Dash smirked. "Are you kidding? It's not heat season, none of us can possibly get pregnant, so this is basically 'Free Sex Night!'" She looked around. "Speaking of that, where's Spike?"
So they can only get pregnant during heat season?
Pinkie and the Cakes were some of the first ponies at Town Hall to set up for the party, as they were asked to cater it. Ordinarily, the Cakes would have foregone costumes, as they were usually dressed for work, but tonight was special.
For the Cakes, it's a special night as it's their first Nightmare Night after having the twins. As mentioned before, their libidos are in overdrive after their encounter with Alex, so they'd planned to partake in the usual festivities. Hence Mrs. Cake's slutty outfit and behavior.
I am somewhat surprised Alex's dick didn't seem to be affected by the spell. Then again him being a human must mean he is resistant to spells.
Overall, a really nice chapter. I'm glad Spike had a sense of honor and didn't take advantage of Twilight. I could imagine him gently pushing Twilight away if she was about to kiss him. He says "Twilight, no. You don't want to do this!" She cries, he hugs her as she cried in his arms.
I hope this doesn't mean Spike is out of the story entirely. I haven't really seen an adult Spike alongside a human in a story like this and there is interesting potential there! I would hate to see him removed from the story due to knee-jerk reactions from people who mistakenly believed it to be foalcon.
10942451 Spike has a part to play still in this tale...he has to come to terms with his new form, and what to do with it. Mares are quite consumed with his presence, and while he won't take advantage of anypony, he's not made of stone. With the possible exception of Twilight, he may just fulfill a few fantasies.
10942411 I have endeavored not to make this a mindless porn fic, where the protagonist fucks every pussy in sight regardless of consequences. If it hasn't been made clear by now, Alex's presence in Equestria is having a profound influence on the ponies there: the Cakes are more kinky, Twilight is more open about sex, Rarity is now a Blowjob Queen where before she considered sucking dick beneath her, as a few examples.
As for Spike, now that he's been influenced and changed by the Human's touch, while his outer form has changed, his inner self remains the same, so he wouldn't take advantage of his sister, whom he loves dearly. IF he does have sex with her, it would be because he saw it as a way to make her happy, and not just to get his rocks off.
As I mentioned to another commenter, Spike still has a part to play in this tale.
I wonder if spike will be angry at the princess for manipulating her subjects for her own amusement or will the ponies be angry at her It was the very same reason why he left Ponyville do you want to make sure others liked him for him
Rainbow stared at her, then round at them all. Then she said, "But...didn't you say you hatched him during your entrance exam for Celestia's school? That was over eighteen years ago. That makes him at least pony legal age, if nothing else, right?"
Oh hey, you incorporated my idea into the story.
Since Twilight hatched Spike when she was in magic kindergarten, I'm imagining her as 23 years old in this story. What about you though author? How old do you think the Main 6 are?
Had to say by the nature of the story, I though the human will had his hand full…literally with Nightmare and probably other 2 or 3 mares. But this was unexpected in a good way, I don't think I ever seen a story where this kind of things happen and the human joins the fun in a more vanilla type of event while the rest of the cast has the whole table.
Nicely done, a good way to shine the spot light at everyone
10942401 That's a bit boring. Now an original idea. I have never seen an author wrote a clopfic assuming that chest floor is the pony equivalent of breasts as a secondary sexual characteristic. Teats as boobs is derivative. Push your horizons as an author.
Disclaimer: This is EXPLICIT pornography. No readers under 18 allowed! You have been warned!
Wow, you rated it mature and the word estrus is in the title.
Did someone actually think that an estrus was a foreign vegetable and complain the story was naughty? Wouldn't surprise me if someone missed all the clues.
From what clues scraped from canon, I'd guess the girls are all in their mid to late twenties. Applejack is probably the oldest, followed by Rarity. We know for sure that Fluttershy is a year older than Dash, and I'm guessing Dash is older than Pinkie, which would make her the youngest. Twilight strikes me as being younger than Applejack.
10942893 I added that disclaimer because I know there are underage readers on this site. While I and every other writer on this site ( or anywhere on the Internet, for that matter ) aren't responsible for parents who don't filter what their children are seeing, a stern warning for this particular story makes me feel a bit better. I write porn and adult subject matter FOR adults, as it fills a need in me to express my innermost thoughts and desires. There are some lines I won't cross because I (a) don't have that fetish or (b) don't see the subject as an expression of myself, but other than that, the playing field is rather wide.
