US
Good start so far
I'm gonna guess that the Rose chapter will contain predator/prey foreplay, which if that's the case will be a treat.
This is some good stuff. I like that the human is a jerk, yet not a total jerk either. Not a total nice guy (somewhere in between) which is a nice change. Roseluck shaking her booty was frankly hilarious, I think she is good friends with Lyra. Or at the very least. Roseluck may try get closer to Lyra to try learn more about humans.
Judging by the cover, I assume Rarity is going to end up warming up to him at some point.
Gonna be honest this is a pretty bad start, first the main six seemed more uh aggressive in a introduction and felt a little OOC except for twilight and was generally grilling on alex for accidents and ripples he caused and where does this even take place, it mentions twilight is a princess due to the "your highness thing" but she said there wasn't any space there, what? Like dude the kingdom is ridiculously huge and has been stated to have several rooms and it seems to maybe unnecessarily lead a little too hard on the sexual aspects like the jiggle butt thing, seemed out of place and especially the crotch thing, seemed so uh out of touch? Irrelevant at the moment? Just seemed kinda forced really especially when they just met the guy so maybe uh be more smooth with it?
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Freaking awesome
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quite original REALLY!!
I don't know about anyone else but if that was me I would've started dying from laughter after finding out I can make female's wet from the slightest touch.
10919714
I’d ask if I could have some gloves in hopes of nipping some 80-90% of the obvious awkwardness in the bud. Whether they would help would depend on how much insulation the effect could penetrate, but if nothing else it’d be a good-faith effort.
I was about to scream at him but than remembered that a lot of people don't know a lot of the greek mythos and doesn't know what it is.
😡🖕😡
This was a interesting beginning I can't wait to see where this goes.
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We all walking around like:
Secret Technique: Cum-fu 1000 Years of Death!!
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Dude I'm so fucking ugly I couldn't even make a female wet with that touch included
11090424
Umm...yes, you could. Women are not as preoccupied with looks as guys are. Sure, they want their male partners to be handsome, but women are more turned on by how they are treated, rather than how good the guy looks. If you could give them an orgasm with just a touch, (in moderation, of course) you'd be the most popular guy on the planet, even if you looked like Quasimodo.
AMONG US😞
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Ppft you clearly have not met a wide berth of California/New York females. Wallet size and Looks definitely seems to what matters most.
Tartarus is the equivalent of PONY HELL !!!! I wonder if DISCORD, is up to some mischief ?
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Чел, это настолько просто, что даже гениально.