I'm not sure how to feel about this chapter. The writing is still good and it has moments of genuine heart and humor, so there's no issues there. I'm not into works about swinging or orgies but that just comes down to a matter of personal preference. Princess Celestia doing something like this for a prank seems more scummy than funny. I really love the character stuff you're doing here with Spike so kudos to you for that. That being said, with the direction you're taking with Twilight, I think I can see where you're going with this and I can't say I agree with it. Nothing personal; I just don't like the idea of Spike and Twilight having a sexual/romantic relationship. Again, just personal preference and isn't meant to be an attack against the story. I'm still going to read it as it's too good to quit.
I'm an organic writer...I don't make an outline, but I do have a general idea of how the story should go. For me, the characters take on a life of their own when I'm writing, and I write as if they're directing me. I also get ideas for stories from odd places, and if they fit I incorporate them. For example, the scene where Alex fools Luna into giving him a blowjob started as a general idea, then became solid as I wrote it. I didn't know the exact details until the words were on the page.
As for an intimate relationship between Twilight and Spike...I've seen myriad writers do this, and few do it well. As of this writing, it's not my intention for them to "hook up," as the young people say...it would have to be quite intimate and romantic, and this isn't a Romance. It's a sexual Adventure with comedic overtones. Still, as I said, we'll see where the characters lead.
Concerning Celestia and her sense of humor, it will be revealed in later chapters that she's done this sort of thing before. I made it clear she knew the shenanigans the ponies would be up to on Nightmare Night, so this was her way of...helping things along. For certain, not all the ponies will see the humor in it (coughTwilightcough) but most will come away with Caramel's attitude: it was a special opportunity for a night of sex free from the worry of pregnancy, a concern of every stallion during estrus. I plan on showing that time of year to be a very fun time...and our plucky Human protagonist may have his hands full!
Actually, how caught up is Celestia wrt our magical human? Would she regret that she might have just started the revolution that changed the town's name to Pornyville?💃
10942571 What about dragon legal age? They obviously know fuck all about dragons, and the fact their so crazy about spike all of a sudden is fucked up and creepy.
People seem to forget that to spike, he was a kid only hours ago, and now all this shit is going on and all they care about is his fucking dick rather than the turmoil hes going through.
Spike seems to be the only one who sees their actions as weird and not normal so he got the fuck away from them, now their SEARCHING for reasons to track him down so they can jump his dick, which is all they fucking care about at this point, "spikes cock that", "imagine what he can do to a mare this".
I'd fucking leave too if the people I grew up around and the sister who raised me all of a sudden went nuts and wanted to damn near rape the shit out of me (cant forget that guard already raped him, but spikes cock is priority number one right?). This story has lost the story aspect and has become all about sex just for sex sake. Oh, can't forget spikes cock/dick whatever.
10948655 Yet we don't know pony legal age too do we? The show never explicitly stated how old the Mane 6 are. So for the sake of our sanity we automatically assume that every creature's legal age = human legal age. Being small does not mean being a kid (Example: Breezies or people with dwarfism). Spike has shown maturity in this story similar to that of an adult.
It was the powerful pheromones that caused them to want to jump Spike, but they held back because they know it's not right. They also did not search him just to jump his dick. They want to offer their support to him for what he is going through. The only one who wanted to jump his dick was Rainbow, but she was quickly reprimanded.
This story has always been Clop first, plot second. There are plenty of stories out there that focus on the plot with clop on the side (Ex: Everyday Life with Guardsmares).
10948655 I am truly sorry you feel that way, but I thank you for reading and for your interesting viewpoint.
I wrote this story as a fun, pornographic Adventure, mostly featuring a Human protagonist being seen as an outlet for heretofore hidden desires. Celestia pointed out that Humans each have a different effect on the ponies whenever they show up, and in this case, I had the idea that while he is immune to Equestria's magic, he would have an unintended effect on Spike, as he's a dragon. In later chapters, it will be revealed that Spike is not as young as first thought, and not just for the sake of sexual adventures. I would hope that amongst all the porn, there would also be a story, but it is first and foremost porn, and I make no apologies for that. Since that has become a problem for you, I don't blame you for leaving, but I hope you won't think less of me for my (in your case) failed efforts.
Thanks again for reading, hope I won't disappoint you next time!
A valid point, but one that's not left up to the imagination of the writer, due to FiMFiction's restrictions on portrayals of anthro sex. Although the legal age varies from state to state, the generally accepted age is 18, so writers have to conform to that standard. In this fic, I have taken pains to show all that are sexually involved to be of legal age, but apparently, that's not adequate for every reader. I thank you for your efforts to explain the scenario, but ultimately I recognize my shortcomings as a writer and accept that not everyone will enjoy my work.
he would have an unintended effect on Spike, as he's a dragon.
This makes me wonder what affect he would have on a female dragon. And other species. Gryphons, changelings, hippogriffs, whatever discord is (female version?, Eris I think). So many people to do, so many places to go.
10948210 Celestia usually has one or more of her agents report to her on any Human incursions into Equestria, for as was established in the first chapter they've been showing up for centuries. At the present time, she's just content to watch and be amused at Alex's sexual magic and has seen he's not like a few hostile Humans from before, so he currently has free reign with the mares of Ponyville.
Understand, Celestia has lived for a very long time and has experienced sex in every way imaginable, so this is an opportunity for her to watch her subjects (AND her former student) have some of the same fun she's had. It takes a lot to amuse a thousand-year plus year old Alicorn, so she's going to squeeze as much fun out of the situation as she can, so long as it remains safe.
I am rather confused. In this chapter, I was getting the impression that the ponies were anthro, because of the way you were describing the transformation at city hall, especially in regards to your description of thier boobs.
11406519 No, no...still ponies. The spell simply amplified their teats to larger-than-normal for the females, and greatly enhanced the males' members and stamina.
11518350 No, see what you should have said was, "...it is thoroughly disgusting to me, and quite a turn-off to me."
And the solution is very simple: the exit is always open, and you can make use of it anytime. The roughly...SIX THOUSAND other readers for this chapter alone won't miss you.
BUT...before you go, I have one more thing to say. (ahem...)
Mares like Bob Bon and Lyra hadn't waited for Twilight's announcement...as soon as they'd seen each others' boobs grow to massive size they'd lost no time sampling each of their treasures, quickly assuming the '69' position with a mouthful of tit...who knew when or IF they'd ever get this chance again!
Correct me if I am wrong, but I thought for pony they should be called udders, right?
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Technically, yes...but this is porn, so...BOOBS IT IS!
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Most clopfics us "Teats"
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Not when they're THIS big! WOOF!
So they can only get pregnant during heat season?
Why is tonight special?
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Teats. Cows have udders.
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Exactly!
For the Cakes, it's a special night as it's their first Nightmare Night after having the twins. As mentioned before, their libidos are in overdrive after their encounter with Alex, so they'd planned to partake in the usual festivities. Hence Mrs. Cake's slutty outfit and behavior.
I am somewhat surprised Alex's dick didn't seem to be affected by the spell. Then again him being a human must mean he is resistant to spells.
Overall, a really nice chapter. I'm glad Spike had a sense of honor and didn't take advantage of Twilight. I could imagine him gently pushing Twilight away if she was about to kiss him. He says "Twilight, no. You don't want to do this!" She cries, he hugs her as she cried in his arms.
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When I saw the chapter's title, I first thought Celestia was going to cast anthromorphic spell.
10942407
Oh ok.
I hope this doesn't mean Spike is out of the story entirely. I haven't really seen an adult Spike alongside a human in a story like this and there is interesting potential there! I would hate to see him removed from the story due to knee-jerk reactions from people who mistakenly believed it to be foalcon.
10942451
Spike has a part to play still in this tale...he has to come to terms with his new form, and what to do with it. Mares are quite consumed with his presence, and while he won't take advantage of anypony, he's not made of stone. With the possible exception of Twilight, he may just fulfill a few fantasies.
10942411
I have endeavored not to make this a mindless porn fic, where the protagonist fucks every pussy in sight regardless of consequences. If it hasn't been made clear by now, Alex's presence in Equestria is having a profound influence on the ponies there: the Cakes are more kinky, Twilight is more open about sex, Rarity is now a Blowjob Queen where before she considered sucking dick beneath her, as a few examples.
As for Spike, now that he's been influenced and changed by the Human's touch, while his outer form has changed, his inner self remains the same, so he wouldn't take advantage of his sister, whom he loves dearly. IF he does have sex with her, it would be because he saw it as a way to make her happy, and not just to get his rocks off.
As I mentioned to another commenter, Spike still has a part to play in this tale.
I wonder if spike will be angry at the princess for manipulating her subjects for her own amusement or will the ponies be angry at her It was the very same reason why he left Ponyville do you want to make sure others liked him for him
Oh hey, you incorporated my idea into the story.
Since Twilight hatched Spike when she was in magic kindergarten, I'm imagining her as 23 years old in this story. What about you though author? How old do you think the Main 6 are?
I knew I had a good feeling about you since the start of this story!
Fucking GREAT job on this chapter, and story. Love it all. Especially love the start, and the boobs!
Eh, this fic keeps getting farther and farther away from my interests. Prob gonna call it here.
Had to say by the nature of the story, I though the human will had his hand full…literally with Nightmare and probably other 2 or 3 mares. But this was unexpected in a good way, I don't think I ever seen a story where this kind of things happen and the human joins the fun in a more vanilla type of event while the rest of the cast has the whole table.
Nicely done, a good way to shine the spot light at everyone
10942401
That's a bit boring. Now an original idea. I have never seen an author wrote a clopfic assuming that chest floor is the pony equivalent of breasts as a secondary sexual characteristic. Teats as boobs is derivative. Push your horizons as an author.
Poor Twiggles, that's gotta leave a trauma.
Wow, you rated it mature and the word estrus is in the title.
Did someone actually think that an estrus was a foreign vegetable and complain the story was naughty? Wouldn't surprise me if someone missed all the clues.
Just curious
Monk
"Yes, I will eat the Fear Turkey." -Illua
10942571
I did, and I thank you!
From what clues scraped from canon, I'd guess the girls are all in their mid to late twenties. Applejack is probably the oldest, followed by Rarity. We know for sure that Fluttershy is a year older than Dash, and I'm guessing Dash is older than Pinkie, which would make her the youngest. Twilight strikes me as being younger than Applejack.
But that's all speculation.
10942893
I added that disclaimer because I know there are underage readers on this site. While I and every other writer on this site ( or anywhere on the Internet, for that matter ) aren't responsible for parents who don't filter what their children are seeing, a stern warning for this particular story makes me feel a bit better. I write porn and adult subject matter FOR adults, as it fills a need in me to express my innermost thoughts and desires. There are some lines I won't cross because I (a) don't have that fetish or (b) don't see the subject as an expression of myself, but other than that, the playing field is rather wide.
In any case, thanks for reading!
10942615
Thank you, and thanks for reading!
10942683
Sorry you feel that way, but thanks for staying with me as long as you did.
I'm not sure how to feel about this chapter. The writing is still good and it has moments of genuine heart and humor, so there's no issues there. I'm not into works about swinging or orgies but that just comes down to a matter of personal preference. Princess Celestia doing something like this for a prank seems more scummy than funny. I really love the character stuff you're doing here with Spike so kudos to you for that. That being said, with the direction you're taking with Twilight, I think I can see where you're going with this and I can't say I agree with it. Nothing personal; I just don't like the idea of Spike and Twilight having a sexual/romantic relationship. Again, just personal preference and isn't meant to be an attack against the story. I'm still going to read it as it's too good to quit.
All in all, good job so fair!
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Thank you for your input!
I'm an organic writer...I don't make an outline, but I do have a general idea of how the story should go. For me, the characters take on a life of their own when I'm writing, and I write as if they're directing me. I also get ideas for stories from odd places, and if they fit I incorporate them. For example, the scene where Alex fools Luna into giving him a blowjob started as a general idea, then became solid as I wrote it. I didn't know the exact details until the words were on the page.
As for an intimate relationship between Twilight and Spike...I've seen myriad writers do this, and few do it well. As of this writing, it's not my intention for them to "hook up," as the young people say...it would have to be quite intimate and romantic, and this isn't a Romance. It's a sexual Adventure with comedic overtones. Still, as I said, we'll see where the characters lead.
Concerning Celestia and her sense of humor, it will be revealed in later chapters that she's done this sort of thing before. I made it clear she knew the shenanigans the ponies would be up to on Nightmare Night, so this was her way of...helping things along. For certain, not all the ponies will see the humor in it (coughTwilightcough) but most will come away with Caramel's attitude: it was a special opportunity for a night of sex free from the worry of pregnancy, a concern of every stallion during estrus. I plan on showing that time of year to be a very fun time...and our plucky Human protagonist may have his hands full!
Actually, how caught up is Celestia wrt our magical human? Would she regret that she might have just started the revolution that changed the town's name to Pornyville?💃
10942571
What about dragon legal age? They obviously know fuck all about dragons, and the fact their so crazy about spike all of a sudden is fucked up and creepy.
People seem to forget that to spike, he was a kid only hours ago, and now all this shit is going on and all they care about is his fucking dick rather than the turmoil hes going through.
Spike seems to be the only one who sees their actions as weird and not normal so he got the fuck away from them, now their SEARCHING for reasons to track him down so they can jump his dick, which is all they fucking care about at this point, "spikes cock that", "imagine what he can do to a mare this".
I'd fucking leave too if the people I grew up around and the sister who raised me all of a sudden went nuts and wanted to damn near rape the shit out of me (cant forget that guard already raped him, but spikes cock is priority number one right?). This story has lost the story aspect and has become all about sex just for sex sake. Oh, can't forget spikes cock/dick whatever.
I'm out, good luck with the rest I guess.
10948655
Yet we don't know pony legal age too do we? The show never explicitly stated how old the Mane 6 are. So for the sake of our sanity we automatically assume that every creature's legal age = human legal age. Being small does not mean being a kid (Example: Breezies or people with dwarfism). Spike has shown maturity in this story similar to that of an adult.
It was the powerful pheromones that caused them to want to jump Spike, but they held back because they know it's not right. They also did not search him just to jump his dick. They want to offer their support to him for what he is going through. The only one who wanted to jump his dick was Rainbow, but she was quickly reprimanded.
This story has always been Clop first, plot second. There are plenty of stories out there that focus on the plot with clop on the side (Ex: Everyday Life with Guardsmares).
I hope you will find what you are looking for.
10948655
I am truly sorry you feel that way, but I thank you for reading and for your interesting viewpoint.
I wrote this story as a fun, pornographic Adventure, mostly featuring a Human protagonist being seen as an outlet for heretofore hidden desires. Celestia pointed out that Humans each have a different effect on the ponies whenever they show up, and in this case, I had the idea that while he is immune to Equestria's magic, he would have an unintended effect on Spike, as he's a dragon. In later chapters, it will be revealed that Spike is not as young as first thought, and not just for the sake of sexual adventures. I would hope that amongst all the porn, there would also be a story, but it is first and foremost porn, and I make no apologies for that. Since that has become a problem for you, I don't blame you for leaving, but I hope you won't think less of me for my (in your case) failed efforts.
Thanks again for reading, hope I won't disappoint you next time!
10949023
A valid point, but one that's not left up to the imagination of the writer, due to FiMFiction's restrictions on portrayals of anthro sex. Although the legal age varies from state to state, the generally accepted age is 18, so writers have to conform to that standard. In this fic, I have taken pains to show all that are sexually involved to be of legal age, but apparently, that's not adequate for every reader. I thank you for your efforts to explain the scenario, but ultimately I recognize my shortcomings as a writer and accept that not everyone will enjoy my work.
Boobs.
c.tenor.com/wPUbkhwfiuEAAAAd/curiosity-curious.gif You had my curiosity, but now you have my attention.
This makes me wonder what affect he would have on a female dragon. And other species. Gryphons, changelings, hippogriffs, whatever discord is (female version?, Eris I think). So many people to do, so many places to go.
This was a great read. Hot, sweaty fun, with nicely fleshed out characters and an actual plot.
Have a mustache.
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Thank you very much! I accept this high honor!
WE NEED MOAR CHAPTERS!!!!!
10956001
SOON...
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Is it Soon yet?
10966053
Have patience, young Padawan...soon will be soon...but not quite yet.
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https://youtu.be/s3SZ5sIMY6o
10948210
Celestia usually has one or more of her agents report to her on any Human incursions into Equestria, for as was established in the first chapter they've been showing up for centuries. At the present time, she's just content to watch and be amused at Alex's sexual magic and has seen he's not like a few hostile Humans from before, so he currently has free reign with the mares of Ponyville.
Understand, Celestia has lived for a very long time and has experienced sex in every way imaginable, so this is an opportunity for her to watch her subjects (AND her former student) have some of the same fun she's had. It takes a lot to amuse a thousand-year plus year old Alicorn, so she's going to squeeze as much fun out of the situation as she can, so long as it remains safe.
...and it might not...
This was a epiclly wild chapter.
I am rather confused. In this chapter, I was getting the impression that the ponies were anthro, because of the way you were describing the transformation at city hall, especially in regards to your description of thier boobs.
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No, no...still ponies. The spell simply amplified their teats to larger-than-normal for the females, and greatly enhanced the males' members and stamina.
11518350
No, see what you should have said was, "...it is thoroughly disgusting to me, and quite a turn-off to me."
And the solution is very simple: the exit is always open, and you can make use of it anytime. The roughly...SIX THOUSAND other readers for this chapter alone won't miss you.
BUT...before you go, I have one more thing to say. (ahem...)
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I spotted a typo here which is the names
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Fixed, thanks!